Biography of Wei Zixiu

That senior sister is indeed a failure. She has forgotten the main character, and she has not forgotten such a crooked senior sister. Now it seems that it is Wei Zi's book, so I better not read it. What impressed me deeply is that the senior sister is waiting in the sect like a watcher's stone for the junior sister who is fighting for life and death outside to deliver various high-level resources, and then says that it's good that the junior sister is safe, and the junior sister is still very happy.

Love Wei Zi! At that time, I noticed that I was a fan just after the update. Azi is the genius with the best character and character that I have ever seen! It's a pity that it ended without updating in the past five days Σ(ŎдŎ|||)ﾉﾉ! However, the copy also specified that it only goes to the Great Thousand Realms (⋟⋞). But the novel is a biography of an "immortal", and little Azi's disappearance into the light seems to be unfinished. Dear author, I beg you to open the second volume! (Don't force yourself if you really can't do it😜) After all, after chasing her step by step until now, Azi is like someone she grew up watching, leaving so quietly, so reluctant and sad. Our Taisu Little Peony is definitely my true love that makes me proud (இωஇ )٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶❤ emmmm Can a short review of more than 100 words make the author notice me? 😂

I can't stand it anymore 😭, goodbye 😭

This book is average, the writing is average, the characterization is not good, and the logic is a bit unreasonable. After reading only ten chapters, I feel that it is a bit unfulfilled and a bit confusing, and each plot is very rushed and very entertaining.

🙂 Here I come

The writing is very good and exciting. Along the way, I went through ups and downs and finally became a god. I look forward to seeing the fairyland in the future!

There are a lot of typos, and many places are not rigorous enough. Let's take a look at it while you're at it.

🙂Good(✪▽✪)

Emmmmm Although it was quite uncomfortable to watch the scene with Emperor Shang but it's not unreasonable. . _(:з∠)_ I can only say that I don't like it Think about it from my perspective I'm probably the same way I'm really selfishhhhhh😄

Happy New Year and all the best! I want to learn how to open a tipping forum. One like is 10 coins, one reply is 10 coins, and +100 coins for every fifty to show support Let's see when it ends. What I want now is to finish it Save up and finish it x

Demining: There are basically no top-quality books in this book (I don't think there are any in the book anyway), but there are countless outstanding brothers and sisters. For example, our Senior Sister Tang and the Master who have appeared more recently have attracted countless comments. I would like to emphasize here that there is absolutely no male protagonist (female protagonist) in this book. The master and apprentice are all serious people, and the senior sister is also a serious person. Therefore, anyone who wants to have an unethical love should give up. After all, I want to leave my outstanding and lovely little brothers and sisters to everyone, how could I let Wei Xiaozi keep them to myself?

Let's talk about the issue of adding updates. Looking back, I feel powerless recently. The more updates I add, the more I owe, so I can only change the rules for adding updates. However, the updates I owed before will definitely be made up as soon as possible. This will not change. There are three chapters in total with monthly tickets and two chapters with rewards. New rules for adding updates: An update will be added if the reward exceeds 10,000 coins. Hui Mu will build another reward building. From now on, Hui Mu will write down every reward given by the little cutie. I love you all. Yes, you read that right, Hui Mo just canceled the monthly pass in such a superficial way. Although looking back, I still really want all kinds of tickets, but I am really afraid of owing more and more. It has taken me so long to write the article, and looking back, I have never broken my promise. Since I can't do it, I can only explain it to everyone in advance. I love you all, and I hope that after I don't have monthly tickets to add updates, I can still receive tickets when I look back. 😢😢

The real no cp is that there are no emotional scenes from the beginning to the end. It does not mean that we are not together in the end. It is the most poisonous thing if we write that we are not together in the end. Those who prefer no cp and those who have cp are uncomfortable, and both parties are not happy. I personally am an omnivorous person and read it with or without CP. However, reading miscellaneous books does not mean that I like reading miscellaneous books. The biggest poisonous point of this book is that it writes an emotional scene but ends up saying it has no CP. It is too complicated. Since the heroine didn't like the male character from the beginning, why did she write a kissing scene that was so offensive to him? Why did you deliberately give the male character a role to make people misunderstand that he is the male protagonist? Isn't it good to say no decisively when it's time to do so?

