The Infinite Uncle in Another World

The premise is excellent, but it feels genuinely awkward to read. First: a protagonist who's upgraded to a Templar Knight, acquired a super serum, and learned mutated hard qigong can't even beat an ordinary veteran. I honestly don't know what to say. While combat experience is important, when I can kill you with one punch, all your efforts are useless.

It's a dry read; the author manages to turn two over-the-top, overpowered elements like Marvel and Heroes of Might and Magic into a rambling narrative. The author is... Well...

Who's the female lead? It can't just be some middle-aged man farming in another world, right? How boring!

The content and setting are decent, but unfortunately it's a bit dry and rambling; you want to keep reading, but then you can't. Also, there are too many paragraphs; I suggest breaking it into more sections.

One chapter a day isn't enough!!!

It reads more like an instruction manual than a novel. The author is accustomed to and focused on explaining everything, and without any overall systematic planning, the explanations are haphazard and contradictory, not only in terms of power systems but also in the terrain and maps. What's the point of writing such an article? Is it just for the self-indulgent enjoyment of designing a world for oneself?

All readers love a protagonist with both intelligence and skills. Your perspective is dictated by your own interests; those on the protagonist's side naturally don't want him to be useless. Do you know what kind of impression this gives off? It's like others can raise a dragon, but you can only raise a pig. So many cheat codes attached to him, yet he still gets wrecked by random passersby—how can anyone watch that?

The plot of "The Witcher's Tale" is utterly ridiculous. They can't even control a half-crippled witch, yet they offer her benefits to restore her youth? And then, she can't even maintain self-control—her long-standing principles are just a joke.

When I saw your 870,000-word novel featured in this week's top recommendation for fantasy novels, I knew your book was going to flop.

The story is good, but it's just a story. The author overlooked the fact that this isn't narrative writing; it's a novel that needs the dialogue and thoughts of various vivid characters to enrich it. Having read about a hundred chapters, although it's a farming story, it can't be described in a narrative style. After all, readers nowadays need to feel immersed in the story. This is just my personal opinion; please don't be offended if you disagree.