The Shadow Demon's Great Pirate System

Any role can be used, navy, pirate, hunter, Celestial Dragon, slave, kingdom noble, cannon fodder. Crew! You have to think about this yourself, whether you have ability or lack of ability, gender, and personality. I'll make a decision at my own discretion. Thank you everyone for your support, hehe😁

I feel like it would be better to reduce the chance of "fuck" happening a little bit

I just read this book. I have read more than 80 chapters so far. I feel that this system is extremely poisonous and punishes and issues mandatory tasks at every turn. It was very unpleasant to watch. The protagonist does whatever he likes, otherwise what kind of protagonist would you be? This book was written by you, and it feels as if the protagonist is like a puppet, and the creator of the system is the final boss. Control the protagonist through the system, add some fun to yourself and spend your free time. My suggestion is not to send tasks. Upgrading can be difficult, but downgrading is particularly unpleasant. But you can complete some hidden tasks, such as fighting the war to save Ace, patching up Whitebeard's last touch, preventing Blackbeard from getting the Shock Fruit, etc. Just do fewer hidden tasks and give them more honor points. Also, I feel that the main character is black and white, and I am offended by both black and white. I am not pleasing to both sides, and I have no experience. Your character portrayal is too poor. He shouldn't be allowed to be a pirate like this. Being a pirate is still timid. It's okay if he doesn't kill civilians. If anyone insists on killing civilians when he has nothing to do, then I can only say that he is sick. But what about pirates? You didn't kill those people in Crocodile's studio either? Senior employees are not killed at will, but what about low-level employees? Isn't that the executioner? Find a reason to gather them all and kill them all. When you get to Gaya Island, you won't kill those pirates? ? ? I really don't know why you wrote about One Piece. Do the pirates in One Piece really need so many reasons to kill people? What's more, you still have experience to gain. And why don't you kill those navy soldiers who attack you? If someone wants to arrest you, put you in jail or kill you, you just knock them down? That's it! ? ? That is the world of One Piece. That is a real cruel world, a world where people eat people. If others are cruel, you should be more cruel than others. A person cannot stand firmly if he is not ruthless. What you write has nothing to do with what those who read pirate novels look at. Whether it's fun or not, whether it's fun or not, you can't express the excitement of the fight in detail. How can this keep people watching? To be honest, I really liked it when I first watched it. But the more I watched, the angrier I became. . . .

Come solo if you have the ability! All I need is a handful to show you how good I am! Yes, you are so confident🐷

Is there only a single world of pirates?

It was fine in the early stage, but it became increasingly frustrating later on. Originally, Dota's abilities were interesting and attractive, and the character of the protagonist was quite likable at first, but from the beginning of Weiwei, uncomfortable plots began to appear. 1. In the Alabasta plot, the protagonist just said the secret code to prevent Xiao Feng from cheating, and then Weiwei was abducted. I initially thought Weiwei and Delsha would find out and come back, but they didn't, and Weiwei never took it seriously. Let's just ignore it, but Weiwei here is so stupid. Why does the protagonist still want to help her? It would have been nice if she didn't cut her. Compared with the people on the empty island later who have to kneel down and apologize before they can ask the protagonist for help, is it really just about their appearance? 2. Forcibly increase the difficulty. Anilu said that domineering power can be achieved once you practice it, and I was convinced. More importantly, reverse cheat: It is obvious that the author does not want to change the original plot too much, but it is really uncomfortable to issue a system task when the plot has to change. Forcing the protagonist to confront Crocodile and Enel, which should have been a pleasant point at first, turned out to be a vague point of poison - the protagonist originally wanted to fight, but taking the initiative to fight and being forced to fight are completely different things, especially being forced to risk one's life is the most annoying. The protagonist can't be a good guy, but he doesn't want to be a bad guy. The system sends a mission to kill Luffy. The reward is very generous. If I don't accept it, I can still accept it. But the backhand was immediately beaten by Garp Aoki. No matter how you look at it, you feel like you are being cheated. It is better to kill Luffy and escape with your own strength instead of luck. Looking back, the most important thing the protagonist should do is not to ignore the system when the system releases a mission for the first time and forces him to go to sea, follow Garp and hug his lap, practice with Garp in a down-to-earth manner, and train himself. The system lets him do as he pleases, do whatever suits him and is consistent with his status as a navy, and let him die if he doesn't. If he is not rewarded, he will be rewarded with unexpected joys. If he is not rewarded, he can be deprived of what he has learned anyway, but it is much more comfortable than the system being the father over his head.

Emm... How should I put it? I feel that the author's writing style is average among fan fiction, and the subject matter is average. Overall, it's still readable. There are a little too many swear words in the whole text, I hope it can be improved.

It's almost the middle to late stage, and it's still eating trees 😅.

Author, it's okay for you to talk nonsense. Even if Luffy comes two years later, it doesn't mean that Kirby has any general strength. He doesn't have any strength in the comics. Is it just because he met Luffy and then awakened and became a general? Is it possible that a general is so worthless that anyone can be a general?

When I saw that princess making trouble unreasonably, I couldn't bear it anymore and tried to persuade myself to quit.