The little cuties are very concerned about the issue of additional updates. Looking back, I would like to explain here that normal updates are double updates every day. If there are additional updates, they will be specifically stated. Otherwise, double updates will be defaulted, so the cuties will not have to wait any longer. After you have saved enough manuscripts, I will add updates from time to time. In addition, I will also set the rules for adding updates. 1. If the reward exceeds 10,000 coins, one update will be added. Looking back, we will build another reward building. From now on, every reward given by the little cutie will be written down one by one. I love you all. 2. One update will be added for every two hundred monthly tickets, and there is no accumulation. I can only think of this much for now, and I will add more to you from time to time.

I feel tired, and every time I watch it I have to complain about how little it contains. It's been a long time since I've seen such a tasteful article about cultivating immortals. Alas, the quantity is too small. Please add more updates.

It's a very interesting story. The heroine can be said to be the proud daughter of heaven, but she is down-to-earth and hard-working. She has a lively and cheerful personality and is a bit of a scoundrel. She is very cute. Unlike some stories, the heroine is persistent at best and pretentious at worst. Although the heroine is the protagonist, she has experienced many difficulties every time she gets an opportunity. It makes people feel that this is the difficult history of a monk's pursuit of Taoism, rather than the "legendary" life of a Mary Sue. Neither the female protagonist nor the male supporting characters are top-notch, and the main supporting characters are all very good. There are no messy emotional entanglements, no unreasonable grudges and jealousies, it is mainly about the heroine's life of cultivating immortality, the favored son of heaven. The story is very good, although the content is still short, but it can be seen that it is a good novel about the heroine cultivating immortality. ~~~But the volume is too small and not enough to read. The author would like to ask for more updates! !

I personally feel that the plot of this book is actually very good and the writing is good, but the protagonist is too soft-hearted. In fact, I have said this in the article. I don't know what other people think. I read it all. With the help of the master and when he got the opportunity, the protagonist in the article went through several reincarnations and tempered his mentality. Especially in Zhang Zhou's life, he should have gone through forty years of dark training, pain, suffering, and blood. Under such training, his personality will change to some extent. Although the memory returns in the end, the personal experience has not. Just annihilate it, but keep it in mind, but why do you always try your best to give those children what you think is best for them when you meet some strangers who ask for their children? Although the protagonist also received the kindness of the orphan, I don't think it is this. The good is a bit too much. The feeling of always thinking about those people is really over-described. There are also some supporting characters. Many people don't like Tang Muge. It's true that the protagonist has a higher cultivation level than her and calls her senior sister. Of course, she joked that she asked Tang Muge to call her senior sister Wei Zi, but she glared at Wei Zi. Wei Zili was cowardly. This is how the world of immortality should be, so why shouldn't she call her senior sister. Later in the article, when Tang Muge's cultivation level has improved, she calls Zhenjun Guang Ling her senior brother. I know there is already a contradiction here, but it doesn't matter if the protagonist doesn't call her senior sister above. Now she calls someone with a higher cultivation level than her. Wei Zi is a junior sister, but she also calls her senior brother Guang Ling Zhenjun. This generational hierarchy is already messed up. Since she calls her senior brother Guang Ling Zhenjun according to her cultivation, she must call Wei Zi, who has a high cultivation level, her senior sister. She cannot mess up the seniority just because of a good relationship. Although there are many places in the article where seniority is confusing, it is not mentioned in a large space. After all, no one can criticize the protagonist if he is willing. What's more, some places are called according to their cultivation base. After all, it is the principle of the immortal world. The above two points are contradictory in my writing, but they are more contradictory in the article. It can only be said that the image of Tang Muge as a supporting character was not well written. Other readers also said that Wei Zi did not lack love, but she placed too much emphasis on Tang Muge. Tang Muge always accepted but gave very little, and what he gave was just that. Most of the time, he was just worried and worried, but Wei Zi was trying to get treasures for Tang Muge, and could easily fall into danger. Wei Zi took her too seriously, too much. When Wei Zi first entered Tai Suzong, he received the care from Tang Muge's aunt, which Wei Zi deserved, and even later, but these cares are far from enough to make a person think about everything all the time. I remember one place in the article said that Wei Zi thought that if something happened to Tang Muge, Wei Zi really didn't know what would happen to him. Here, after that, Tang Muge gave Wei Zi soft care. Love, for Wei Zi, is maternal love, but at the same time, she will also restrict Wei Zi's actions and let Wei Zi save her regardless of her own safety. She is unwilling to let Wei Zi be involved in danger and wants Wei Zi to be safe. Saving her will get severe criticism. Is Wei Zi wrong? No, Wei Zi does not have the obligation to tell Tang Muge everything, so the description here is also a bit inappropriate. All in all, the supporting role of Tang Muge was not successfully established. Also, there should be a lot of talented people with good qualifications in the article, but many of them are not mentioned. It only focuses on Tang Muge except Wei Zi. The others are not mentioned clearly. Although it is not a big deal, it makes Tang Muge's supporting role very obvious. Some shortcomings will be magnified and easily cause dissatisfaction with this supporting role. In addition, the article mentions that the protagonist awakens the memory of his past life, but others do not. The writing is too abrupt and unnecessary, and the subsequent article does not add to the suspense left here, so it can be regarded as a major failure in the article. The above is not a criticism of the author's book, nor a criticism of the characters created by the author. I really think it is inappropriate. Since I have said so much, it means that I read this book seriously, and I respect the author and the book. But at the same time, I hope that the author can think more about the description and performance of the characters. In time, he will become a well-known writer and write more wonderful stories.

