Imperial Heavens

I hope everyone will understand the author better, and I also hope the author will write according to his own ideas. If the author really wants to continue writing books, the selection of your first book will determine that you will not be able to become a god in one book. Then you can only take another path, and that is through the first book. Accumulate a group of loyal fans, and then as long as you don't commit suicide, you can try to transform based on this group of fans, and you can continue to write in the previous style, so don't care about cool things. People who want to read cool articles will basically not read this kind of subject matter, just write according to your own ideas.

It will be on the shelves soon, and I will give some brief opinions on the current plot. In general, the concept design and plot control of this book are very good. It is not novice or pretentious, and there are no big abrupt points. It is very comfortable to read. I also wish the author can achieve better results after it is put on the shelves. But there are still some small flaws. I'm still not happy with this, and I hope it can be answered in future plots. First of all, the supporting characters. The protagonist and Su Ting in the book are portrayed with flesh and blood. But the descriptions of several other families are far-fetched. As a big family with hundreds of years of heritage, its performance in the epoch-making actions was too mediocre. In fact, the protagonist's drunken incident at the beginning of the time travel is a big bug. As powerful as Black Stone, would he sleep in front of the hotel after drinking too much? The incident was still recorded in police files. As several other families, we should be aware of this in the preparations before the operation. I even think that these people should always monitor Blackstone, this extremely influential individual. But so far, no one seems to have any doubts about it. Except for the two girls, few people have tried the black stone, which makes me very strange. Then there is the protagonist. As an ordinary person similar to us, the protagonist's performance has always been average or above. But he just likes to say some dirty words to his death. He has already fallen out of favor with Su Ting, and later he also cheated on others. The performance on Sima Zhaozhao's side was even more strange. Not to mention being driven crazy by Sima, some of the comments were even childish. It doesn't match the overall style. Finally, there is the issue of other people's handling of the protagonist's unauthorized hooking up with the Battleship girl. This really puzzles me. In theory, a group of people agreed to abide by the rules and work together, but then the protagonist dragged an outsider in to disrupt the situation. In the end, everyone just pretended that nothing happened? These families are too obedient. Imagine you are invited to wash your hair with a few wolf friends (in fact, what they do now is much more dangerous than washing your hair). The initiator pulls a man from nowhere and says that he met on the road and wants to wash his hair together, so we can go together. Would you go in this case? I don't think so. What if this man is lax and talks about it everywhere, or even if he is a fishing law enforcer? The example may not be appropriate but the basic idea is this. I think the plot here is a bit rough, and it directly depresses the other families, which makes it look a bit uncomfortable. However, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, and I hope that the author can continue his efforts and create new brilliance!

If you have any suggestions about the plot or characters, you can leave a message here. I will listen carefully and work hard to write this book well. Thank you everyone!

I just finished reading the first ten chapters and decided to bookmark it. Imagination and details fly together, and the phenomena are all theoretical. The author constantly throws out new discoveries, then new theories, and then finds data to support it. Not long after it has been self-consistent, there are new discoveries and new theories... Spiral advancement. And we readers, like rabbits with a carrot tied to our heads, are tempted to follow along. I wish the author can go far enough, even if he can't eat the carrot in the end, it doesn't matter, the scenery seen on the road is more worth the price of admission😜

😊 The author's writing is beautiful and I feel the imagery is so strong.

Nice! It is indeed a good book that needs to be read with intelligence.

It looks great, just like reading a physical book.

Hmm... After reading the first chapter, I didn't find any connection with the empire and the heavens. I also thought it was a bit over-described. Then I read a few more chapters... This book is really good! !

It's better to keep it first, not to follow it (it's too uncomfortable to follow it). These early chapters will kill off a lot of newbies, and the quality of readers left behind will be guaranteed. The author's psychological descriptions are great, there is reason in the madness, and the ups and downs of the protagonist's emotions seem to be as stable as an old dog, but in fact they are panicking, one after another. Don't let such a big plot in the early stage be crushed later.

Authors must have their own persistence and don't be influenced by those who don't read books too seriously. I have the same opinion as the person above. Don't cater to novices. It's too late to cater to them.

It can be seen that the author may be able to become a god!

After reading the first 5 chapters, there are a lot of sufficient environmental descriptions, psychological descriptions and scene descriptions, which portray the characters very well and lead to a lot of suspense. I think this is a novel. The novels of Qidian now do not even have an environmental description, so they are not considered complete novels.

The author's writing is great. Although his wording and sentence writing skills are not top-notch, from the perspective of grasping the plot conflicts, he is definitely not a newbie in writing. I must learn from you in this aspect. The story setting is very novel. Although this kind of setting of impersonating one's identity is not uncommon, it is obvious that the author has not become cliché. At present, the protagonist is wandering among the major forces, and his life and death must be maintained in the hands of others. He doesn't know when he will be able to get rid of this constraint. Will continue to support. 😊😊😊

Is this considered brain-burning? I don't think it counts. Those who are used to reading Xiaobaiwen may just not be used to it. It's perfectly fine to watch slowly and use your brain a little. Maybe I'm too smart? If you can't even understand this, why do you need a bicycle? 🤐

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