My Hero Academia: Taijutsu for a Living

I read it in one go. It's so awesome. Please take a good rest and try your best to climb over the wall.

Big cheers for the author＾0＾~

There are only a few of my British fandoms, and there are even fewer who can write as authors. Today's vote is gone. I will vote tomorrow. Come on 😁

I read some messages in the comment area, and I also searched online for some analysis and reviews of the "Woying" anime. As far as opinions or suggestions are concerned, I think the opinions or suggestions themselves should be divided, such as from the general direction to the whole to the local and finally the details, that is, the process from big to small. Looking at the current forty-five chapters, I don't see what the author's central idea is or what he wants to convey. [My Hero Academia: The correct way to interpret the plot, just one point] https://mq. Mbd. Baidu. Com/7jxt2uq? F=cp I don't know if the author has read this article. I hope the author can find his own direction from it. Secondly, overall, the author's description is not very good in some places. He just briefly explained that I understand what the author is trying to say, but the details need to be strengthened. Since the author is a newcomer, it's good to work hard on this aspect slowly. After all, we don't have the ability to become fat in one bite. Thirdly, judging from the author's current writing of "Wo Ying", the author intends to follow the original work, so the author needs to think clearly whether to continue to follow the original work or to find a different path at a certain point in time. But no matter which one the author chooses, each chapter must be very detailed or interspersed with some side plots, so that it can be as fast as the original work as much as possible, and if you find another way, you can return to the main line of the original work if you want. This still depends on the author's own judgment. Finally, it's the details, characters, personality, and fighting. Like Midoriki, he can't fight, but his brain is good! Moreover, the new class that the author creates for the protagonist must have an intelligent person in charge. So details matter. Come on, author↖(^ω^)↗

Author, let me give you some of my own opinions. ① You don't know Woying very well. For us viewers, we don't need to know too much, but for an author, if you want to write fan fiction, you must have a thorough understanding of the anime. For example, when Uncle Ou comes to find the protagonist, I think it is a bit bad. According to Uncle Ou's character, he is not very good at finding the protagonist, so you don't need to arrange the scene here. ②The character of the protagonist is a bit confusing. Sometimes he is funny, sometimes he is indifferent, and sometimes he feels like a middle-aged boy. I hope the author can determine the character of the protagonist. ③Some plots make people feel that something is wrong after watching it. For example, after the death of the uncle, the behavioral description and psychological description of the protagonist feel too sudden and a bit too much. I hope the author can pay attention to it later. (This is just my idea, without any meaning, a comment from a 7-year-old bookworm.)

Give you a vague image

Why is it a eunuch? It's a very interesting novel. Even if the eunuch at least says it.

These chapters are poisonous. Brother, these chapters of yours are comparable to the original plots of Wo Ying's animation. It feels inexplicable.

First: The author should go back and correct the typos. Occasionally one or two are okay, but too many typos are very discouraging. At least the names of the characters should be written correctly Second: Character issues and character backgrounds. It would be better to explain them in a single chapter. For example, Uncle Peng and All Might are very strange br> Third: Addressing issues For example, the name Miyazaki Ha. Only very close friends and family members can call "Ha". Most people call "Miyazaki" and girls will call "Miyazaki-kun" That's all for the time being. I will add more in the future

Are you a eunuch? It's a rare good book

Did the author suddenly die while writing this?\(ﾋ•ω•ﾏ)/

Even though we can never meet each other physically, our hearts will still be in love with each other

I don't know if it will be blocked, but at least it is tangible.

In fact, what I want to say the most is that you must have chakra to get the Eight Gate Dun Armor. The principle of the Eight Gate Dun Armor is to use chakra to break the eight major acupuncture points of the human body to stimulate the human body's potential, thereby obtaining a large amount of chakra and a certain degree of physical strength and toughness (mainly in order to be able to withstand the sudden increase in chakra, as well as the muscle or physical strength that allows the chakra to run, so the Eight Gate Dun Armor tests physical strength. Otherwise, even if it is opened, the body will be broken by the chakra and nine times out of ten, it will lead to death). The reason why the power increases so much is because a large amount of chakra can increase the destructive power of the body (the simplest and crudest one can cause great damage to the body, and the body will suffer more or less losses when a large amount of chakra flows). Referring to Tsunade's Kaili Fist, there is a certain amount of chakra to increase the physical strength and ensure that there will be no damage within the body's endurance range, which requires extremely high chakra control. The chakra of the Eight Gate Dungeon is relatively violent because it breaks through the human body's potential, and most of the Taijutsu specializations have a small amount of chakra and barely enough control (you can climb trees and tread water), and even with extremely strong control it is unlikely to be able to do so. The amount of chakra produced by the Eight Gate Dun Armor is too high. For example, you can control it perfectly out of the original 100. Then 200 is almost 90%, and 500 is considered 50%. But the Eight Gate Dun Armor is 7.8 Times higher than ten or hundreds. The multiplier of chakra increase and control are inversely proportional. If you add 1 times the difficulty factor later, the increase in chakra will be geometric. The first 5 doors are okay, but the last 3 doors and 1 door are exaggerated.

Let's talk briefly. First of all, there is the issue of style. The author follows the taijutsu style of my fans, that is, the physical style. The character of the protagonist he creates is mainly simple, a little dull, but very reliable at critical times. ① The passionate style of physics flow has not been brought out. This is the biggest problem, especially in usj. The battle is indeed very fast, but the pace you describe is faster, and it goes by in a snap. It neither fully describes the emotions of the little heroes and others watching the battle, nor does it describe the protagonist's battle more vividly. It's like a gust of wind. It just blew past. But how did it blow? You didn't even bother to add an adjective. You just said the wind blew past. Is the plot of USJ so unimportant to you? The key is that the author did not use the usj incident to highlight the shining points in the protagonist's character and the passion of the physical flow. ② Regarding the foreshadowing issue, I suggest the author revise the first few chapters. Why do you want to be called Uncle Peng? It's too Chinese, not to mention anything else, but in terms of the sense of immersion, it's very poor. After all, the protagonist is a pure neon person in this life. If you say that I can accept fellow villagers helping fellow villagers, this is really a drama. Why did All Might suddenly reveal Uncle Peng's name? Earlier, when the protagonist left and refused to be Uncle Peng's child, you could definitely add an additional plot of Uncle Peng calling All Might, and add an additional detail of a cough or other illness (maybe I didn't notice it), but the foreshadowing should be focused and divided into separate sections. ③The Bakugou part is very embarrassing. In the original book, Bakugou can survive on his own, and Midoriya will also help Bakugou. This is their own business. The protagonist's intrusion like this is simply... Destroying the cp?