Pirate: If I Don't Die, I'll Fill up the Overlord Color First.

Are you crazy, being killed by the navy so many times and still joining the navy? Picture what? It's so poisonous that I specially ordered a chapter for the purpose of commenting.

I couldn't stand it after watching it. It's extremely poisonous. The protagonist's golden finger has a huge advantage and is completely unnecessary. How about the pride of the strong? I told you not to be careless when I left Impel City, and I used all six types of Haki. However, I was still fighting with a bunch of people. The entire combat power fluctuated according to the author. There were too many poison points. Poison testers are welcome to try it.

I subscribed to a chapter specifically just to write a review. Don't the authors respect the original work when writing fan fiction? The timeline is wrong, the characters are wrong, and the logic is wrong. I can't stand it after reading a few chapters. Do you know why the three generals are called navy monsters? It's because they broke the navy's hundreds of years of records when they graduated from the navy elite training camp. In terms of strength, they are not on the same level as the second place. What is less? The school level is nonsense, they are already on par with ordinary lottery winning levels, and Akainu, Kizaru, and Aokiji are not in the same batch at all. They are about ten years apart in age, and they both joined the navy halfway. They are already strong men, and their positions are now at least rear admiral. Aokiji and Kizaru already ate Devil Fruits when they joined the navy. Is the author just looking at a pirate and writing about it to make money in the fandom? ! There is also the immortality characteristic of the protagonist. Please, brother, do you know what immortality means? Not to mention that Garp will not reveal it, the navy who captured him in the first place will definitely reveal it. After searching for Namor for many years to find the fruit of the World Government surgery, is it possible to let such a freak go? ! If someone else kills you, you can't bear it. Why, if Garp kills you, your physical strength will increase and you will be grateful? Let's divide the total into people? Standing and acting? ? !

He was killed dozens of times by the navy at the beginning, which was the kind of death that completely experienced the pain of death. The key is that the author also said that the overlord was awakened by this pain and unwillingness, and then turned around and joined the navy? I stepped on the horse and it split open. No normal person would be able to do such an operation after being treated like this. Chapter 3: Poisonous Hair. . .

I can't stand the 175 pictures anymore, so I suppressed them forcefully. The author may feel that he needs frustration to make the protagonist grow, but I just spend money to read the book for the pleasure of reading. The author has the freedom to decide how to write the book, and I also have the freedom to continue to spend money to subscribe to Sihemu.

The garbage protagonist is still thinking about the Navy after coming out of Impel Down. The most disgusting thing is that he uses Sabo's news to force Ace to join the Navy. Everyone has already made a choice. Are you still forcing him by saying that you have to give him a choice? It's disgusting, garbage, and a complete garbage. Why didn't a person like Tui die in prison from the beginning? He was speechless, and his power was given to the most useless person.

After reading three chapters and retreating, the protagonist's aura is not as big as usual, and he kills the slave owner. He understands that he can survive, but he doesn't understand how rare a weakling like him is in the world of pirates? I won't tell you how long it took to get to the shampoo field. It's okay to choose the naval route instead of silent development, but to be executed for offending the Celestial Dragons, to survive being exposed as someone with no Devil Fruit ability, and to force Garp to save the day, how much do you look down on the ambitious and strong men of world conquest and pirates? Is it difficult to control the protagonist with just a dominant character? Just not dead. In short, the aura was full at the beginning, and I think it was pushed horizontally throughout the whole process. All members of the navy are righteous and help the protagonist cover up. CP0 is full of waste. The world government pretends to be deaf and ignores this weakling protagonist. If he doesn't die, it can be more valuable than the fruit of the surgery, right? 😰

In the fourth chapter, I couldn't hold on anymore. In the beginning, I offended the Tianlong people and was tortured by the navy. I tried all kinds of death methods and still didn't die. I also awakened my overlord color? As soon as Garp appeared, he was conquered in one second and then followed Garp to become a navy 😂😂😂 I can't stand this kind of plot without complaining 😰 How did the author write it? It was also recommended by the editor. Why did the editor recommend this kind of book? ? ? I didn't even read the rest, I didn't even make it to Chapter 5.

A lot of passers-by felt quite explosive after reading this article. It has not been more than ten years... A blood-threaded person really can't write this feeling.

The author's start was too top-notch. He was tortured like a dog by the navy, then taken away by another navy, and then joined the navy. I can only say that such a top-notch plot is not worthy for a loser like me to watch.

I made the most basic mistake of changing the combat power by magic, but the point is, this is a second creation, changing the original combat power by magic. How can we continue reading the novel you asked us to read: Chasing Pirates? Two years ago, I beat the Golden Lion. Two years later, two were equal to the golden lion (I feel that the folding method is not enough). Kill 15 times to reach full status. The golden lion will not rest in peace until death.

