The Infinite Uncle in Another World

The subject matter is very good, but it looks really awkward. First of all: a protagonist who has transferred to Templar, learned super serology and mutated hard qigong can't beat an ordinary veteran. I really don't know what to say. Although combat experience is very important, when I can kill you with one punch, it is useless no matter how much you do. Don't say that if you have power, you will not have speed. That is pure nonsense, unless you are King Kong Barbie. Second: You have used all the cheating methods mentioned above, and you still lied to me about not exercising too hard. According to the standards of people on earth, muscle damage is miscellaneous. So how do you, a knight from another world, exercise? With your standards, the most you can train is just a gym trainer, so why should you talk about breakthroughs? Third: Explanation for half a chapter of the novel. This is the most embarrassing thing. It doesn't matter if the progress is slow. After all, many novels are basically exciting in the first and middle stages but then fade away. But you are basically explaining what the hell it is, and you are all explaining it with earth thinking. It feels like there is a layer of cling film on the article, and there is no sense of substitution.

It looks dry. Marvel and Heroes can make a fool of themselves. The author can...

Who is the heroine? Isn't it just an uncle farming in another world? How boring!

The content and setting are pretty good, but unfortunately it's a bit dry. I want to read it but can't. It also has a lot of words. I recommend dividing it into more paragraphs.

One chapter a day is not enough! ! !

It is more like a manual than a novel. The author is accustomed to and focuses on explaining everything. In the absence of an overall system plan, his explanations can contradict each other wherever he wants to explain. Not only the power system, but also the terrain and maps can contradict themselves. Why did you write such an article? Are you satisfied with designing a world by yourself?

All readers like a protagonist whose IQ and ability are online. The butt determines the head. Naturally, if you are on the protagonist's side, you don't want him to be useless. Do you know how you feel in front of others? It feels like others can raise a dragon but you can only raise a pig. There are so many plug-ins that have to be raped by passers-by. What do you think?

The plot of The Variety Witch is like feeding people like flies. You can't control the half-crippled witch, but why should you first give her a favor to help her regain her youth? And then I can't even control myself. My persistence has always been like a joke.

I saw that 870,000 words of yours appeared in the Fantasy Weekly Recommendation, and I knew your book was a hit.

The story is a good story, but it is limited to a story. The author neglects that this is not a narrative, but a novel that needs to be enriched by the dialogues of various living characters or the thoughts of the characters. After reading hundreds of chapters, although it is a farming novel, it cannot be described in the form of a narrative. After all, those who read novels nowadays need a sense of immersion. This is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.