Build a building and welcome everyone to experience the water

The further back I go, I don't know why my feelings towards Tang Muge are getting worse. . . . . . Every time the heroine holds a treasure or an opportunity comes to her, there will be a long or short verbal or psychological confession, ah, I would rather not have these things and want my junior sister to be safe. These are not worth a hair of my junior sister. Then she figured it out again, if I don't accept it, I will be separated from my junior sister, or I want to use these to improve myself quickly and not hold my junior sister back, and then I accept it with peace of mind! ! ! The most disgusting thing is that every time, the heroine is the one who is begging for help and puts it in such a lowly manner! The heroine seems to have no shortage of love!

The part where the heroine's brother gets into trouble is really cleverly written. The stepmother pretends to be virtuous in front of her husband, cleverly deceives the parents-in-law, and tortures the heroine who is not even three years old. The heroine has been picking up seafood at the beach to satisfy her hunger since she was more than 2 years old, essentially living the life of a wild child. Retribution came. One day when she was seven years old, her grandmother asked the heroine to take care of her four-year-old brother. The heroine left her brother at the beach and went into the sea herself. When she returned, her brother had drowned. Why is the heroine so careless? Because she felt that she had lived well at the beach since she was two years old. How could something go wrong when she was four years old?

I'm not against no cp. I'm not against having a male protagonist either! But can you please stop writing emotional scenes under the guise of no cp! You wrote an emotional drama and then you blame the readers for thinking nonsense? Didn't the author give him a chance to think blindly? ? ? Why do people think Di Shang is the male protagonist, and it was not written by the author himself? ! ! The most speechless thing is writing emotional scenes. Give me hope and then write it to death! ! ! I'm really speechless! Having purchased all the chapters, I can only lament the money I got 😭😭😭

Thank you to every little cutie who commented and looked back

It's a pity. Originally, this book could be said to be the most satisfying one I've found on female channels. I personally think the first 50 chapters are better paced than some books on male channels. However, the rest of the book feels like it was written by someone else. It's draggy, dramatic, and boring. It can be said that awakening the memory of past lives was a big failure for me, because I ignored the charm of Xiao Wei Zi. The reader has accepted that the protagonist is a strong, cute, and dramatic little girl. At this time, you want to write about being affected by your past life? It doesn't mean you have to travel through time if you want to become an immortal. If you just started writing about it, that's it. I'm speechless. What a pity! Also, the original writing style is crisp and clean, but the modal particles at the end are really out of place and annoying to read. Maybe I read this book as purely about cultivating immortality, and the protagonist doesn't need to interact with the handyman at all, right? The amazing sentence "distribute the fruit to the two sisters, they burst into tears of gratitude." Can't it end? Grumbling. If you can accept it, this book is still excellent.

Netizens have explained a thousand times that those who read the beginning and yelled that the protagonist is too immature and cold-blooded, these people are all "I don't listen, I don't listen, I just don't listen." This is the tone of the heroine in the romance novel. In this case, you are still reading a P! As for Wei Zi's maturity, I don't know how you understand the word "mature". Is it because I am not good at Chinese language? Wei Zi, who is five or six years old, is sometimes as steady as a little adult (note, like) and sometimes childish (because she is a child). She also makes mistakes and has small tempers. Because those are the most normal reactions of children. Although she has some opportunities, those memories are like watching movies and will not become yours. On the road of your life, only when you fall do you know what pain feels like. Although she has excellent qualifications, she also works hard. She is self-disciplined and diligent at a young age. We can't put a lot of demands on Azi just because she is the protagonist. She is still young, but she is always growing. Let's wait together for the peonies to bloom with unparalleled splendor; the three thousand worlds will be scorching with elegance.