I usually don't post reviews, I just don't read if the writing is not good, but what's going on with the monthly votes for this book? I haven't read 5 chapters, why are there so many monthly votes! Are book lovers' tastes becoming more and more unique? Subscribe to a chapter specifically for this passage.

How did this thing get to the ninth place in the light novel?

It's so disgusting. A pirate is not a pirate, a navy is not a navy. As a marine, he pees in the same pants as a pirate. It's disgusting.

The protagonist was beaten to death once by the Celestial Dragons and sixty times by the Navy. After joining the Navy, he was treated like a dog by the Celestial Dragons. (Aha, are you laughing?)

You showed me what servility is. My friend was killed by the Celestial Dragons. He was killed by the navy 60 times. He turned around and joined the navy in the name of training himself. You are so awesome. I've seen it all.

This is the first time I have seen such a rubbish novel. The writing style of elementary school students is all the author's private goods. It's a history within a history.

Damn it, subscribing is a waste of money.

This is the most historically interesting novel I have read on Qidian. This kind of mindless historical novel should be published in Abolition Lufa. Don't insult Qidian. Com here.

Hey, in order to continue to make bad money, you can tolerate it. There is no difference between the family being destroyed and the family being wiped out. You have the strength to not take revenge, just to change it according to the original plot 😅😅😅 It's also difficult for you.

A book friend said it very well, 💩There is gold mining. I hope everyone will listen to the advice to give up immediately after reading this comment. As a pirate fan, not only do I not understand the original work; From the perspective of ordinary novels, the logic is as messed up as shit. The same routine started from the first chapter to more than 200 chapters In order to create excitement, I stole quotes and plots from dy and ks short videos The language is neither Chinese nor Western, rigid and stereotyped🤢🤢🤢 Function It's so lame🐶💩, it copied the plot of One Piece, and I don't even know what the protagonist is doing, and the slogan of justice is shouted loudly, but in fact nothing has changed, it is exactly the same as the original plot🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 Invincible flow can't be written well either, the whole book I brag about how awesome the protagonist is and how scheming he is, but in the end, after Chapter 150, he is still fighting back and forth with little Karami. After being tricked by the Five Old Stars, he even said "admit his mistakes" and poisoned him to death. Such a good trick will make you waste it and you will eat a lot of useless fruits. It gives people the impression that the author has no outline and just randomly selected a fruit. As a result, when he encounters a better fruit later, he says "I am already strong enough, so I won't eat it." Are you going to die?

Just to throw in my two cents and comment, is it a no-brainer to write a book these days? He looks domineering and has no domineering look at all...

Shen Nong is here, Tuo Tuo's reply. If you can read one chapter of Jun Tuo, you are considered awesome.

The protagonist is crazy. He is indeed crazy. He has been killed by the navy so many times before, but Garp is willing to be a dog to the navy with one sentence. Why is your madness so worthless? It makes me sick. I thought he was pretending to join and then escape, and then kill the Draco navy. I didn't expect this? I want to wash my eyes after watching it

More than 100 chapters and more than 400 comments? Does it look good? Brothers? Reply!

The period when they were imprisoned in the Impel Down City was extremely poisonous, and a feudal lord who had established a separate territory was exposed to the danger without any precautions. And after the protagonist was assassinated, the power he had developed before was equivalent to being abolished. So what does the protagonist do with so much effort?

It can only be said that the author has a great love for the navy and soldiers. The previous one was okay, but this one directly deviates from the basic logic of the world. Immortal, join the navy? Well. . . I have a basic question. If you are a ruler and you know that there is an immortal person, do you have to see whether he is a piece of shit or not? Then as this piece of shit, shouldn't he run farther away and stay here for now? As anyone else, would your first consideration be not to have anything to do with him? It can be seen that the author admires soldiers very much. No problem, then you give him a slightly more reasonable appearance setting, start against the will of heaven, offend the Celestial Dragons, and be executed by the navy. Garp insists? It may be that I'm overdoing it, but I can't stand it. Anyway, I must be full of passion if I'm not going to die. It's better to be a wild dog than a domestic dog.

The protagonist is so stupid that Chapter 180 is too exciting. Later, he starts to suppress his fighting power for more than ten years and cannot master the knowledge. He can't commit suicide if he cuts off his hands. It's a waste of money.

There are only five words to describe the comments that come in when you subscribe to a special subscription. It's so fucking disgusting.

What a terrible book. And there is no level at all, pure AI. I subscribed specifically to scold him, so don't read it.