Overlord: If Herohero Had Never Logged Off

After much thought, I feel that the plot of Overlord is terrible and not very suitable for writing fanfiction. Take Naruto for example, the process of growing step by step has infinite possibilities and countless ways to write it. But Ainz Ooal Gown is an overpowered protagonist from the start, who can directly confront the big boss, and the setting is well-established with no room for growth.

An author so outrageous, spamming other Overlord novels with promotional comments for their own book—I'm truly impressed.

This is a fan-made fanfiction of The Undead King. The writing structure imitates the style of Japanese light novels. If you usually read the paragraphing and dialogue rhythm of the light novel version of Ainz Ooal Gown, you can immediately tell that the author is intentionally imitating it. However, it doesn't completely adhere to the style of the original work.

It was a pretty good book, but then suddenly a lizard woman appeared, and the description was ridiculous. Who is she? Is she the female lead? Even if she's a pet, it's just too absurd. It made me feel awful; it doesn't fit the rest of the story at all, and she even physically attacks me, with internal monologues. Disgusting! If you want a pet, why not go find that hamster?

Why is it just Black Luo playing around? The charm of the Overlord novel also lies in the characters, like the Guardians and the battle maids. Isn't their daily life more interesting than that white lizard? What's the point of keeping a white lizard as a pet?

But that's a lizard! Its sexual fetish is so strange, and it doesn't even have a human form. It's really disgusting. I know the original vampire was ugly, but at least she had a human form to look at. A lizard, really? Doesn't it make you uncomfortable? Do you really think it's cute? Even most Fury fans like furry animals, right?

The protagonist's so-called dissatisfaction with the Adventurers' Guild is nothing more than a display of arrogance and pretentiousness, a case of talking without understanding the situation! What is the essence of an adventurer's group? Aren't they just a group of free-spirited, unruly mercenaries who don't obey orders? What is the Adventurers' Guild in essence?

Coleshchew's character is strange. Several chapters are dedicated to her, and while you say she's a pet, the writing is ambiguous, making it seem like things will develop in a positive direction. Then, just when things are looking up for her, she bluntly states, "You're just a pet," and her presence in the following chapters diminishes significantly.

What's the point of bringing this lizard? They say it's a pet, but why bring it along when going back to the city to gather intelligence? Bringing it will attract attention and lead to discrimination from hotels and inns. They just had a confrontation with the Theocracy; if they bring this lizard, they might be able to trace it back to the lizard tribe and expose more information about Nazarick.

This subject matter is both rare and difficult to write about. Is there a Shennong?