Abnormal Extraordinary World

After reading more than 200 chapters, I feel that the overall setting, creativity and ideas are still very good. But the author's writing style is a bit unsatisfactory, there are many poisonous points, and it is extremely poisonous. The most unbearable thing for me is the dialogue, especially when facing the enemy, it is really dirty. There is also the streaking meme, which is fine if used for a little while, but becomes very offensive if used all the time. Furthermore, the characters are not fleshed out enough. I hope that the characters can be fleshed out more from the side and through some events.

I have been reading this book for a few days. I also read the book reviews before reading it, mainly because I was afraid of being poisoned.       ，，，，，，，，，       ，，，，，， Last but not least, this book has Western fantasy elements and is a fresh urban novel about daily life in a different world with technology. Don't mistake the genre and say that the author didn't write well. It's not easy for everyone. Sometimes your inappropriate words may cause trouble to others.

It's extremely poisonous, and it makes me uncomfortable to read it. It's as poisonous as a scholar's novel written by a fat author, and I can ignore the rest. But streaking is always streaking. The protagonist always wants to hug the queen, the elf, the knight, and eat shit from the pig's feet. The author is also mentally ill.

I feel that every time the author writes about computer-related things, I feel so embarrassed... Others feel pretty good... Just change the computer to a golden finger, or something else (name), such as [Core] or something else, so that we will not associate it with the computer (in fact, as long as it is not called a computer), after all, there are some things that are not quite right. It's really embarrassing... I think if I change the name, it would be another system. As for the system created by the author, it's not just how the author uses it? And if there are mistakes, readers will not feel insulted to their IQ... Maybe the words are a bit too sharp, but this is my most sincere suggestion to the author.

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

Okay, you took all my votes

There is a problem with the protagonist's IQ, and it gets worse as the game progresses.

I was very surprised to find a novel that I can read in the middle of the night today.

Why do I keep encountering books like this that start with poisonous words recently... If you insist on writing about things you don't understand, please lean on the mysterious side. It is much better to not explain at all that there is even a potato and a fish tank in the system than to write such a long paragraph of awkward text and then forcefully explain "This is a technology far beyond the current technology".

It's time for the protagonist to learn his skills, and a mage is good 😁

In the world of ordinary people, an ordinary person has mastered extraordinary power through technology. This is Iron Man. In the extraordinary world, an ordinary person has mastered extraordinary power through technology. This is like a disabled person having prosthetic limbs. Thanks.

I feel that the extraordinary power in this world has no future. How can we be detached if we lose our enterprising spirit?

Just like what is written in the book about not being able to assemble a computer or use any software, others will say, "Aren't you a computer major?" May I ask what the relationship between the protagonist being the God of the Internet and building mechas is? Even if the protagonist has extraordinary thinking, why should he build mechas in an extraordinary world? The book also says that the protagonist wants to have an extraordinary body and master extraordinary powers. So why not use genetics? Since you want to write about technology that can analyze everything, wouldn't it be better to strengthen yourself? With a long lifespan, an immortal body, and an immortal soul, there is something better than the hole you dug yourself to become a saint. The book always emphasizes how poor the qualifications of the protagonist are and how useless he is. Isn't it good to use technology to create a god? I have to take the mecha route. My body is not strong enough. Even strong mechas have hardware requirements. Can the protagonist's useless qualifications be able to control it? In the end, I still need to strengthen my body and spirit. Wouldn't it be better to take the technology-created god route at the beginning? It is even written many times in the book that the protagonist is so frightened by a strong presence that he cannot move. How many times can the protagonist be killed in such a short time when he is frightened? What is the use of dying if the mecha is useless even if it is not powerful? The most disgusting thing is that you obviously have extraordinary thinking, but you never use your brain to do things. The nature of the extraordinary world is still the jungle of the jungle. This is a problem that ordinary people can realize, but a person with extraordinary thinking cannot realize it. . .

It's coming, it's coming, the new book by Wild Hunt boss is sure to be a hit🔥

It's coming, it's coming, keep it for now, wait until it gets fatter and then we'll see.

Chapter 11: It takes 2 days to move 150 pounds of radishes from the backyard cellar to home. Everyone I saw was stupid? Isn't it said that the elderly and children are stronger than the people on earth? Is the cat summoned by the warlock just for viewing? It's really not possible. Won't a handcart, a wheelbarrow, or carrying it in separate batches work? If that doesn't work, you can just eat and drink in the cellar before going home. Can't even walk?

