The Manufacturing Empire in the Mountain Valley

It was pretty boring, lacked any exciting moments, and the plot progressed too slowly! Otherwise, it was alright…

The title of this book reminds me of the technologically advanced nation nestled in the mountains years ago.

😆The word count in each chapter is too short; it's not satisfying at all.

A book started in 2018, using the same formula for 10 years, and padded out to the word count of 20 years. This book is completely unreadable, from logic to writing style, from story to characters, it is utterly worthless.

They even said that all the giants have blood on their hands and that they are ruthless and unscrupulous. Giants have plenty of legitimate ways to suppress competitors, so why bother with backroom deals? Are you trying to apply China's national conditions to the United States? Or is it the foolish argument that all crows are black? Are you making excuses for doing dirty things?

The author is incredibly naive. Back then, factories in remote mountain villages were relocated from first- and second-tier cities to the depths of the mountains due to international circumstances. These factories employed entire teams of university-educated researchers, and their skilled workers were all highly qualified. Do you really think they just hired villagers?

Seeing you launch your new book fills me with emotion. It was September 2014, and now it's 2019, almost five years ago.

The writing felt off towards the end. I skipped around while reading, and there was no more research or manufacturing involved. Out of over 300 chapters, the product development was just rehashing old ideas, and there was a ton of romance (or filler). They spent countless chapters on the Canton Fair and still hadn't gotten into the story. Honestly, author, could you please cut out some filler?

After reading the synopsis, it seems like the characters are either idiots, special forces soldiers, or just weaklings or slaves. Can't they be a little more normal? The era of overpowered protagonists should be over.

I gave up. I read halfway through and the revisions didn't change anything, so my lustful thoughts just kept getting stronger. The whole text had too much internal monologue and was too drawn out. Every sentence was padded out with long paragraphs, making the whole book feel empty and uninteresting.