Myth Oven

The setting concept is very good, but the writing style is flawed, especially in the last two chapters. The author loves the words "of course" so much that I almost spit it out. In addition, is "Earth Fairy Road" your trumpet? The setting of that one is also okay, come on

I've only read a few chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist has lived in the world for so many years. Even many common sense in the world don't know that he has been embarrassed repeatedly. His character and IQ are flawed. He shows compassion indiscriminately, especially if he doesn't have enough ability to protect himself. How can he still survive?

What the hell is the latest chapter? The turning point is too sudden. . . .

If the protagonist loses to the mage, he may become the mage's puppet in the maze. It's scary to think about it!

I looked at the chapter title and felt something was wrong. Then I came back and looked at the author's name, and it turned out to be this author. I felt chilly in my heart, and I didn't dare to look at it.

1. If you like to read the kind of counterattack novels, it is better not to read it. The kind of protagonist who goes into heat when he sees a sow and can't wait to see a sow is not included in this book for the time being. 2. If you like to watch the kind of arrogant and outrageous movies, it's better not to watch them. The kind of movies that kill other people's whole families if they don't like them, and the whole story is about killing and killing. The plot has not appeared yet.

Did you see a lot of people talking about poison in Chapter 7? How indifferent are you? Just like when you see your compatriots encountering this kind of situation abroad, do you look on indifferently or do you want to understand the situation and help? ? ? Do you know what it feels like to meet a fellow countryman in a foreign land? What's more, they are both time travellers.

Somewhere in a secret place, in a dark room, several people were sitting around. An old man with a strange appearance sighed softly: "The imperial court is so powerful, what can I do? Fortunately, I, a member of Chengtian Dao, discovered that outsider. According to the plan, perhaps the day of overthrowing the imperial court and reviving our Dao is not far away!" The woman on the opposite side gently nodded and said: "As long as we find the lost treasure box, we can open the world where the spiritual energy is exhausted and the Taoism is at the end of the world. At that time, the two worlds will collide and the power of the other world cannot be poured into this world, causing the gods and ghosts to turmoil! The status will fall!" "We must let these gods and ghosts repay our blood debt with blood to repay our hatred for thousands of years!" "Even if the world that gave birth to me falls into the end of Dharma because of this, and the path of cultivation is cut off, I won't hesitate!!" ... I can't make it up anymore. Can anyone with writing skills give me a continuation?

I think it is very simple for the protagonist to really want to end the rule of heaven and the dynasty. Develop productive forces → ideological enlightenment → throw out liberal ideas → put forward the slogan that all people are created equal → destroy the ruler's natural rights basis → take advantage of troubled times to develop immortality → extensively enhance the personal strength of the public → expand liberal ideas → put forward the slogan of equality between humans and gods → break God's absolute unified leadership of the world → establish an immortal world dominated by liberal ideas → develop immortality as much as possible Productivity and personal strength → Due to the lack of centralized and unified leadership, problems within the Immortal Way are allowed to arise → throw out democratic ideas → use political means to regulate the chaos in the Immortal Way world → win the support of the beaten Shinto and establish the Immortal Court → integrate Shinto resources, improve the Immortal Court system, and develop a prosperous, democratic, civilized, harmonious and beautiful new era Datong society → replace the Heavenly Court with the Immortal Court and unify the Shinto with the Immortal Way → further expand the scope of the Immortal Way and unify all the avenues into the Immortal Way. The general context is: feudal society→capitalist stage→imperialist expansion stage→socialist reform→socialist system→communist society

Reward 10,000 for a little thought

Write it down and write it as County Captain?

The author makes his own settings, and the things he writes change repeatedly. The author's book is still good, but the protagonist's realm fluctuates, and the protagonist's magic weapon sometimes contains seven Chaos Beads and sometimes one Chaos Bead. I wonder if the author has a poor memory when writing books. . . . . .

Either copied or co-written by the studio, it is inconsistent and full of errors and omissions.

