Immortal Secret

Someone recommended it. To summarize: The heroine thinks she is a very cautious person, but in fact, when she understands 3 points, she thinks she understands 10 points. When she has 3 points of ability, she feels that she has 10 points of ability. She feels that her abilities are the best at her level, and she often makes very "cautious" choices that would put her into a difficulty level of 4-7 points. At the same time, she is very confident that she can solve the problem with her ability of 10 points (actually 3 points), and then she gets stuck every time. It was all because the author was her own child, so she escaped from death through all kinds of coincidences that were forced on her. It was really forced on her, so she thought it was okay and would be so "cautious" next time. However, as a reader, it seems that the heroine has been self-righteous and constantly playing tricks on her, and has not learned her lesson. She also keeps emphasizing that she is very cautious. The following are some specific chapter reviews I was disgusted by the Qingqi brain circuit plot in Chapter 13. I don't know what kind of cautious person can behave like the heroine. In Chapter 16, I was disgusted again. I didn't intend to keep a distance from my stepmother, and "I can't feel close to her." . . . . By Chapter 29, I was disgusted again. I kept emphasizing that the heroine should be cautious, but she always did imprudent things. I don't know if the author wants to make the heroine more precise. In Chapter 59, the heroine is written as a double x. Previously, when others took her things, she used various derogatory terms. It is reasonable for her to take things from strangers. . . Farewell

I love this book so much, it's so well written, I read it again every time I'm in a book shortage

It's so well written, the fighting scenes are so exciting, the author is amazing! It took me a week to finish it. When I read more than 1,000 chapters, I wondered if the author could write a second part. I was a little reluctant to finish it. The ending was still unfinished. The extras were written too hastily. Although the background story was explained, there were only a few strokes about the spiritual world and fairyland. After reading it, I felt that this was the end. , The Human World is already very exciting. When I saw it, it turned out to be a book written in 11 years. Sure enough, I still have to read an old book. The book written by the one on the Cultivation List No. 1 Is simply an insult to Cultivation Literature 😫 People like me who like orthodox Cultivation really can't stand it. One last sentence, Ye Yunting × Gu Yan yyds haha

From the current point of view, only the first volume can be seen; The word count is particularly serious; The writing becomes worse in later chapters, especially after returning to China, which directly reduces the full text by more than a hundred times.

Support novels without male protagonists cultivating immortals. 👍

Overall, the article is quite nice. But the female pig's feet are a bit like a virgin. As long as it was her friend, or a stranger on the roadside, she would shoulder the responsibility without hesitation, and her two experiences of recruiting disciples were shocking. There is also her Gu family, who has only been there for a year and is as affectionate as a holy mother. Her sisters are not necessarily very kind to her, and they have to help them find their grandfather and apprentice! Instead, she keeps away from people who can be more helpful to her. In my opinion, this article means that I must help others who are not as good as me, and I can just be gentlemen with those who are better than me. There are a lot of people asking you if you are willing to cultivate immortality, and no one is unwilling. Are there ordinary people in the world? Killing someone's father and then raising his daughter is so crazy! In the later period, he became an elder in that shabby sect and made a bunch of elixirs to help everyone improve their cultivation, leaving other sects far behind. Isn't it bad to rely on elixirs to improve one's cultivation? And the elders rely on Gu Yan for everything? They say they want to be free and unfettered, but in the end they end up being completely fettered. There are also those juniors who call themselves aunt or aunt all the time, even if they ask others if they have asked them, they call them that way. They are so young.

The story is wonderful. The settings are also OK. The only shortcoming is the writing style. There are many incorrect words and grammatical errors. But it does not hinder the status of this book in my heart. The most important thing is... No CP! ! ! ! ! ! !

Snake Da's Immortal Art is the most exciting female protagonist I've ever seen. The magic weapons are all kinds of strange and magical, and the magical powers are dizzying. The fighting scenes are not inferior to those of male cultivators. The only flaw is that the ending is too rushed. In my opinion "Lai Xian Jue" is the best novel about cultivating immortals that I have ever read, even if it is on a male channel. I used to watch male channels (I am a male) and then switched to female channels. I read ancient novels and various kinds of farming. Finally, I watched the female protagonist cultivating immortals. I found that female channels are great. Too many fairy tales are completely unwatchable. The descriptions of fight scenes are lacking, the supporting characters are brainless, there are all kinds of White Lotus Virgins, and they also like to talk about things. I think it is self-deception or to find a reason for oneself to be both good and evil. There are always only two types of magic weapons: swords. The most uncomfortable thing is the average love brain per person, and the average space of immortals cannot be cultivated without time travel. The master does not dare to say that he is a female cultivator without falling in love with his apprentice. I am the most beautiful every day, and everyone likes me. . . I really hope that there will be a few more books about cultivating immortals on female channels like Immortal Jue, to save female channels cultivating immortals. (It's really funny to say that they fight and kill all day long. Isn't the point of cultivating immortals just about fighting skills? Do the battles between monks have to be fought in the house and in the palace? In the articles on cultivating immortals, you also have to think about love, love, you, pet me, and I love you all day long. No wonder female channels cultivating immortals are becoming more and more in decline.)

