Pirate Vinsmoke

When encountering Whitebeard, he directly said that he had fought with Jack. The reader felt that the protagonist was simply showing off his fighting prowess. The most important thing is that they all believed it. Seeing as the protagonist is a brat, and one he just met, I shouldn't complain about the protagonist being a braggart.

You have to get stronger step by step, otherwise you will be fooled very quickly.

One moment I know the plot, and the other moment I don't know the plot. Can the author be more rigorous?

I have never seen anyone write about ghouls successfully. Ghouls themselves are monsters. They think they are food, but are they ashamed of themselves? Even if it's written here that it's a Neptune-eating type, is it still a ghoul in this setting? Not as good as the fruit of a foodie.

Am I a pervert? When I saw that I have rc cells and don't eat people, I felt like I didn't want to watch anymore 😂 (ﾉಥBenefitಥ)

+1 For persuading him to retreat in the first chapter. There are many things where there is no need to pay attention to details. If you don't know how to write, don't write. If you don't know how to write time travel, why don't write it, and no one will scold you because you didn't write this thing. I won't argue with you for any weird reasons like whether your lab exploded, you died in a car accident, or you met the God of Creation. If Goldfinger can't write, don't write. Why do people come up with a system now? It's not because I don't know how to write cheats. I'll give you a simple and rough system to get through it.

The protagonist is an adult, okay. How to write Chapter 11? Are you afraid of starving to death if you eat Neptune meat? Isn't the protagonist's father a king? If he becomes stronger by eating Neptune, his father will let him starve to death?

Since Sanji's battle suit is invisible black, what is the protagonist's battle suit...

He has become so strong, and yet he comes to mess with Luffy again out of nowhere. This operation is really completely incomprehensible.

The subject matter is very good, ghoul + One Piece, but the author is really too young, and I couldn't stand it until the 3rd chapter. . . What are you writing about? ? ? That sucks. . . You can really write whatever you want. If the protagonist is angry, be angry. If you are wronged, be aggrieved. If the environment is scary, be scary. If the spirit is strong, be strong. There is no need for any reason at all. There is no foreshadowing or reason at all.

The author is so funny, how many books have he bought?

In the original work of One Piece, the most mysterious one is CP0 and then CP9. Why do all the protagonists meet CP0? It makes it seem like CP0 is a trash fish. Among the members, apart from Spangdam, who used the backdoor, Kaku and Lucci, the weakest members, will probably have the rank of lieutenant general in the new world two years later.

It took me 5 chapters to enter the world of pirates.

The beginning of the story was very good, but after I got together with Luffy, I became so wet that it didn't look good. Goodbye.