Tsar Azir

Like this, first of all, the Desert Emperor is not smooth sailing in terms of the plot. He was indeed not favored at the beginning. To be precise, in a sense, it was his brother's short life that allowed him to inherit the throne. This is true. His personality before boarding the plane was not revealed in the story, but judging from the story after he boarded the plane, he was an enlightened, domineering, far-sighted, and affectionate person. His policies were very domineering and beyond that era. The author has arranged to become a time traveler, and this can definitely be guaranteed. There is no problem with the harem stallion, because the Desert Emperor did have several concubines, and they all truly loved each other. This can be seen in the story of the Tsar. When he was talking about the goddess of war, there was a narration about his relationship with his concubines. So there is no problem if there are more female protagonists. What's the problem? Speaking of the main line of the story, the author did not go beyond the original plot setting in the arrangement, but the author does not know much about the routines of writing books. There are some things that even experienced authors dare not touch easily, and the author is very stinging. Indeed, some readers who pay attention to the plot can accept it, but how many of these readers account for the number of Everbright readers? There needs to be a compromise between routine and non-routine. Starting from the plot, the author wants to write something unique and original, and really write a period of history. However, the plot is too much, and it loses the entertainment that Internet works should have. This degree must be grasped. Author, why do you write things? This is very important. If you want to write something you like without caring about other people's opinions, just read it if you can agree with it, and don't want to be ignored (saying it sounds good means sticking to your own style, saying it sounds bad is called self-pleasure)? Or do you hope to get more recognition, be accepted by everyone, and become one of the many old authors with good reputations? Author, you see some people are supporting you in the comments, and some are refuting you. I saw some people are sincerely defending you, and even quarreling with others. But please remember, author, not everyone who doesn't like to read your book will specifically leave a message. Many people just leave if they don't like it. The result of your persistence is likely to be that the more you write, the fewer people you will read. To be honest, you also understand how many words it takes to put a work on the shelf, and how many more words you need to write after it is put on the shelf. Can those niche readers alone support your motivation to continue writing? What I said was a bit too straightforward and not pleasant to listen to. I don't want to quarrel with others. I hope the author will not be angry after reading what I wrote. There are fewer and fewer people who are willing to write non-routine things at the starting point. The author is ambitious, but it is a pity that he has no experience and has not arranged a good outline. I hope that the plot can be rounded out. Come on, the author.

Every day when I come to read it, I find someone scolding the author. But, I find it strange. If a novel, from beginning to end, is the same as the content you have seen before, it must conform to your ideas, your expectations, the settings you know, etc., Etc., Then why not just go to the background of LOL heroes? Of course, there is no denying that catering to the needs of readers is market research that an author should do. However, if the author has some new ideas that he wants to write about, maybe everyone should read more before speaking. Kings are not born, they need to grow. If I was born to be a king, it might not be this series. I think what the author wants to write is not an invincible article that has become a king. If you want to farm, you must first breed and cultivate seedlings! ! As for whether it tastes good or not, we will wait until it grows out. So please be a little tolerant. Even if you don't like it, don't just say it's not good. Give the author some space. If you really can't stand it anymore, it would be wise to leave quietly.

Format, Character name: Personality: Position: Hobbies: Quirks: Your supporting actor's background is awesome, but in the story, he may be very naughty. Your background as a bit player may not blink, but it may be very awesome in the story. So you'd better write about the people you like as scumbag, and the people you hate as bad ass, In that case, In the story, the people you like will trample on the soles of your feet those you don't like. Are you a little excited? 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

I want to say one thing, if you use a well-known ID to attract people to come in and read your book, then you must at least write something worthy of the protagonist with this ID image.

Why are there so many people complaining? Obviously, there was so much foreshadowing and God's interview, but then the pig's feet suddenly made a stick and all kinds of national curses. Isn't this poisonous?

Isn't the Tsar our baby daddy?

As in the title...... Okay, you are free to...

Although the current waste-chai genre is not palatable, it's not like I can't find other books starting with the waste-chai genre, and I don't see anyone deliberately criticizing it. Why do so many people want to criticize the author? It's just because your plot arrangement is unreasonable, or your writing style is incompetent. If Azir in this article was really like what you said, the author, and was not taken seriously at the beginning, and the protagonist slowly developed on his own, and only succeeded to the throne after the other brothers who pressured him died, I guess there wouldn't be so many people complaining. The key is that you want to be original. At the beginning, you hold the protagonist high, flying into the sky, and then slams him to the ground. Who can bear it if the reader becomes involved? The protagonist can be ordinary or weak at the beginning, but he will always grow up. However, you come up with an opposite trick. The higher you fly, the harder you fall, which directly kills the reader.

As the title says, it seems that many friends in the book review section are not satisfied with this book. It's okay. Just write down what you want to say, scold, and criticize here. Louzhu promises not to delete any of them! (The writing cannot satisfy everyone. Some people like it, and some will hate it. But the things that can grow are often in bad places, so no matter what opinions you have, please reply here one by one, and I will read it carefully.) Finally, thank you for testing the poison. If the problem is not serious, just eat an orange.

Shurima, your emperor has died! ! ! ! !

Shurima! Your emperor has returned and died! !

Shurima Your emperor dies! ! Shurima Your emperor dies! ! Shurima Your emperor dies! !

Shurima Your emperor dies! 🤓🤓🤓

Shurima, your emperor was beheaded and eaten, and the sun disk was sold! 🤭🤭

Shurima, your emperor is fried hahahaha

Shurima, your emperor 눈_눈 is unknown😊

There is a weird atmosphere in this comment section...

The author began to spread poison, which may have caused some people to disappear because of the slow update. Hey, I feel like this plot, how should I put it? I always feel that the author's writing is very routine, but I can vaguely feel that besides these, there are more depressing things behind it. Hatred distorts people, and revenge is followed by endless emptiness and confusion. Grief can break people down in a certain direction over time. Your book is defined as: Dark The original kingdom of Shurima: It is a powerful human country with leading military strength and technological level. Azir is a young king Another definition of the book here: League of Legends fanfic Strange blood sacrifice The blood sacrifice method that opens the bloodline at the beginning actually uses humans to perform blood sacrifices. They are all soldiers and a defeated country? Believing in the Kingdom of the Sun and using blood sacrifices is a bit unflattering. The place I want to complain about the most is Mr. Zero The name is a big problem, and it has seriously damaged the style of this book. Later it is said that the gravediggers are not from this world, which makes the book weird. And the part about the struggle for power in the Shadow Islands 1analN No damage GG It's so powerful that it can definitely knock Poseidon to pieces. Millennium Lonely Soul vs God Poseidon can directly attack the soul, so the damage dealt by Poseidon is basically real damage. This feeling of being firmly tested by fate is really cool. From the beginning of the prophecy, I felt that the timeline of this book is very strict, and no detail can be easily changed, because in these three years, the protagonist will definitely reach the invincible stage and successfully become the king. This is already invincible. The return of the Ascended One will be within a period of time after he becomes the king. I can't guess whether the author will write according to the timeline of LOL. Now I have taken some skills and names to write my own tsarist plane.

The number of words is too few. Master Weijia is here.