From Migrant Workers to Real Estate Developers

I don't have the patience to read realistic books, so it would be much better if I added Rebirth

I would like to make a comment, the dialogue between family members and lovers is too rigid, without any trace of casual spirituality. This is not how dialogue works in life.

The author can greatly speed up the progress

In fact, the author can rewrite the protagonist's rebirth and then develop real estate, and then seize the Internet. When developing real estate, he can write a more ruthless (underworld) kind of ruthless towards the enemy. This would be very real! After all, the real estate developer at that time was not a ruthless person. The protagonist later cleared his name and spent money to set up a law firm to clear his name. If you don't like your personal opinion, please don't comment!

The author must not stop. Did he rest again yesterday?

Update soon, it's very nice 😁

I'm also here to write a review. I only listened to it but didn't read it. I couldn't listen to what I wrote, and my writing style was a little bit worse.

The author probably doesn't know much about the construction industry and doesn't even know the structure on the construction site.

The most annoying thing about it is my dear. All the chapters are disgusting.

I'm using this opportunity to promote my book "Start with Rebirth: Beginning as a Real Estate Tycoon" The name is terrible, but the book is not. Novel about business war, if you are interested, you can come and taste it! Reborn in 2006, the boy is separated from his previous life at the crossroads of destiny, and he will have the wealth he has dreamed of. Rising gracefully amid the financial crisis, he will be the proud man of the turbulent era. Let's see how Chu Xiu uses the benefits of rebirth to create wealth step by step and reach the pinnacle of life.

A lot of people have read it. Who can write a review?

Is the title of the book too many characters?

The emotional writing is a bit poor, try your best.

How did this come to 370,000 words, with so little discussion?

Have you opened three books at the same time? Come and write them! 👍

👍👍👍👍Written well!

Good guy, three books were published at the same time, with over a million words, but they didn't get signed? ?

Authors should read more popular books and see how they are different from their own works. Learn from each other's strengths and weaknesses, and you will become popular.

If the author wants to sign a contract, it is best to clarify the dialogue between the characters so that readers will not feel distorted when reading it. If you write like this, I will never be able to sign the contract. When I read the novels you wrote, I found them strange. The dialogues between the characters were like, "I said, haha!" Author, have you not read the novels? If you experience how dialogues work in novels written by others, you will know what is different about what you write. 🤭

It is normal for the author not to sign a contract. Regarding your question, I saw an author in the same situation as you on Zhihu, who also did not sign a contract. Fortunately, he asked his doubts and someone answered his question.

I have read three chapters so far. The dialogue is too stiff. People who read novels like to read ten lines at a time. What you wrote is a bit unclear.