It's so long-winded, it doesn't feel like she's cultivating immortality, it feels like the heroine is saving the world. But don't emphasize the end of love and love. Here, you should abandon your emotions with mortals, and when there is injustice on the road, you should bring the whole family together to develop. It is called morality. Don't you think it is contradictory? I feel that the heroine is like a holy mother bitch.

The heroine is anything but ordinary. . . Wherever you go, you can always bump into a big event that has been planned for many years. You can always become a variable in this big event, and you can always get the maximum benefit 🤫

I'm back to watch Immortal Jue again. From the current perspective of many people, the plot and characterization of Xian Jue are average. But I want to say that this book was written ten years ago. Some of the descriptions and plot settings will definitely feel old-fashioned when you read it now. But if you don't read it with the same critical eye as when reading old books, you will find that many other parts are still very classic. For example, the fighting skills of Xian Jue are really well written, and I am very invested every time I watch it. I read both men's and women's videos. In my opinion, most of the fairy tale cultivation novels in the past two years are not as good as the old book "Xianjue" in terms of plots of fighting. Many of them are dry and rigidly written, like playing a card game. But the Immortal Technique is not like that. Whether it is the movement of body movements or the connection and use of magic weapons, you come and go, ever-changing, and very exciting. The Immortal Jue is a classic of immortality cultivation in my heart. In my personal opinion, if the author publishes Immortal Jue in recent years. It can also be ranked in the top five in the Qidian female channel's articles on immortality. If male channels and female channels are included, in the entire category of immortality, I think there will definitely be a place in the top 50.

The heroine doesn't know anything, she's careless in the name of caution, people, beasts, or things appear to help her in all kinds of crises, and she has no strength yet she still tries all kinds of tricks 😒 Enough is enough

Jump ahead and see Chapter 70. I advise all fellow Taoists to run away. All kinds of outrageous views are not a matter of righteousness or righteousness, they are simply disgusting. A friend dies saving the protagonist, and entrusts his sister to the protagonist before he dies. The protagonist encounters his sister being charged by a creditor (50 spirit stones), and the protagonist stops the creditor from demanding debt. The creditor asked the protagonist to repay the spirit stones on behalf of his sister. The protagonist had no money and began to kidnap the creditor morally, "As a foundation-building monk... Your shop is so big... You shouldn't ask for debt just for a mere 50 spirit stones." Then the protagonist angrily accused the creditor of being aggressive and said that he would repay the debt for his sister. The cool and handsome man threw out 15 spiritual stones. If there were not enough spiritual stones, he asked a friend next to him to give out. He said: "As the head disciple, he has a rich net worth. I will not be embarrassed not to help." All I can say is that you are so embarrassed. This is forcing others to help you pay back the money. Author you yourself wrote "Friends Smiling Wryly", so why are you so embarrassed to ask others to pay back the money for you? It's so awkward and disgusting.

I'm very anxious now and have to come and see it every few hours. My long review is just waiting to be sorted out. Snake Da just came up to see the discrepancies in a bunch of small details I found. I don't know if it's disturbing or not. I hope Snake Da's mood will not be affected. Tomorrow's long review will also have both praise and criticism, but Snake Da, please believe me, believe in my love for you, and believe in my love for this work~

This book is really good. It is the only fairy-cultivation novel that can be compared with male videos in my mind. If you are worried about the clichés, just read this book. It was completed in 2014. It is really good. Most of the female videos I read are about sword cultivators and they all promote the plot. Of course, this does not mean that the plot is not important. The plot is as important as the fighting, and the characters are also very important.，                                    —n😅

I have always felt that this is the top book for female channels to cultivate immortality. Maybe everyone has their own preferences. I like this kind of book where you fight with various magic weapons and hunt for treasures. It is also the main line of male channels for mortals. Most of the other female-friendly books have few fights and are either romance or intrigues and conspiracy theories. The plots are all different, but I still like throwing magic weapons into fights 😥 It's a pity that this book ended too early. It would have been more popular two years later.

