
Heavenly Journey
天行
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 5.1M Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
1.6kChapters
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61Recs
3.5kFans
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Reader comments 6
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Don't you put the book next to Ye Zi's works?
After reading a few chapters, I'm still not used to the first person narrative.
No one? Anyway, I think that Tianxing is no less exciting than the unparalleled ones in the world. Although the ending is regrettable, isn't that what life is like? Who can be perfect in everything?
It's a bit disgusting. I've always been disgusted by harem stories, but I'm not disgusted with the scholar and Lu Chen at all. This protagonist is fundamentally different from Lu Chen and the scholar. Lu Chen and the female scholar character are both fond of each other from the bottom of their hearts or something else, especially Lu Chen and Lin Yixin, who depend on each other for life and death. The other female characters are also good to a certain extent. It took time to develop into a relationship, but the male protagonist named Ding just wanted to have sex with each other. He saw that the leader of the team was good-looking and had all kinds of obscene descriptions. Then he said that it would be better if he chased you back then, and then he immediately went to have sex with Tang Yun. When I saw that I had conquered Avril, a pet, and gained a skill in one sentence, it made me sick.
It looks good. The pace of the whole book is well controlled, and most of the pitfalls are recovered at the end. There are also shortcomings. It is too repetitive in the middle period. Basically, I finish the Dragon Domain mission and then pick up the occasional activities. I write very quickly later on, and the important plot of defeating Akashi is covered in one stroke. , The emotional part is also the most regrettable. Just as Ye Zi said himself, he wanted to follow the template of Unparalleled in the World but halfway through he gave up on pure love. Moreover, as the second heroine, this film is much better than He Yi's portrayal of Su Xiran. When I saw the protagonist who accompanied the protagonist, Fourteen Hundred Zhang really felt sorry for her when she said she wanted to leave, and compared to Xiran, Tang Yun's portrayal in the middle period, that is, after the confession, was completely inferior. She was too far behind Lin Yixin, and she also kidnapped the protagonist and went to Europe when she said she would go to Europe. In reality, they were immediately divided. Beichen is so big The main character in the stall is also obsessed with love and goes to the game as soon as his head heats up. In the game for the sake of a girl, there are hundreds of thousands of people and dozens of brothers outside. Therefore, Tian Xia Wushuang is about pure love and does not let He Yi let go. This movie should have a harem but can't, which is really annoying. As for Fusu, the classic swordsman, and the setting of the spiritual garden is too abrupt, so I can't bring it into the game at all. The official game is a quagmire in several parts. I'm really speechless. Is Ye Zi being suppressed? How can it be so dark?
I feel a little bit bookish. Didn't He Yi founded Rain Cube? Why did he write about resigning from ggs?