The Tale of Three Stumbles Sakura

I originally wrote a lot of comments, but finally deleted them to "a little bit" of my thoughts. First of all, the protagonist's growth does not rely on golden fingers but on his own experience or even various setbacks and tribulations. There are no brainless upgrades and brainless cool writing routines, which makes the upper limit of this work higher than that of most online novels. Secondly, the plot of the entire work is relatively logical. The author attaches great importance to the burying and recycling of foreshadowing (digging and filling pits), and the actions of the characters are more in line with the personality. There is no deus ex machina or inexplicable brain-dead behavior. It is very comfortable to watch along the way. Moreover, the IQs of various characters in the article are all online. For example, although the protagonist's various small actions did not leave any evidence, they did not deceive the higher-ups. It can be said that there were all kinds of intrigues and conflicts along the way, which promoted the development of the plot. This writing mode makes the lower limit of this novel higher than that of most online articles, and also makes readers unable to read this novel without thinking. They have to read it with some thinking. (In other words, those who find it unpleasant are thoughtless.) Thirdly, the descriptions of various characters in the novel are very good, and the detailed actions and interactions between the characters are rich, such as Hinata's various blushes and Naruto's wooden head, such as the bonds between the Xiaoqiang, and the Third Hokage's entrustment before his death and the protagonist's entangled heart, etc. This makes the novel taste not like dry fried noodles, but a plate of delicious food with full color, flavor and flavor. Finally, the author has a good grasp of the plot choices. Personally, I feel that many fan works (especially those about the protagonists of the original work) have a compulsive compulsion to read the plot of the original work only once, which makes reading it feel like a flood. But in this work, the parts that have little to do with the main plot, no matter how much the original work describes, the parts that should be skipped are still decisively skipped (such as Naruto vs. Gaara in the collapse of Konoha, such as the Land of Snow, etc.), And those "original plots" that spend a lot of space to "restore" are also because they need to lay the groundwork for subsequent developments. Therefore, when reading this work, there is no need to fast forward or skip. Each chapter has its own fun, especially the original plot starting from the second volume, which is not to be missed. Having said so much, in fact, it is just one sentence. This is a very good Naruto fanfic, worthy of reading by those who like to read with their brains.

I have read so many fics, and I don't know if you have ever felt angry after seeing the author tearing down the very loving CP in the original work. I have read some Naruto fics that even accepted Kushina, and I really can't stand it. Naruto is my favorite character. He suffered so much when he was young but he is still so bright, shining on others like the sun. I hope Naruto can still be with Hinata. Only someone as gentle and virtuous as Hinata is the best match for Naruto. (:)ㄥ)_Also, please tell me if it is Lily. The previous writings were very good. I would like to subscribe to them when they are published in the future, so that I can be prepared. I personally feel that there will be no such thing as Lily changing marriage after time travel. Sexual orientation must be affected by the dual effects of education and hormones. The protagonist's memory is blurred in the past. Next (the textual research party sees the theory here and shouts long live ≧▽≦) As a woman who has lived for so many years, it is impossible to still think as a man. Of course, true love is not the active reaction of organs to organs after all, but the closeness of heart to heart. If the author likes it, I have no problem with it. I believe the author can write more delicate emotions. But the current plot is a bit too complicated for me, and I will explode if Lily suddenly appears. However, looking at the current development of the plot, if Sasuke is expected to become a good husband, it is still okay to be with the protagonist who currently shines with strength and gentleness. That's it, dive. Author (ง'-')ง Come on.

I feel that the author's writing is very good, and the logic is self-consistent and self-justifying. In particular, there is no forced walking process. The butterfly effect caused by the time traveler is also logical and self-consistent. This Sakura has a very good character. Why are there so many people scolding me? I almost missed it.

