Ready Player One in Time and Space

This book is really unkind to me. Maybe it's because I entered the industry too late, and I haven't heard of most of the anime. I searched Douyin for the general plot of the anime, but I couldn't find it. The only ones I have seen are Zhanchi, Kill City, Brother Killer, Demon Slayer, Ghoul, and Fate. Three or four different worlds were mixed into a copy of the fantasy world, especially the ghoul. It was difficult to encounter and see them. In the end, the total number of scenes may not be as complete as ten chapters. The most poisonous point is that I finally understood the story of the Parrot Goddess, but in the next chapter after the battle, I suddenly returned to the main world. There was no goodbye, no summary, and then all the girlfriends in that world were sold to others. I really can't understand why the author would write so many anime in one world. I wanted to see a ghoul plot but added Shi Jian, which seems nondescript and crazy. It's really unfriendly.

Poisonous Milk Wind Jonin, every time he says something is almost done, and when he can update it properly, there will always be a big update break. It is recommended not to say at the end of the chapter that the next update will be stable.

I finally understand. This is a two-dimensional otaku who wants to include all the heroines he likes in his harem.

First of all, I felt that the early plot was pretty good and worth watching, but soon I felt that it was confusing. Maybe it's because I don't read comics or anime. About halfway through the game, I felt that the protagonist was just doing the plot for the sake of completing the plot, with not many other things interspersed in the middle. It felt like the protagonist spent too much time fighting. There is also a timeline that I don't quite understand, and I also have a little bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder. Anyway, the more I watch later, the more uncomfortable I feel. It just feels like it's boring to watch and a pity to abandon. The above is purely personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.

There was a feeling in the early stage, but it fell apart after reaching the Goblins 1. The characters are stiff, various characters have different facial features, and the harems come one after another. After the new characters appear in the first hundred chapters, the presence of the characters will drop off a cliff until they disappear completely. If you can't control it, please don't write so many characters. It is very rude to readers who like a certain character very much 2. The protagonist has complicated abilities, upgrades, and skills, and there is no reasonable plan at all. You can see that the protagonist is constantly cheating, stronger cheats, and super powerful cheats. To be fair, you can strengthen the protagonist, and the blacksmith sends information for weapon upgrades. If you push Dracula, you will get dice directly. When you encounter difficulties, you can directly cheat. I am really ready to push all the way to the end of this book. Then why not go back and start the car? At least everyone has the same license plate, and they are pushing forward all the way 3. There is no main line. You may not know what the protagonist wants to do after reading hundreds of chapters, although he wants to be the number one player and wants power. . . But there is no resonance at all. This person came to Long Aotian through time travel. There is still a little change in mentality, but it feels like a running account. The protagonist kills B at A to get C, and the next chapter is the protagonist D kills E to get F. There is no freshness just by changing the map. The writing style is infinitely close to the routine, and the aura at the beginning is almost gone Well, the author is free to write whatever he wants. The above only represents his personal opinion.

The author is now immersed in animation for the elderly and cannot extricate himself. I am now in college, and I have never watched any of the old anime written by the author. I feel that these contents will become more and more niche in the future.

Is the author's writing good? I don't know how to describe it, it makes me feel quite comfortable. The storyline is also more in line with my current appetite. I was attracted to Academy Apocalypse elsewhere. I haven't read many chapters at the moment, and now I mainly feel that the protagonist is too lucky. It was so difficult to render the dungeon at the beginning, and so many people died. Then the protagonist defeated the BOSS in seconds, broke the record, and got the hidden rewards. It seems that the protagonist entered the dungeon just to break the record. Maybe Achievers players will read it more happily. The protagonist seems to have never been unlucky in it. But this will bring about a problem, which is also a problem that is easy to occur in the invincible flow, that is, it will dilute the interest of the protagonist's journey, which is the same as single-player hacking, greatly shortening the life of the game, and here it is shortening the life of the novel. I often skip the part where the protagonist challenges the BOSS alone, and my teammates try their best to defeat the BOSS. The author mentioned the Matthew Effect in the novel as an explanation for the protagonist's continuous explosion in combat power, but this makes the protagonist's fight a bit monotonous. Anyway, there are failures, and it will be the same if you skip one or two dungeons. I still like the theme of invincible flow, but I would like to see the protagonist develop more sophisticated usage around his plug-ins, play with the plug-ins, and make the storyline more delicate, instead of just one high-end prop after another, with swords, fire, swords and explosions. I have only watched a small part of it, and I feel that the protagonist can build an army in the future.

It's okay, but it's just a harem novel. I don't like reading this kind of harem novel. Overall it's pretty good. It's just that I don't like harem stories. I almost have one or two in every world. A little uncomfortable. It's a little bit toxic but the setting is very good.

Overall, this book can be said to be of excellent quality. The advantages and disadvantages are very obvious The author's writing style and some plot designs are very good. It can definitely be ranked at the forefront among similar works. The shortcomings are mainly about the plot rhythm. The early stage is actually okay, but the plot rhythm from the middle stage onwards is really outrageous. Each world spends dozens of chapters explaining the world background and interpersonal relationships. The groundwork has just been laid, the hole has been dug, and it will stop within ten chapters. The remaining pitfalls are completely non-existent. Especially for the elimination mission, 40% of the mission has been advanced in more than sixty chapters. Just when it felt like it was getting better, the author directly used six chapters to take away the remaining 60% of the progress plus the ending. Considering the author's statement in the first few chapters that "I'm starting to get back into shape", it feels even more abstract. In short, the book is still a good book, and the highlights of this book are overwhelmingly many. The above are mainly just complaints that are not unpleasant at all. Everyone's evaluation criteria are different. Perhaps many of the points that are unacceptable to me are not problems at all to others, and may even be advantages.