I want to read a novel about immortality with a male protagonist

This book is so strange. He kills the bad guys, doesn't take the storage bag, and is still poor. He even gets a shop but doesn't take any magic weapons. Is it to show that the protagonist is powerful and wants to earn everything by himself?

Why not write about Gu Yan's fairy world? This is my favorite female protagonist who is cultivating immortals. I like it so much 😍

The most classic part of this book is the part about returning to Xuhai. It is one of the most impressive plots among all the female protagonists cultivating immortals I have ever read.

The rest of it is so boring and wordy that I can't stand it anymore.

Female channel, cultivating immortals I only obey Director Gu and Director Gu Director Gu She is not awesome She is the kind that is rare Her behavior is very obscene She often steals other people's treasures when she disagrees The world is big and labor is the biggest Who is Director Jian A small half of the non-CP cultivating circles belong to Director Jian Everyone is worried Ghosts are worried Senior Sister Yashan I just want to kill you What can you do to me Starting point You translate Translation: What is true. A strong female cultivating immortality A strong female cultivating immortality means that there is no male protagonist in sight for three to five hundred chapters The female protagonist fights her way to heaven from the sea of blood and corpses Anyone who stands in my way, innocent or not, must die Think about it You are lying on the bed I was blowing on the air conditioner, drinking a drink and reading a novel on my phone Suddenly I was fed a mouthful of Mary Sue dog food So A life without CP is a good life

This heroine doesn't have a very good brain, she often ends in an anticlimax and is reckless, hahaha

This book is really the top one in cultivating immortals. I don't know why it is not popular 🙂🙂 Anyway, after reading so much, I really can't find anything better than this one. The male channel Dao Zhengfeng and Xuanhun Daozhang can compete with this one. Personal opinion... There are so many negative comments in the comments. Don't be fooled. This book is really super good. I just don't know when the second part will be released.

This book has 5.06 Million words, 5 million of which are about fighting techniques. . . . . I'm really convinced. . . . In the first half, I was reading line by line. Later, whenever there was a fight, I would just cross it. As a result, the heroine kept fighting and fighting. The author was not tired when writing, but I was really tired after reading it.

Why are so many reviews so one-sided? I think this book is very well written. The heroine is decisive in killing, thoughtful, far-sighted, proud, and has a sharp heart. The most important thing is that the heroine is not a virgin! ! The heroine just has her own principles and persistence in her heart and won't do anything villainous. Moreover, the author's writing style is not bad, the various settings are richly written, and the world view is well established.

I don't know why this book is still in Qingyun Edition. The author's writing style is really too childish and I really can't stand it. It wasn't that seven people came to besiege the family. The heroine was first plotted by her stepmother and brothers. She finally rushed to the battlefield and helped her uncle once. But after helping, the two of them actually met there and chatted? Really, the family has reached a critical moment of survival, and the two of them are still chatting there, oh, they have met Uncle Six. Ah, you are worthy of being the daughter of so and so, she is so powerful, what the heck, there is something wrong, your family is about to be taken care of by others, and the whole family is about to die. Okay, still chatting there. I really don't understand

The climb is finally over, and the story is basically complete with the extra chapter. Overall it's pretty good. The best part is the part about Guixuhai, with its twists and turns and the characters' distinct personalities. The storyline is interesting, sentimental and meaningful, which makes people happy. From Cangwu to Ascension, the writing got worse and worse. After reaching Yuanying, it seemed to be in a hurry to end, and the characters became more and more blurred. They just retreated, upgraded, and eliminated opponents. The plot was boring and boring, and the characters were overbearing, irrational, and unreasonable, and unpopular. Maybe the author also realized that, and added a little bit of Island Master Wen in the extra chapter, which made the story a lot softer.

There are too many pitfalls in this book, and this book is the most classic example of a double-standard heroine. It has the aura of all kinds of deliberate routines that promise and forget about what is done. There is also a duplicitous false virgin character who says she is not curious about anything and wants to keep a low profile but actually interferes in everything. Then others are brainless. As far as the protagonist can think, everyone older than the protagonist is mentally retarded. After reading more than 200 chapters, I couldn't stand it and still gave up! To be honest, if the author made so many mistakes in writing a book, he would probably have such a personality himself!

I also want to read the chapters on the spiritual world and the fairy world. Has the author thought about continuing them?