The beginning is really poisonous. Some people say it's like meeting a fellow countryman abroad. Shouldn't you help him? But the plot written by the author is that you meet a fellow countryman abroad. He was parked illegally and was given a ticket by the police. Then he drove the policeman and killed him. In this case, the protagonist can still save him and even pull him to run with him. I do know that the plot is poisonous, and the protagonist also has cerebellar atrophy 🤫

There are many poisonous points in this book, but they have little impact on the reader. There are also some pleasant points, but only a little bit. The author's writing style is actually not outstanding, but he is good at golden mean and has a very good grasp of the word count. When reading, it feels like ""tasteless"", so I should give it up. It's a pity (I can barely keep my eyes clean while passing the time), and the food is tasteless (I don't want to read it after reading a few chapters, but I have read other good ones. Although the Qidian platform has thousands of books every day, most authors estimate that Chinese is taught by physical education teachers)...

This is no longer cultivating immortality, but cultivating the brain, and the brain has not been cultivated yet.

This book can be completely discarded. The male protagonist will be replaced later.

Xuyiweiyi

? ? ? I just read the beginning. Chapters 7 and 8 are really hard for me to understand. I can understand saving the time-traveler, but after seeing him killing officers and soldiers, why did he help him escape? Will you join him in fighting the chasing villagers later? ? ? I have lived here for so many years, so I am considered half a local, right? I still don't know why I want to save such a person. It's okay if I save him. Why do I help him escape after knowing who he is? Did you see the one at the back? Is there a reasonable explanation?

What happened? The style of painting has changed! The previous settings are not on the same channel as now! Like two unrelated books😅

I just finished reading the public chapter, and I have one word to comment: a mess. A mess: The time logic is messed up. The time difference between the two worlds, after reading the public chapter, I don't know who is faster and who is slower. Either don't write this, or can you stop being inconsistent? Two chaos: The realm of practice is in chaos. One moment it comes to the out-of-body period, another moment it comes, and another moment it comes again. Either don't write it, or can you explain it more clearly? Three Chaos: Kung Fu Chaos: I had some Thunder Kung Fu in the past, I was a major in it in my previous life, but I didn't show up at all later, I switched to Jun Tiandao Kung Fu. Either don't write it, or dig a hole and fill it. Four chaos: The emperor is in chaos. In the front, when the big and small Buddhisms are fighting, and in the end, when we have to deal with the protagonist, is the emperor the same person? Five chaos: The plot is chaotic. What I said earlier can be omitted later, or I can say it again in another role. The most obvious thing is that Cheng Tianjiao told the protagonist what school to enroll in when he was escaping, and then asked someone named Luo to pretend to be B and explain it again, which made him confused.

I was persuaded to give up by the realm setting in the book. . . I can't hold on any longer! The realm is high and low, with breakthroughs in the front but no breakthroughs in the back. . How many authors are writing this book? Forget it, just change the realm settings directly later, practice Qi, leave the body, ghost immortal, earth immortal, and become a real person, god, or immortal. . . The funniest thing is to set the saint as almost the lowest level. . . Although the setting is the author's freedom, since the author has Chinese characters to write novels, he should carefully understand the meaning of the characters. Will the meaning of a holy character be suppressed by some real or fairy characters?

After reading ten chapters and slipping away, a stranger whom you have never met is arrested by the government. Are you going to rescue him? Just because they are all time travellers? This is the world of Xianxia. What can't be found out? Even on earth, there are surveillance cameras. In the world of Xianxia, ​​there are no magical means to find people? Baffling!

This author's books basically collapsed in the later period.

The writing is very good. Although the reward of 1000 coins is small, it will give some support 😁

It's extremely poisonous. After reading Chapter 7, he died immediately. Why did you save him? I think it's good if you don't add insult to injury. Your operation made me stupid.

If you don't read the Golden Thighs novel, time travel is poisonous. Repeated time travel is even more poisonous. Time flows at different speeds and it's poisonous. You can't appreciate it.

I'm almost halfway through reading this book. The word "messy" is not enough to describe this book. I gave it up.

Character building, leave a message downstairs if you want a character 😄😄😄😄, do you want to see the author's mood 😄

How many times has this name been changed? Is this author confused? There is still this realm. This is the most confusing book.