One Piece: The Dragon Claw

The idea at the beginning of this book is very good, and the plot is even better until Gaya Island. I just don't understand why the protagonist with a crazy setting wants to kneel down and lick Luffy and Ace? No changes to the plot? Excuse, how many characters have been killed in the original book, why do you still care about changing the plot? Is this still the protagonist who kills decisively? Setting conflict

Xiaobai's writing style, the writing method of running accounts

If a good person doesn't do anything, he will become a dog.

A decisive protagonist who meets Luffy and Ace can no longer talk or do anything. In Gaya, he even spoiled the story for the sake of the plot. These poisonous points are unacceptable.

I watched a short section before and thought it would make me fatter. Now that I've gained weight, I can't stand it anymore

If you can persist in writing it to the end, it's a good start.

. . The content is quite good, I only watched the first few pictures. . Third person acceptance cannot be sorry

The author is a novice, smooth writing, conflicting settings, and severe forgetfulness.

It's written like a narration, with no feeling at all!

The author is too naive and the logic of the plot makes no sense at all.