Inscription of Sin

This book is actually quite good to be honest, and I can understand the author's difficulties. It's a pity to end it like this. I hope it will continue one day. Please support it.

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A faint sense of future technology is put into the perspective of a little person. The description in the opening chapter can show the author's excellent writing skills, and the description of the characters' actions can also show the author's in-depth understanding of the characters. Continuing the previous book "Clown Game", it uses another perspective or point of view to express the world. But I'm looking forward to it. What kind of perspective can it bring if it's not from a neurotic perspective? This is a world where everyone's brains are full of holes. The biggest drawback is inserting, hey, hehe, I hope new friends can open up your imagination, and old readers, let us insert inserting. Below, are my expectations for the new book. I hope the plot will be more complicated, and as for the title, I hope it will be bolder. As for the article, I hope to add some new elements, such as horror and romance. Of course, the unscrupulous feeling of the original article cannot be lost. We are already facing hardships in life, so we hope to be unscrupulous in the book. Of course, Fatty Melon also has some fire of his own, and I hope it will continue to burn so that we can witness the emergence of a new god. As for the content of the book, emmm, I hope it will give us more excitement! This is the first author I have accompanied [a bit ambiguous], but really, I hope we will continue to go on and witness your becoming a god. It is useless to say more blessings, but there is still some gratitude. I have just lost my love recently and found that some people cannot always be with me, but I hope you can continue to stick to your writing and let me, let us, those who are still living in life see hope. Come on, Fat Melon, you have the strength, let us Guapi Army witness your efforts! Alright! Fat melon, please update quickly! ❤️

Give Fat Melon a first place 😁

I am a sand sculpture Anyway, no one saw it, sink quickly

Maybe we will never see Xu Baiyan again...

Xu Baiyan? Thinking of a story told by a chemistry teacher: Once I attended a wedding and saw that the groom's name was Xu Baiyan, I felt very strange until I saw the names of the bride and groom's parents - my mother was Li Qing and my father was Xu Lu, a chemistry teacher. When chlorine and hydrogen react, the phenomenon is a white flame~ I didn't learn it at the time, but I remembered it immediately because I thought it was a very romantic story.

This is a good book, and the current quality is better than 95% of the books on the starting point. Perhaps due to preconceptions, I saw the shadow of "Jian Ke" in the protagonist, the stone-like Xu Le. In fact, science fiction is a skin, and cyberspace is also a skin. The core is actually the word "xia". I hope the author will write better and better, come on.

Xu Baiyan, a reasonable young man, is finally back. Haha, is the old director still alive after being flooded for a year? Bai Yan has been lying in the hospital for a year. Will his back hurt when he wakes up?

Let me talk about my personal thoughts. So far, I think Fat Melon has been written quite well. How should I put it, the writing is good, the visuals are interesting, and the plot arrangement is also quite good. But there is one thing that has always bothered me, especially in the last few chapters, and that is, obviously such a major event (the killing) happened in the past, but since moving to a new city and finding a new job, why does it feel like the protagonist has been immersed in the sour atmosphere of love and forgotten about it? Of course, this does not mean that you should not enjoy a good life if you are filled with hatred. Fatty Gua also mentioned memories a few times in the article, but only two or three times (forgot), and each time was not an actively initiated memory, either drunk or comatose, and then brushed off. This makes me feel that the protagonist doesn't take this matter to heart at all. . . Once the feeling has passed, it is over, and all the old friends, good friends, sisters, old men, etc. Are left behind. Of course, it can also be said that the protagonist keeps all the painful memories deep in his heart. After all, the protagonist's stubborn character will not forget these things easily. But to be honest, I really didn't see it. The reason is as mentioned above. It feels that the protagonist is immersed in the present life and has no feelings or memories of the past. If it's not that I didn't get any special character and characteristics of the protagonist, or I didn't find any detailed description of Fat Gua, then it should be that Fat Gua is not balanced, and I hope Fat Gua can improve it. (Personal opinion, please delete if you don't like it)

I hope the author will not forget this book, because it will always be on my bookshelf... And in my heart

Xu Baiyan, you died so miserably😭😭 You are in the climbing stage of your life, how can you say that you are dead?

I kind of understand why this book was updated ten days ago. The punk style is excellent and the writing is top-notch. However, the protagonist grows too slowly and his personality is extremely inconsistent with the environment. After reading forty chapters, he was defeated by the protagonist. He is slow but not hot. He talks about abuse but not abuse. He is a bit pretentious and slaps in the face. He also has the atmosphere of a stubborn novice. The transformation is too slow.

I have been watching Madhouse for a long time, and there are always references to craftsmen, and then the compass, intentionally or unintentionally. Personally, I guess it's because of the book Eunuch. Fat Gua wants to renew this book. This obvious hint has appeared many times in the chapter, so at what stage can Xu Baiyan appear and when will the book be renewed?

The protagonist needs to study books and documents such as "Das Kapital", "The Communist Manifesto", "State and Revolution", "From the Kingdom of Necessity to the Kingdom of Freedom", "On Protracted War" and "The Internationale", and then integrate theory with practice to change the world.

Xu Baiyan, the flame generated by the combustion of hydrogen and chlorine is white. Could it be that his father's name is Xu Lu and his mother's name is Zhou Qing?

It is now November 23, 2021. I am still waiting for your Xu Baiyan to come back. I have been waiting since 19 years 🙂

Please continue writing, please 😭

Countless days and nights have passed since I followed this book in my childhood, and it has always left a deep impression on me. The first cyberpunk book I came into contact with, when I recall it, the picture in my mind is probably Xu Baiyan sitting on the steps of the building in the rain, looking up at the sky.

Do you remember Xu Baiyan, Fat Melon?

In the name of sin! ! ! ! ! ! Awsl

I've read more than a dozen chapters and it's very well written. It's a good book but it's not very popular. It would be nice to have some book recommendations.

Haven't you written it yet? It's been a few years, alas.