One Piece: The Dragon Claw

The book had a great initial concept, and the plot got even better up to Jaya Island. I just don't understand why the protagonist, with his supposedly insane personality, has to fawn over Luffy and Ace? Why not change the plot? That's an excuse. How many characters have they killed in the original work? Why worry about changing the plot? Is this still the decisive and ruthless protagonist we know? There's a conflict in the story's premise!

The writing style is that of a novice, like a diary entry.

Why not be a good person and instead choose to be a dog?

A decisive and ruthless protagonist becomes speechless and incompetent when faced with Luffy and Ace. Jaya even deliberately spoiled the plot for the sake of the story; these are some of the most unacceptable plot points.

I saw a short clip before and thought I'd watch it once it's more complete. Now that it's more complete, I can't watch it anymore.

Being able to finish writing is a good start.

The content is quite good, I only read the first few pages. I can't accept the third-person perspective, sorry.

The author is a novice, writes in a stream-of-consciousness style, struggles to create conflict, and is prone to forgetfulness.

It's written like a narration; it has absolutely no emotional impact!

The author is too naive; the plot is illogical and doesn't make any sense.