Did the author write a novel before? That book was a masterpiece to me at the time. I didn't even read Douluo Dalu very much, so I was deeply impressed by that book. The protagonist is a high school student with superpowers. The superpower seems to be turning mental power into very sharp threads. In the first few chapters, he used the threads to kill a vicious dog. By the way, the author was also called Feng Jōnin. I remember I read that novel five years ago, when I was in junior high school. By the way, the title of that book seems to have the word "Crimson" in it.

It would be great if it can be updated. I hope the author can maintain his own style and write millions of words. I like your book very much. Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's the fifth day. Did something happen to the author? You must pay attention to your safety. Of course, if nothing happens, please post a post as soon as possible and restore the update.

Finally updated, I thought the author was unfortunately quarantined.

Boss, why haven't you updated it? It's actually very well written. You can just ignore the comments from guys who are just insulting and nitpicking. It's not easy to create a work with inspiration, so wouldn't it be a pity to stop halfway? At any rate, there must be a beginning and an end. Even if the ending is not good, there is an ending. In this way, in the future, if you accidentally look through the books you wrote before, you will still have satisfaction, memories, and a sense of accomplishment. There are tens of millions of books at the beginning and a few are finished. I hope the author will come back and continue to update.

I don't know who else remembers the otherworldly painting soul written by the author! This book is my first love. The writing is so good that it's hard to put into words. Every summoned character is portrayed with such depth. It's amazing. I hope the author can finish this masterpiece. Not to mention for us, for the flesh-and-blood characters in the work, in a sense they have been stuck in a certain time period and lost their color! It's regrettable just thinking about it!

The creativity of the novel is still good. After 404, a lot of content has been changed. It can be said that it is very attentive. I saw the world of cleverness in one go. I have not watched any other anime except Academy Apocalypse. It does not affect reading. The setting of the key to time and space is okay, but it is used too frequently and too casually. It is also difficult to obtain, and it is not like the plot-related props in Samsara Paradise. I am a genuine pirated version and read it 😏. Many interesting plots have been deleted.

If it is not updated for three years, it will take three days to update, right?

This book is based on eunuchs, please give up

Play directly against the enemy's scoundrels, learn the self-destruction skill and use it all the time. If you die and resurrect, use it to ensure that the opponent will explode into pieces.

Annoying 2B Why is it gone if it's gone?😭😭

Sixty-seventh new chapter? The first sixty-six didn't rush the author. For the sake of the small money, how crowded are they? 😜😜😜

I'm a big liar╭( ′• o •′ )╭☞This is the person!

I suddenly saw that this book had a limited exemption. When I clicked in, I was still thinking that the eunuch's one-year book was still exempt. Later, I found out that the author actually didn't cut it. He also made major changes to many past chapters for the sake of harmony. To be honest, it is rare to see such an honest author.

EveryoneThere is no need to be too demanding, as long as it does not break certain bottom lines, such as cuckolding a dead girl, and the protagonist's girl should He should be regarded as the one who belongs to him in countless parallel time and space. There is no such thing as being cheated. Since the protagonist of the original book can still conquer so many, you should just take it as the default protagonist halo. Most of the people who read the book can see the end of the future. Thinking too much will only increase the trouble.

╭(′▽`)╯ Su Zhanmei in the Reincarnation Paradise, Chen Dachui of the Ghost Story Association, Han Liucai, the super mechanical machine, Han Boss in the cell prison, Luo Shadiao at the end of the world, the dead ghost in the refrigerator, the Tarot Club of the Lord of Mysteries, Lu Xiaoshu, the king, spare your life, Yue in the harem of the infinite prophet, Li, the fierce player, and Gu Shaoshang, the projection of the heavens! Chen Hao Ren from the Li Zhu Cave, Fang Worker from the Gu Dao Realm, Feng Bujue from the Horror Paradise, Grimm Beast from the Wizarding World, Chen Dudu from Fantasy Yitian, Han Paopao from the Mortal Cultivation Immortal, Big Muscle from the Extreme Demon Road, Tu Ning Liheng from the Bloody Hand Man.

Are there any similar books? Please recommend a few. If you want to be on the sidelines with this 🤓😜😁

The author's writing of female characters is quite good and quite interesting. It feels like it is flesh-and-blood rather than a rigid novel. Some of the settings are also very rich and not rigid. Of course, the author's plot ideas are quite interesting and lively. Originally, I don't like overly Westernized world plots, which feel very boring and incomprehensible, but the author's writing made my eyes light up. , Is very interesting, and the character interaction is also very exciting. It makes me want to check it out as a person who has never seen the movie and played Baywatch. It makes me feel more involved in the plot, and makes me feel immersed in the plot. It feels like watching an anime. Some novels feel that they don't write about the female protagonist. It's because the emotional aspects are not well written. The emotional expression is very clichéd, very bloody and unrequited.

The best thing about this book is that it doesn't copy the original story, there will be 'intrusions', 'prefixes', and 'suffixes'. The original story is actually very good, but the new version is better than the old version because there are some parts that have to be avoided, which are really unnatural...

Extra of Option B (1/10000) (ಡωಡ)

Finally, a new chapter appears in a bunch of fanfics about Naruto, Pirates, and Death fighting to death! Whether the writing is good or not is another matter, but this kind of fanfic writing a new series must be supported! Are all Qidian anime fanfics filled with uncle-level authors? They were all writing about things from more than ten years ago, as if he had only watched two or three anime in his life, flipping over and over again. It was so disgusting!