I read it about once, and it was very uncomfortable. I didn't have the desire to read a whole chapter. I've read a lot of book recommendations before, but I'm still a little disappointed. First of all, the heroine's brother was written off in the beginning, and then the heroine walked away in order not to make things difficult for her family and herself. It was very sad. I always feel it is very unreasonable and I can't explain exactly. Then there is the heroine's senior sister. In the early stages of the novel, the heroine's senior sister is very concerned about the heroine, but in the later stage, the heroine's tolerance is too high. She feels that the world is like a little white lotus. She talks about not wanting gifts from the heroine, but her hands are not soft. She never really refuses, and she does not really help the heroine in the later stage. Besides, the heroine did not fear death and went to stir up trouble in the world of monsters for her master. It was hard to accept. At that time, the heroine and his master did not have a deep relationship. They had just met a few times, and her master even did not understand her and misunderstood her temperament. But it feels very unreasonable for the heroine to brave the demon world for her master without fear of death. Also, the heroine was causing trouble in the demon world during her junior high school and yet she was unharmed. Is the golden finger too open? And after describing the entire episode, I feel that the Yuanying stage master is not as capable as the heroine. Then there's Di Shang. Since the heroine doesn't write a CP, why do we need to arrange such a character to prove that the heroine is pursued? In the end, I suffered from inexplicable amnesia and just let it go. I feel awkward everywhere. In fact, you can take a look at "The Order of Immortals" which is being updated by Qidian. It is also a little indigenous girl who begins to cultivate immortality. The heroine is lively, naughty and clever. However, after reading the whole novel, it feels very smooth. There are no inexplicable deaths or sacrifices to promote the heroine. The layout is also very good. I hope that the author's new book will be more logically clear and have a larger structure. There are better works out there.

In fact, some people don't understand that the number of outstanding male nuns in the Mingming sect is basically the same, but the head elders and various peak leaders are mostly men... There is also a serious imbalance in the male-female ratio of the gods and tribulations that have appeared so far. In the aristocratic family, there are even many male cultivators with many women, and all men are in power...

I saw the heroine's master forcibly taking the heroine as his disciple. As written before, the heroine's apprenticeship is really a big failure. The master is a sword cultivator after Yuan Dynasty, and he actually forces the heroine to become his disciple. The key is that the heroine's master is a sword cultivator and forcibly recruits the master to be his disciple. Fortunately, the heroine knows the current affairs, otherwise the master would think that the heroine does not know what is good and what is good. This is different from the ancient times when a boy from a rich family fell in love with a girl and forced her to marry him. If the girl didn't want to marry him, he thought she was ignorant. What's more, there is a method to cultivate Yuanying who has long been interested in the heroine and wants to take her as his disciple. It's really candy with glass shards stuck on it. It hurts to eat, but it's a pity to throw it away. It's a waste of several hours. Next time I read a novel, I'd better read the book reviews. It's so uncomfortable to abandon the book midway 😢😢😢

There are several major failures in this book: the master who is too weak to take care of himself and asks his disciples to help find medicine and often doubts the heroine's character; the master who inexplicably steals his disciples and prevents the Bai family from accepting disciples; the emperor and the emperor kiss each other but really have no cp 6

I don't quite understand why so many friends and family groups have been building relationships with this sister and that sister before they are strong enough. Moreover, none of these friends and relatives groups are very useful and cannot help the heroine in the slightest. The heroine only helps others unilaterally and gives benefits. It's frustrating to watch. I feel like the female lead in cultivating immortals does not have the courage of her mother at all. She becomes stronger casually, and then spends a lot of time giving things to various people whose strength and status are lower than hers. Is it interesting?

I was very angry when I saw Chapter 47. The heroine passed the sect assessment and had to look into the two-life mirror to see her past and present lives. It turns out that the heroine was a modern person in her previous life. Is it necessary? I really want to curse people. If I don't add the setting of modern people, I won't be able to write a book, right? She was a modern person in her previous life and then what? It has nothing to do with this article. It is labeled as a local female cultivator of classical fairy tales and then written as a sheep's head to sell dog meat. To me, this is the biggest failure of this article so far.