All kinds of patriotism, all kinds of standing on the moral high ground, all kinds of indignation, but the problem is... He is not from the Black Dragon Empire, either? Did you make your ID card yourself? Whether the people of the Black Dragon Empire die or not, whether they are traitors, whether they are suppressed by the Lime Federation... Is none of his business? The protagonist is just a Chinese! Why do you care about the dispute between Israel and Palestine? If the price offered by Limei Federation is high enough, it is not impossible to sell them things. Furthermore, the Black Dragon Supreme is obviously a time traveler, so between two time travelers... The most likely one is a fight to the death, right? Besides, if we really talk about it, as the protagonist is a glorious successor to socialism, a country like the Black Dragon Empire, which is still in a feudal imperial society and has royal oppression, is the target of the struggle, right?

When it comes to professional knowledge such as computer installation and programming, why does the author just not like to pass it by? Alas, one generation has passed by, so let everyone make up their minds. Those who know more will naturally make up more, and those who know less will naturally pass by. In the end, my dear, this writing has become a special show for beginners.

The author's subject matter in this book is interesting, but it's a pity that he uses the structure and techniques from ten years ago. I can't stand it. There aren't too many programmers now. Guan Gong plays a big knife in front of him, and talks about computers in front of programmers. emmmm Substitution is extremely poor

Write less about streaking 🤫 If you want to write about the protagonist having a few silly friends, I think it's okay. I don't believe that normal people would run naked in front of their girlfriends with other men. This is already considered ZZ.

The setting is good, but the protagonist is quite boring, a bad guy, and too much sympathy leads to involvement in other people's grudges (seeing the protagonist's righteous face makes me feel sick). It can't be more realistic. What I want to see most is a cautious protagonist, not a ** who relies on his golden finger to express a sense of justice.

I had skipped some of the poisonous points before, but when I saw that I had won a life-and-death duel with the villain, I vomited when I worried about the villain's background and released him. It's this plot from a novel ten years ago, where the villain is not killed at once, but when someone uses his background to kill you, you fight back again and again. It's disgusting.

It's extremely toxic, the protagonist is useless, he's abused everywhere, and the context doesn't make sense.

I am a junior majoring in computer science. After reading this book, I have deep doubts about the knowledge I have learned.

The back is too poisonous, and the protagonist is too weak and no one dares to kill him. When faced with the hostile forces, he just suffers from this and does not investigate or fight. He just brags with a few friends every day With the strength and technology of the protagonist, it is completely possible to form a force. Also, with the strength of the protagonist, why not get rid of the spies around him? So scared? The most annoying thing is that the prince said before that there is a wise holy mage helping him, but judging from the prince's operation, this holy mage is also a fool. All in all, the protagonist is weak and fearful, the supporting characters are incompetent and angry, the enemies have many sex scenes, and the heroine is just a tool (she is still very good in the past, with no problems in personality and life) No wonder it is not popular 🙂

Why doesn't the protagonist start his own company and become Bill Gates and Iron Man in a different world? Instead, take your technology out and sell it to so-called friends at low prices for cooperation with their companies in exchange for 1% of the original value?

I have been reluctant to read it since Chapter 500. I feel that the atmosphere has suddenly changed. The original joy and fun have suddenly turned into revenge for love? It's okay to help my wife get revenge. The key is that the atmosphere is dull. Now that I see it, it's a pity to abandon it. It's tasteless.

The poison resistance is not high enough, so it is recommended not to touch it, or you may just skip some plots and pretend you haven't seen it, but overall you can still watch it.

This book is really white and a bit ridiculous😅

To be honest, I'm not Sister Li, so why do I keep running around naked without leaving my underwear? If I'm completely naked, I'm not like Sister Li. If you say it's all men or all women, then just go naked. It's hard for me to see you mixing men and women, especially when the heroine is included in more than 80 photos of her first mission together. , They lost in the card game, the male protagonist took off his clothes completely, and the four brothers were also naked, and the two women were only in their underwear. Although the female protagonist had just joined the group and was following the mission for the first time, she didn't integrate or play, and hid beside them, but these naked men suddenly jumped out in front of others, and they were like that. And when a normal person like the male protagonist comes in and becomes like this for a while, I'm really afraid that the female protagonist will become one of them in the future... I can't see it.