
Mitomonitis of Konoha
木叶之水户门炎
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 446k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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197Chapters
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I've been looking for a book from heaven and finally found one I can read.
This protagonist needs to see an awesome and reasonable hook. Otherwise it would be just fine.
Why do I have to add something? It's always this way.
. . . What the hell are you doing. Naruto World 20. 21 Poisoned. Can it be more reasonable? Think big. Why are you dragging Chinese mythology into it? Shouldn't you add Xuanyuan Sword, mana? . . Isn't it good to practice directly? . The 3rd generation Raikage used chakra to directly train the Thunder God Armor and at the same time trained his body to a very high intensity. But if you don't nourish your body, you will quickly become old, dead, and disabled. Goute uses the Yin Seal Chakra in his body to passively nourish his body. I can live over 60 without looking old without taking any initiative at all. It is obvious that I can live a very long time. . Are these invisible? . Naruto world. . The physical body is bound to water to death. . . Exercise is running. Palm pressure. . There is not even a system. You combine these things. . Level 6 is definitely not a problem. . . Kai's body is even more rubbish. The weight of the belt only covers 1/4 of the body area, which is not comprehensive at all. Bones can only be exercised passively. Also injured. . . . Is such a huge system loophole invisible? . . You just need to repair your physical system. At least it's level 6. . If you have a better imagination, can you physically experience the void? . Chakra is the combination of physical cells and spirit, and physical cells are nutrients. You just pulled him out and used it. . The ninja system has never been thought of at all. . Moisturize your body with chakra. . It just speeds up cell operation without thinking. . Mind is control. . Wherever your spirit is attached to energy, it proves that this thing can be controlled down to the smallest detail. . You can practice continuously. . Refined. . Eat food supplements. . Using chakra to feed back the body. . . . He is a cycle. . . The ninja system is refined. . He's the one who uses ninjutsu. The body must not be able to bear it and it ages quickly. . . Look at how hard it is to hit the flesh with just one hand. . Above 150 is definitely no problem. . Other ninjas? 50 On average?
Extremely poisonous. The first generation did not die. The battle was over. The second generation died in front of the first generation.
Do you write a little too many words? Others have at least 9 pages. There are more than 15 pages. You have 7 pages, 7 pages, 7 pages. Why don't you write 6 pages? Liuliu Dashun, are you worthy of the party and the people? Are you worthy of the Chinese teacher? Is it worthy of book friends? Don't you have a little bit of shame?
After thinking about it for a long time, I still don't plan to continue reading. At least you wrote the protagonist's name correctly. Mitomon's last name is Mitomon.
Author~Author~
Don't read the book review section. I've seen countless authors who were blown away by the book reviews and then mentioned the Ouchi Pass (ಥ_ಥ) Just concentrate on writing your book. Don't worry about no one reading it, as long as the word count reaches half a million words. It's easy to usher in one or more waves of readers~ ( ̄y▽ ̄)~* Cover your mouth and snicker
What, author, don't you know that the first Hokage died when the First World War broke out, and the second Hokage died at the end of the First War?
You said that from the time when you can practice chakra, that is, when you practice the chakra extraction technique, you can directly extract chakra using the method of cultivating celestial beings. Wouldn't it be awesome?
If you can't even defeat a wandering bandit, what kind of future is there for you?
I haven't read it yet, but I just looked at the chapter title and found out that after the funeral of the second generation, I also met the first generation? ? ? Didn't the first generation die earlier than the second generation?
It was only after the death of the first generation that the second generation implemented the plan against Uchiha. Why is the second generation dead but the first generation is still alive? ? ? ? ? ?
If the protagonist really pursues immortality, unless he can find a woman with whom he can live forever together in the future, it is better for the protagonist to be alone, otherwise he will be harming others and himself.
Personal opinion
After seeing the latest chapter, tell me your personal feelings. This Mito Gate Flame doesn't have any awesome abilities, and his ninjutsu is pretty average. It feels like he's just trying to make a fool of himself, without his own characteristics. Strong ability? Where is the strength? It doesn't reflect it very well either. It gives the impression that the strength is just a quasi-shadow until death. In the later plot, the strength of the three generations has declined as they age, not to mention the protagonist of this book, Mito Kadoen. How to fix it later. And now in these new chapters, the protagonist is completely playing with the personal feeling. There was absolutely no consideration for his own strength in the later stage. When your age is determined later, how do you adjust it? Now I have no intention of reading anymore. Now you have enough time to think of ways to enhance yourself and your later-stage strength, but you don't. Could it be that in the later stage, you force a hangup?
Forehead. . . Found a bug
1. Psychic beasts can contract with more than two kinds, instead of just one (Sasuke has a contract with Ryūchi Cave, and Psychic Eagle Garda)
It feels good to read this book without thinking, but it feels easy to have a myocardial infarction when reading it with your mind.눈_눈
If all the immortal arts in the three holy places are perfected, will they mutate directly? The protagonist no longer practices chakra, but directly practices natural energy.
I also want to ask who the heroine is. I hope she is the original character and not a new heroine.