Pirate's Nian Nian Fruit

I really don't want the protagonist to join the navy, as if it's stuck in his throat. Joining two major organizations before he goes to sea is like having a shackle around his neck. This is not free at all. The same goes for Nami. Rather than saying this is a plot, it's more like saying that the protagonist is walking on a chain. Nami is just an excuse.

This is the first book for a newcomer. Many places at the beginning are indeed very blunt and the characters have broken personalities, but please don't scold me, okay? If you like it, just watch it. If you don't, just click the cross button. Please, brothers, please stop trolling.

Now everyone dares to write novels!

Why is the plot driven by the "system"? This "system" is so versatile and humane. I think it would be better to change the protagonist to someone who is not so funny. Anyway, as long as a passerby with a good will can become a god with the help of the "system", even if he is not a time traveler, it will not have any impact, and maybe it will be more interesting!

Does the author not know what devil fruit powers are?

The speech on the execution platform was simply poisonous. How on earth did a guy who trumpeted his love for revolution end up in the Navy. Are the navy and cars all stupid? There is also the option of joining the revolutionary army. Isn't it too brainless to ask someone who just said a few words and hasn't been hunted down by the navy to join the revolutionaries? If it is so easy to join, then the revolutionaries will be riddled with holes by CP.

Why can't that be said? That's great.

Luffy became the general staff of the Revolutionary Army before he even went to sea 😰

Isn't the Nian Nian Fruit the ability of the cp0 captain?

I was poisoned by the comment section before I even read the novel.

Wow, I can finally comment, this book is great! I like it very much, it would be nice if the author updated it more quickly!

It's green, it's green. Perona must have been secretly raped by Leiter, but she didn't dare to say it. Unexpectedly, Leiter was the hidden male protagonist. Robb was responsible for fighting and finding girls on the ship, and Leiter was responsible for having sex.

Why do some books have a character column and others not?

This book is very well written! As for the fan fiction in One Piece, this book is okay, although it has some pitfalls in the later stages. The finishing touches are not good. But overall it's still very good.

I couldn't stand it after reading one or two chapters. There are so many times in two chapters. Damn it.

In the introduction, does the protagonist of 175 jump up and hit them on the knee in One Piece?

In order of preference: Navy>Revolutionary Army>World Government>Celestial Dragon>Pirates Also, don't be like a teddy who always wants to get married, okay? ! The sentence "I want you to be my woman!" Has dissuaded many readers!

I don't say it very nicely. There are no other problems in this book. The ability setting is pretty good, but the main character is written like a fool. Not only does he not use his brain, but he is blindly confident and makes himself die. Then he relies on sudden and inexplicable cheating. It feels like there is no sense at all and is dominated by emotions. When he gets the upper hand, he doesn't know who he is. He is an exaggerated one. I think it's okay except for the main character.

The strongest one is probably Im-sama.

This resume is a fruit of creation, right?

The author should continue writing, I thought there would be a Naruto chapter, a Bleach chapter and so on in the end