Cultivation of Immortality Starting from Yuanying

Already invested and seeking support

This is my first book, and I still have a lot of questions. I hope everyone can point out the questions to me after reading it. I am not afraid that someone will ask questions, but I am afraid that no one will ask them. Thank you all!

Have you borrowed and paid it back? () How many years are left on the mortgage?

Clean the dust and be handsome!

Brother, your Nascent Soul transformation makes people feel like you are not even as good as a Qi training period. . . . . . . I'm drunk too

After reading a few chapters and making suggestions, I feel that it is better to write less expressions, as the text is too stiff. Either hey hey hey, it's hahahaha. Then add an expression at the end to make it easier to create a scene. There are also descriptions of the characters. They are all elders who are hundreds of years old. They cannot be middle-class people like ordinary old people in the world. Among the elders of a sect, which one is not a high-ranking person? Controlling tens of millions of lives, and having a high-level sect, it is impossible to be so happy, without any struggle, and a small public factory is divided into partisan factions.

Smile a little and the heart becomes clearer (under production)

Everyone can put forward good suggestions. Now is the time when the first book needs these suggestions. 👌

The writing is a bit poor and looks a bit embarrassing.

👌Don't worry, everyone, although this book still has many problems, it is my first book after all. I promise that it will not be a eunuch. It has to be written in a million words. Although the update may be slower, it will definitely be completed!

Let me tell you, this book is an Eastern fantasy novel of the alien continent type. It is not a traditional fairy novel, nor is it a fan novel. The structure of the world's cultivation system is similar to that of the world of immortality, but it is not completely the same as the traditional cultivation of immortality. This is specifically mentioned in the first chapter. And since this is the first book, I hope all book friends can provide valuable opinions, such as character descriptions and shortcomings. Thank you all!

Dust Cleaning

The artist said that the protagonist is too difficult to draw and cannot meet the author's requirements. It is still in production. 😢 I can only look at the online pictures.

The fifth disciple of Yue Mingxin, the young patriarch of a large family. Unfortunately, the family was in civil strife, which was later pacified by Yue Mingxin.

Yuan Ying's spirit transformation has no courage at all. After hundreds of years of cultivation, his mind is like that of a child. It feels like a child fighting and making trouble.

Worship it, have collected it, read it slowly, and work hard! Welcome to return and give advice!

The title and introduction of this book attracted me, but I prefer to see the display of power in different realms. I'm not very satisfied with it at the beginning, let's see what happens at the end.

Keep it up, keep looking after it while recovering from illness.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~