My Pirate Girlfriend

Well, my girlfriend has a similar system

The difficulty in this type of book should be the conflict between characters. I feel that the intersection between the protagonist and the characters in the subsystem is an important manifestation of the system's existence. Therefore, the promotion of the plot needs to take into account the intersection of characters. However, how to arrange the proportion of plot events and description of the intersection of characters is the most important test for the author. Because readers have different needs for the proportion of the two, it will inevitably affect the author's arrangement. At this time, I hope the author can stick to his own ideas. This story is the author's story. Arranging the plot for the readers' liking will certainly improve the performance, but it will also disrupt the author's original idea and pave the way for the plot to go crazy. So the author should work hard. What surprised me about this book was the handling of the intersection between the characters. On the contrary, the protagonist's abilities were not very attractive to me. Because the game characters' fighting methods have a framework, it makes it more difficult to depict the battle scenes. Judging from the few descriptions of battles, the author seems to have a hard time describing the battles. I hope the author can make breakthroughs in subsequent stories. Then looking at the setting of ferocious beasts, I feel that the author has not arranged the levels of combat power well, and I feel that the author is also a bit confused. I hope the author can construct a more appropriate combat power level in the future. With the recently updated content, I feel that the author's creative inspiration has faded a bit, perhaps because his enthusiasm has worn off a lot. At this time, it is necessary to follow the outline to fill in the content of the story. I hope the author can persevere and bring us wonderful stories. Come on, this is a story with great potential.

I read a similar urban novel (I won't mention the name) at Qidian. The author should have imitated that novel!

To be honest, I really like the character of this protagonist. But this golden finger is really bad. , It seems that as long as the women in One Piece are somewhat famous, they come to the protagonist to do anything. The personalities of the characters in One Piece have all been disrupted and changed by you, and they seem uninteresting and embarrassing. Forced to be funny there. It's good if only one system appears. If you do this, several more systems will appear. How to play? , We are here to see the protagonist. How do you write about other people who have got the system? Do you use one or two words to introduce other people's lives, or do you write it in one sentence, or do you not write it at all.

Is this a eunuch? The author is too unrestrained.

Already collected, One Piece: The Nine-Headed Dragon King Visits

I just want to ask, will Korean Entertainment update it? Looking forward to it!

The idea is very interesting. As long as the subsequent development does not lead to bloody palace fighting, it is not a big problem if it becomes popular. Also, the author should pay attention to the title of the book. This title is not very good. I clicked on this book after seeing it three times. The first few times I saw the title, I didn't want to click on it. The biggest problem with this book is to consider the compatibility between the Goldfinger style and the overall style of One Piece. To be honest, it is indeed interesting to give the female character a system to issue tasks to the protagonist, but the style is biased towards urban life or two-dimensional daily life. The battle with the Pirate King, friendship, passion, and comedy are not a good match. How to achieve reasonable compatibility is the most difficult problem.

I seem to have seen the exhausting theme. Several female protagonists have a system. They all publish tasks related to pig's feet and then become stronger. The pig's feet will also be rewarded.

Don't be a eunuch

(｀⌒´メ) If you have time to read novels, but don't have time to evolve into a 2-update beast, eat my salted fish thrusts.

Is there something wrong with the protagonist's IQ? If you don't understand what's going on with the system, why don't you think about it? Let's not say that the reader is from God's perspective, but from the perspective of the protagonist, Tina and the Empress both have their own roles in the original work. Both of the two "big figures" relative to themselves showed abnormal actions towards themselves. Wouldn't the protagonist think about why? The protagonist was also very vigilant and kept a distance from them every time, which shows that the protagonist has certain suspicions. However, there have been no less than three events related to the system after this abnormal event, but the protagonist refuses to think about it more? It is understandable that the author wants to have twists and turns in the plot, but it is too much to even think of such an obvious thing.

He came in when he saw Ezreal.

This amount of updates is forcing people to keep the book. I will definitely not read it while I keep the book, which means - the ticket is gone.

Entered the palace, never see you again, I came from the raging Hokage

Where is the great writer in the ninja world? Lost contact? ? ?