
Pirates' Golden Admiral
海贼之黄金提督
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 69k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
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309Recommends
5Fans
29Chapters
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It's pretty good. If you work hard, it's still possible to get into a high-quality product.
Let me put it bluntly, I can change the cover to look like an admiral. I don't think being handsome is useful in the world of pirates. People who write books now keep saying that male protagonists are good and female protagonists are like this or that. Take a look at the world of pirates. Those who are not ugly are all strong, but there are really not many who are handsome and strong.
What's going on? I just found out that I can watch the pirates in the past. Why didn't I update it? I didn't dare to give a vote.
HopeGrab Brother Ming's Golden Fruit and transform into a Golden Saint. I believe you will make better use of the Golden Fruit
No update in 5 days? ? ? What does it mean?
The author needs to pay attention to some details.
This book has great potential. But some problems have begun to be exposed. First of all, when it comes to shipbuilding, it is not that four years is not in line with reality, but it is not in line with the development of the protagonist. It is too delayed. After all, the author himself knows that staying in the East China Sea for one more day will increase the risk. Luffy is almost One Piece even after four years. And along with it, there is also the problem of the senior navy sent by the headquarters. The lieutenant general is about to come and cause trouble for the protagonist. After all, he just came here, and he must solve the problem, improve his prestige, and complete the mission. In fact, the transfer of Lieutenant General of the headquarters to Sihai is a downgrade process, so even if the mission requires it, if it is really the Lieutenant General of the headquarters instead of the level transfer in other sea areas, he will look down on the combat effectiveness of Sihai, and then come to Sihai and directly start clearing the mission targets, so that he can be transferred back as soon as possible. Moreover, the combat power of the lieutenant general of the main branch is indeed too high for the current protagonist. It is basically an instant kill level. Unless it is a weaker branch lieutenant general, the protagonist can compete a little. The lieutenant general is really not a cabbage. Even if he rises through seniority, he can still sit in the Grand Route. I hope the author can handle it well. Regarding the positioning of One Piece's strength, it is certain that the lieutenants are strong and weak, but it would be a bit ridiculous if the protagonist defeated an opponent of the lieutenant general level in the East China Sea. Even if the author doesn't want the protagonist to go to the Grand Line just yet, he shouldn't develop his own pirate group first, but go and conquer the potential talents in the East China Sea. Bato, if nothing else, even if there is no fruit, his luck is incredible. There is also Bato's childhood sweetheart, who also has the potential to make it into the new world, although she will be miserable. I can't think of other talents who are not members of the Luffy team, but it's best not to add any original characters, because they are not popular, and even if you use the system to recruit them, don't be original. I'm really looking forward to Donghai's dealings with a lieutenant general-level opponent, and I also hope to see something a bit more IQ-like. Crowe has great potential, because Oda said that he is the second most strategic figure in One Piece, the first being Beckman, the second-in-command of the red-haired group. It takes four years for the protagonist to build a ship. Don't really hang around in the East China Sea for four years. You can let the protagonist set off early due to certain things, and then ask Crowe to build the ship and sail to the Grand Line to replace it. Finally, let me give the author some ideas. In fact, when you fight a lieutenant general, you can divide your troops to fight. I don't know if the author has seen Liangjian. When Li Yunlong developed an independent regiment, he let his men develop on their own. In the end, the strength of the group was so strong that he became a division commander very quickly. The protagonist can also divide his men into several ship groups and let them compete with other pirate groups for development. At this time, original characters can be put on the stage. Not only can they develop their strength and train their men, but they can also increase the protagonist's prestige. By the way, the incoming lieutenant general will not be able to locate the protagonist's position. In the end, there is a decisive battle. It doesn't matter if you defeat the lieutenant general, or you don't. Anyway, it's a pleasure to serve as captains of a few soy sauce fleets, highlighting the difficulty of the battle, and then take advantage of the situation to head to the Grand Route.
Why are my grades so bad? I feel like they are much better than what most Pirates fans wrote.
It's so well written, but it would be better if you could add a final kill to Crick. The green pheasant is stupid when it comes.
It's so well written, but it would be better if you could add a final kill to Crick. The green pheasant in the province will be stupid when it comes. But I still say come on, author.
Probably going to Thailand.
Creek is really a perfect match with the Golden Fruit. In the future, you can use your own abilities to build the fleet shell, and then you can also get the ultimate move, the Treasure of the King, the Heaven and Earth Deviation Sword! Then came the transformation into sacred clothes. Tsk, Tsk, Tsk, Tsk, Tsk, it's a fortress.
The author went to fight with that stupid dog.