The Little Shopkeeper of Great Chu

What bothers me the most is introducing a girlfriend to a male co-star, as if he is awesome.

First of all, the protagonist is a time traveler and should have parents in modern society. As a time-travel book, it is really inconsistent to read. At the beginning, the father who is called ancient times should show a struggling person. There is not too much emotion in it. It is best to modernize the inner narration! Then I was slowly moved by the ancient relationship between father and son. You acted foolishly and filially from the beginning, which seemed so out of touch... Please, you are not an ancient person, you must have your own characteristics! So obedient 🥵 is so speechless

The author sometimes writes the protagonist, it's so useless

I don't want to read after seeing the name of the protagonist

The author is trying to write a portrait of a saint. After reading five chapters, Brother Dali slipped away. . .

Good book, not bad. Good books should be rewarded, and everyone should support them.

Why is it that the protagonist does everything himself? Why can't the protagonist come up with the plan and the indigenous people implement it? . . . I've read several books with the main character in it, and seeing the same plot, my expectations have diminished.

I can't stand it. Maybe I'm too young, or maybe I'm not well-educated. I've never seen such a stupid dad. He's so honest. He's the best in the family. How did he raise that honest dad! It's so sad. If I were in that family, I would never do that!

Shopping malls, officialdom, and battlefields. Looking at the introduction of this book, the protagonist must be good at business warfare, official fighting, martial arts, and military tactics~ Anyone who writes novels only writes about one of them, right? If all three are present, then it's not a story, it's YY~ After all, in ancient times when the status of businessmen was extremely low, it was really difficult for businessmen to be officials and generals~ I think that when writing business novels, just write about how the protagonist makes money and becomes a wealthy businessman, that's it. As for national justice, the darkness of officialdom, and the battlefield, it has nothing to do with him~

I have read less than 20 chapters. Is this book written by the same author as Driving a RV Back to Datang? It is more than a bit worse than Datang. The writing is too stiff.