My Queen My Dragon

To be honest, I don't think the author needs to think that his writing is average. I'm quite optimistic about your book. And I feel that you do have the possibility of becoming a god. Your book has a very unique feeling - a thick background, a rich emotional atmosphere and the protagonist's mental journey. (Of course I may have missed something, this is just what I feel) The background is the foundation, which determines the future direction and length of the novel; emotions are the soul, and the fluctuations of various emotional atmospheres in the book are the fundamental factors that infect readers, and are what readers like to see the most; and the protagonist's mental journey is a hidden line hidden under the bright line of plot development. The changes and contradictions in the protagonist's heart are also an important aspect that affects the plot and infects readers. Every trace of the protagonist's struggles and changes will be the highlight of the book (I personally think that when emotions are aroused, action, expression, and language description can highlight the character's image more than psychological description. Of course, this is just my own point of view). From the perspective of a reader, I think you have done a good job. All you need is practice, which is training. Make your book, your ideas, words, and writing style more mature. Perhaps it is a good choice to absorb some useful opinions, ideas, and knowledge from various works. (Of course it's just a personal opinion. Even if you learn from it, don't let others influence your own uniqueness, otherwise you will lose more than you gain.) As your reader, I am looking forward to the moment when you become a god.

Why does the author think so? The score of a book is certainly an important indicator of the quality of the book, but this indicator is not absolute. I have read some very good books. The quality of the book itself is very high, at least first-rate, but the work itself is not famous. There are always various reasons why books are not famous, such as niche, slow popularity, etc. It's not that the work is bad, the fundamental reason is that there is no good opportunity. Maybe your work will be buried, but before that, please work hard. Dawn will eventually come, but more people fall before dawn. If you don't work hard yourself, no one can help you. Don't forget your original aspiration, I will help, and I believe all comrades will also help. We will be watching you from behind. It feels uncomfortable to be alone, but we will support you! Alas, the only pity is that I don't usually socialize much, so I probably won't be able to attract many people. I can only try my best, but I can't guarantee whether I can get it or how much I can get. All in all, keep going! If you have the chance, it might be good to read some books by modernist or realist writers. Speaking of which, Yu Hua's essay "Can I Believe in Myself" is okay, and it may have some reference for the author's creation.

Author, stop talking, they are all members of the Lolicon community, I feel so relieved

Explode The author is great, at least two updates are needed. I don't want to keep it any more. The books I have kept are all cold (｡˘•㉨•˘｡) I feel bad...

It would be fine if it were a Japanese manga, but the novel looks a bit awkward. I can't imagine people in this era being moved by modern virtues. After all, this is an era where massacres are common, and people simply do not agree with hypocritical words such as freedom, equality, integrity, and friendliness. What really matters is food and troops.

I'm not satisfied with the writing in many places before, so I will rewrite it, starting from [Chapter 255] to [Chapter 313]. Because I don't want to bother the editor to replace it every day, I will send the revised chapters to [Starting Point] for the works related to this book, that is, free of charge. After all the chapters are written, I will delete the articles related to the work and replace the VIP chapters together. There are 60 chapters in total. I will finish it as soon as possible. The story in the second volume will have a perfect ending. You can rest assured. A new book will also be prepared at the same time. After the second volume is finished, I will release the new book at the same time, at least I will give everyone an explanation.

It is impossible for the author Ji to evolve into a second-shift beast or a third-shift beast. After raising it for three months, it only has about a hundred chapters, so it is impossible to expect her (yes, it is her) to be a first-shift beast. So everyone can pray like me for the author Ji to dress up as a girl. No black stockings or miniskirts, just a bunny girl costume! ~~~😁

Perhaps our author has not yet felt the joy of being dressed as a woman? The update is so slow. Have you seen the Lolita dress in my hand? I'll send it without updating it.

To be honest, I think your writing is very good.

The male protagonist is too young, can he cry at anything he sees?

I like your book (but I am not a lolita person😊)

Come on, come on, I hope you won't be a eunuch 😁

Alas, it feels sad somehow

After reading so many chapters, I'm still shouting slogans: Farming and growing technological trees is the way to go.

See the latest chapter, is this a romance novel?

I remember I'm 22 today. Miss Tianyu, please wear this Lolita dress, white stockings, 😍

Long time no see, I keep it on the bookshelf

Another book is left to die on the bookshelf