The Legend of Immortal Cultivation 1

I went home the day before yesterday and forgot to update due to fatigue from the journey. I am very sorry.

What a poor author, he doesn't even have a single recommendation! ! ! After reading the author's book, first of all, the author should do a good job of segmenting it, otherwise the eyes will be tired from reading.

Can any friend help me get a book cover?

Work hard, come on, apply for listing quickly😡😡

50 Foreskin in five seconds, it's not a square, what the hell is this? 😰

I didn't grab the red envelope, so I'll sign up 😁😁

Author, you are so miserable. You haven't signed a contract for so long. Could it be that you don't know that you can apply for it on your own initiative?

Received, come on! 🤝

The first section of the eye-opening section is "Shenya". . . I How can I use Asia as a place name?

Chicken ribs, tasteless to eat, a pity to throw away 🙂

The author Niu Bei is so perseverant, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Just by looking at the title, I can tell that this is a novel about cultivating immortals. However, if you choose the fantasy category, you will definitely not be able to sign the contract. I suggest you change it to an immortal novel, which might be better! ✌️

This Qi training lifespan is really poisonous. It is only one hundred years old, which is too little. It should be set to 200 to 300 years, the foundation is 500-800, the golden elixir is 1500-2000 (at the beginning). Each time you advance to a level, the lifespan is increased by 500, and the lifespan of the Nascent Soul is counted in tens of thousands of years. As the life level becomes stronger, the life span should be greatly increased.

It looks like a running account and looks boring.

This is too general, flowing article

The words are too plain, but it's hard to describe them as a running account.

I haven't signed the contract yet, I've finished the book, I can't reward you, I'm so drunk

Jin Yong paid a return visit with "Jade Toad Tribulation". He admired fellow Taoists and was willing to work together.

Why aren't there chapters 2 and 4?

If you, the author, still want to make some money by writing novels, I suggest you stop here and start a new one. Work on your writing. If there is still a chance, don't blame me for being wrong.