One Piece Supreme Sword God System

The protagonist has become a bit bloated. He has some strength and becomes the kind of person he hates. He forgets why he needs to become stronger. Is he still the one who loses himself?

The world of One Piece is better about adventure and survival struggles. The disgusting character of the protagonist is really disgusting.

You've finished reading your old book, but you still can't solve the book shortage. Speed update

Writing about pirates as a fantasy? The monsters are out

Why smoke so many? If you smoke just one Saitama, you will be invincible.

Since the book is called Sword God, the content should be relatively similar, not a hodgepodge, and the introduction should also be changed. Personal suggestion🙂

Can the timeline and characters' ages be more rigorous?

I only saw four pictures and slipped away. If you don't say anything else, just say that the person you have a crush on is with the person you hate. You are unhappy, not jealous, and want to kill them. Why? Does it have anything to do with you that the two of them are together? Is it wrong for someone to ignore you and not be friends with you?

Emmm, even a B-level Aaron is exhausted. This one is a bit skinny.

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Where is the exercise, where is the training, it all depends on the system. How can half of the system be gone and become a waste?

Speaking of writing about Sword God, how can we not have a ghost swordsman with empty hands and a grown-up character?