The Wild Haired Immortal of Konoha

Jiraiya was very low in his childhood. He had nothing. How could he be accepted as a disciple by the Hokage and form a team with Tsunade and the others? Judging from the later Jiraiya, he was a type with no guidance but a good foundation. Moreover, the training in Sage mode is only suitable for huge chakra. Type, if Jiraiya had not possessed a huge chakra in his childhood, I don't think such a useless person would be favored by the Hokage. Only with a huge chakra and multiple attributes, and not being unable to use ninjutsu like Dai, would such a commoner in the wild be guided by the Hokage?

As for how Tsunade fell in love with Duanhao, I can roughly summarize it from the anime. I don't know if it's right: At that time, Tsunade had a good impression of Orochimaru, but of course she was a little far away from establishing a romantic relationship. There is a detail worth noting. At that time, Orochimaru seemed to be the mentor of Senju Nezhu (? Or the team leader?). Nōshu was working under Orochimaru for training, but an accident caused Nōshu to die miserably. Orochimaru felt sorry for Tsunade, and realized the fragility of life, so he began research on immortality, and his relationship with Tsunade began to alienate. Because of the death of her younger brother, Tsunade wanted to implement a medical ninja system in Konoha, and the upper management was basically opposed to it. When Tsunade needed support the most, her two closest companions did not support Tsunade (Jiraiya taught as a disciple, and Uncle Snake began to shift his focus to immortality). On the contrary, Kato Dan supported Tsunade without hesitation. When a woman was injured and needed support and comfort the most, he gave her a solid shoulder and she naturally got better. Moreover, Kato Dan is handsome and sunny, and full of warmth, which is perfect for Tsunade to heal her injuries.

The poison has been tested... Conclusion: Extremely poisonous! Strength persuades you to retreat! Example 1: Konoha Ninja Village, although there are many disgusting things in it, at least it is not too explicit on the surface. As the author, you put Jiraiya on the fire grill as soon as you arrived, and even the teachers at the ninja school were nakedly contemptuous. The reason was that he was born as a commoner and was not talented enough. Have you considered the situation in Konoha Village at that time? Have you considered that the Sandaime, who cares deeply about his reputation and whose prestige has not yet been deeply rooted in his successor, would allow this to happen? And it is the vegetable garden of the academy where he harvests reputation and loyalty! ? This teacher is probably tired of life! Second: Chapter 6 The young boy from the Hyuga family appears on the scene. He starts off with all kinds of provocative and coquettish moves. The protagonist makes enemies for no apparent reason, and he is also a member of the Hyuga family... You may not understand the rules of the division of the Hyuga family! If he is a person from a separate family, haha, if he dares to yell so loudly in front of Princess Tsunade, the Hyuga family will teach him how to behave. If you are a member of the Zong family, look at which of the wealthy children does not appear to be very good at work and very wealthy... The strict family education they receive is probably unimaginable to outsiders. Otherwise, the Zong family and the Hyuga family would still be able to live freely until now? By the way, do you have any misunderstandings about the children of the wealthy family? Don't you think that most of them are the kind of women who make enemies of their families everywhere, right? That's called the rich generations who suddenly got rich~_~! It is an ancient family that has been passed down for thousands of years. I hope the author has a good understanding of it before writing, otherwise it will be an indistinct understanding and not up to the mark! Finally, although I have been persuaded to quit, I still want to give you a suggestion: don't write Uchiha in a too unbearable way, as you will always have the character of Aotian. Because there are many details in the original plot that show that Uchiha's arrogance lies in the heart, not on the surface. Most Uchiha are not domineering, but are forced out by Danzo and other senior officials! Speaking of the Nine-Tails Rebellion, many Uchiha members of the Konoha Security Force immediately stood on the side of Konoha Village and planned to resist the Nine-Tails, but were stopped by Uchiha Fugaku who noticed the strange situation. To discredit a wealthy family, it's like being too explicit...

In Naruto, there is a young master who behaves badly.

There is no eunuch, Guoba is a bit busy these days 😁, I will probably update from the 1st, National Day.

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Do you need to refine chakra attributes yourself? Why don't others in the Hokage use it? ? ? ?

But he must have extraordinary talents, otherwise who would be willing to accept an apprentice at a young age? Even in a ninja school, you have to be over 10 years old to graduate before there are dedicated teachers, and the third generation is their master, and there are two different concepts.

Who told you that the three great immortal psychic beasts are born with natural chakra, and the toads of Miaomu Mountain also need to be cultivated through toad oil to become immortals. Toad oil is not originally intended for human cultivation, okay? Is it okay that only three people know magic now? Moreover, the Sage Mode was taught to Ōtsutsuki Hagoromo by the Great Toad Sage, not Ōtsutsuki Hagoromo. Otherwise, the Ōtsutsuki clan would not be amazed by this power, okay?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I can't stand it anymore... I can tolerate the leveling up of the protagonist, but I can't stand it if you level up the ninjutsu. You, a fellow, are destroying the three views

There is a reason for the eunuch. He is so poisonous that he can't be more poisonous. He actually still has 110,000 recommendation votes.

It feels like Hinata was written about the Uchiha clan.

When I see it written, Jiraiya saves it first and then talks about it.

Author, what have you written recently? Not to mention it's getting more and more watery, it's inconsistent! I said before that the protagonist has a lot more chakra than the average person! Now he's a pretty ordinary jounin! And this little chakra is enough to open the eight true gates? Still a genin! I'm just wondering, are you writing seriously?

Still the same taste, waste material

This description is too urban plot-oriented...

After reading Chapter 11, I was so poisoned. Tsunade's father can actually escape? ? ? ? ? It's simply the biggest joke in Naruto! Only the first generation of Mu Dun awakened independently. The others who followed were all transplanted with the cells of the first generation, and there were only a few of them. I'm afraid the author has never watched Naruto.

It's not easy to read a Naruto fanfic. I hope the author can write it carefully. To be honest, these chapters are very messy. Let's not talk about jounin and genin. During the chunin exam, Jiraiya was leading the team of jounin. He showed up every day and even had friction with the old sand ninja woman. Other villages didn't know, so didn't his own village know? No matter how much I check, I can't find it out. Are you sure you're not joking?

Is the protagonist a pervert? When Steel Hand touches the protagonist when he is five or six years old, does the protagonist feel it? ! And they are all at kindergarten age, but they talk and act like adults!