It's too weak. He has water jets and strange powers but he still fights like an idiot. He has lived forty years in his past and present lives combined. He behaves like a child who has never seen life and death. It is really outrageous. Didn't the protagonist die once? I am still too scared to move. I must have read too many novels. There is not one out of ten people who can't even move in a crisis. Even if they are, you are telling me that people who have lived for so long have never encountered a crisis? I was persuaded to give up by the first fight. The author obviously has the tendency to be an ob-type combat writer Then again, from a psychological point of view, if the first fight is so unbearable, it will definitely leave a huge shadow and lack of confidence in the fight in the heart, just like being scolded by the teacher on the first day of class. Sprinklers are basically destined to have difficulty in academic studies. The second point is that they have lost the heart of being strong. No matter how strong their external abilities are, they will never become truly strong. If a fight is not written well, that is a small problem. But if the protagonist cannot be hardened internally or externally, what is the difference between that and a female channel?

At first I thought it was just an ordinary cheating routine for family fun, but things gradually turned out to be wrong. Although this book had some shadows of the original work at the beginning, there was nothing that could be done about it. As the third protagonist of Naruto, it was like this in the early stages of the opening. Then the excitement came. Starting from the mission to Hongzhou Island, the author gradually put the world view he constructed on the Naruto world bit by bit. How to put it this way, generally Naruto books either bring some external plug-ins, or use existing ninjutsu and earth knowledge to develop their own, but this book is different. The worldview constructed by the author is something that originally existed in the Naruto world. Well... Although it is also fictitiously added by the author, it is much more comfortable to look at than those who travel with things that do not belong to the Naruto world. In general, the author has created another background on top of the Naruto world. Regarding natural energy, which is an ancient background for the origin of the sage mode, I understand it this way. I don't know if it is right. So far, the world view created by the author feels that the protagonist is gradually becoming stronger in the process of exploring the origin of natural energy. I feel this is very attractive to me. But I haven't finished writing yet. Although part of the mystery has been revealed, it feels like nothing has been revealed. It is estimated that the final truth will only be revealed at the end. Complaining, this author is very good at digging holes, three holes at a time, but fortunately, this author has a strong sense of filling holes. Although there are some plots in the book that are unbearable, such as the part about the reasons for defecting, it feels like defecting for the sake of defecting, which is a bit stiff, but looking at it later, it feels more and more exciting, maybe because the author is a newcomer. The writing style was a bit awkward at the beginning, but it got better and better later, and the plot arrangement was probably not that good in the early stage. And this author doesn't follow the routine at all. The twists and turns will catch you off guard, especially the scenes of capturing the tailed beasts. Did you think he discovered the jinchuriki and then successfully captured the jinchuriki after a fight? That's not the case. It won't be interesting if the author doesn't make some mistakes. In short, it is much better than some descriptions of the three main protagonists based on the original work. Looking at the current development of the plot, it is estimated that it will take hundreds of chapters to complete. It is considered a lot for a fan to write so many words, but I don't feel that the author is in trouble. Some of the plots that you seem to be confused about are actually digging holes for the subsequent plots. If you jump to see the later plots, you will probably be confused. In short, it's great, great. I really want to know the full picture of the worldview constructed by the author.

To be honest... I want to see the happy ending. Sigh... Now I'm wondering if I can still see it... Of course the author's writing is great. He successfully wrote his own world view in the novel. The plot makes you want to keep watching. But on the other hand. Brainstorming makes me want to complain a little bit. But I'm a bit speechless. The author writes about the paragraph about unlimited monthly reading. I was thinking at that time. Wouldn't it be great if it were really an infinite Tsukuyomi... Without those things. Not misunderstood. Not framed. Not that many people were killed. I have never met Junzi... And I don't know what the force of nature is ... I am too serious. Let me tell you. Sakura... I have really complicated feelings about him. Maybe it's because... I don't understand men's psychology.

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It's a very good fanfic. Although Water Knife Technique seems to be the best in Water Escape next door, the analysis in that book is too verbose. This one is better.

What I'm most curious about in Naruto is that if Ino uses a secret technique to control a man and then has sex with the girl, will she feel it?

In fact, it's true. If you read a lot of novels, you will feel that your protagonist is too scared to move when faced with danger. In fact, this is nonsense. When people face danger, their first reaction is to survive. Even people who are destined to die will subconsciously struggle, and there is no such thing as being too scared to move. , If you don't move, it's not because you're scared, it's because you're completely confused when something happens. For example, a murderer with a knife suddenly appears in front of you. You must be confused first, and then run away immediately. If you can't run away, you usually try to kill the other person. Only when you can't kill him can you give up.