The Tale of Three Stumbles Sakura

I originally wrote a lot of comments, but in the end I deleted and revised them into "just a little bit" of my thoughts. First of all, the protagonist's growth is not due to any cheat codes but rather to his own experiences, including various setbacks and hardships.

Having read so many fanfics, I wonder if anyone else has ever felt furious seeing the author break up a loving couple from the original work? I've even read Naruto fanfics that include Kushina, it's just unbearable! Naruto is my favorite character. He suffered so much as a child but remained so sunny, shining like the sun on others.

I think the author wrote it very well; the logic is consistent and self-consistent. In particular, there were no forced plot twists, and the butterfly effect brought about by the time traveler is also logically consistent. Sakura's personality is also very good. Why are there so many people criticizing it? I almost missed it because of it.

Too weak! Even with a water blade and superhuman strength, he fights like an idiot. He's lived forty years in total across his past and present lives, yet he acts like a child who's never seen death. It's ridiculous! Didn't the protagonist die once? He's so scared he can't move! He's read too many novels. There's not even one in ten people who can't move in a real crisis.

At first, I thought it was just a typical, lighthearted, family-friendly story with a protagonist who's overpowered, but things gradually took a turn for the worse. Although this book initially had some similarities to the original work, that's understandable; it's typical for the third main character of Naruto to start out like this.

Honestly... I wanted to see a happy ending. Sigh... Now I'm wondering if I'll ever see it again... Of course, the author writes very well. He successfully created his own novel's worldview. The plot is so engaging that you'll want to keep watching. But on the other hand... The brainstorming session made me want to complain a bit, but I also felt a little speechless.

This is a really good fanfic. Although Water Blade Technique seems to be the strongest Water Release technique in the other fanfic, that one had too much analysis and was too verbose. This one is much better.

The thing I'm most curious about in Naruto is, if Ino used a secret technique to control a man and then had sex with a girl, would she feel anything?

Honestly, it's true that some novelists, after reading a lot, might imagine their protagonists being too scared to move when facing danger. But that's nonsense. A person's first instinct when facing danger is to survive. Even someone facing certain death will instinctively struggle. It's not that they're frozen in fear; that's just being stunned by the suddenness of the situation.

Sakura mocked Neji as a caged bird. Come on, Neji just mocked Hinata a few times, shouldn't he? It's not you who lost your freedom and talent. Besides, you have to die for the Zong family at any time.