Star Canidi

Modern people with nine years of compulsory education are not as good as a goblin elder socially and ideologically. If they really travel through time, they will become completely aboriginal. The knowledge of modern society is the golden finger of time travel. If you don't use it, you can find goblin aboriginals, collective farming, industrial training, assembly line production, farming and technology, large-scale agricultural production, and the points system provides so much modern knowledge. Make good use of it.

This protagonist is too weak and incompetent. Apart from talking about love, he only cries and likes to put on a show. Feeling useless

Spice and Wolf, I didn't expect the author to have watched this anime.

The stories of other people are good, but the protagonist is really not good. His behavior and character affect the viewing experience.

It's really uncomfortable for Chinese people to write about Western culture and it still smells like Japan! Most retainers used by Western nobles in Japan are knights and servants, right? Chinese retainers

I think that in the past, in such an environment, the first thing is the development of force, and then the messy agriculture and so on. After all, you have to survive first, and then there is the problem of character. If you are too weak, you will cry at every turn. You are not Liu Bei. Power belongs to yourself. Everything is nothing. If you die, there will be nothing. There are a lot of outside lines, and there are several chapters in one writing. You can intersperse some of them, but no one likes to read those.

If the hegemony is not yet achieved, how can we talk about the love between children?

I just want to ask if the protagonist becomes handsome in the end? Have you succeeded in losing weight? If I stay in the fat house, I won't read further...

There is no right or wrong in war. If you let them go if you win, will they let you go if they win? Are the lives of more than a hundred people so worthless? What would their family, children, and friends among the more than a hundred people think? The total number of soldiers is just over 300. You are kind, you are so kind. In the novel world you wrote, if there were no knights, human beings would become slaves, or food. It also affects development, and life is lost. Development is useless.

Author, you should add some intelligence to the characters you write, otherwise I would really advise you to quit. I feel that the author should be a newcomer, but he is not bad. He is much stronger than ordinary newcomers. Please work harder!

This book is okay, but there are so few bookshelves?

The book is good, but try not to be systematic. After the protagonist becomes a god, he hopes to develop followers, use technology to farm, make other gods more powerful, and unify the planet. It's pretty good to write about the Battle of the Heavens genre.

It was so uncomfortable to read, it moved from east to west, and it wasn't like making a movie. It made me confused. Come on, author, mindless writing suits me, so I ran away.

I hope that the two heroines will be as happy as each other except for the heroine.

If you treat Holo as your wife, I won't watch it

The protagonist can not only use technology, artillery battleships, and steam engines, but also use fantasy racial biological magic to tame Warcraft mounts to form cavalry, tame flying dragons and rocs to form an air force for bombing, and fly biological aircraft carriers to power steam engines. You can conquer girls and their tribes, families, and races, shrink and annex and conquer, form powerful vertical and horizontal alliances to attack far and near, and form a multi-racial sea, land and air alliance camp. Don't develop technologies like airplanes, steel battleships, and tanks. Airships are of limited use. Of course, the air force in the fantasy world must be dragons and birds. Just focus on artillery and steam engines, otherwise it would become a military historical novel. The sea race, battleship artillery, flying race aircraft carrier, and sail battleship are not suitable for aircraft carriers. Steam engines or magical arcane power need to be developed. The technology is limited to artillery and steam engines, and the rest cannot be used. Floating islands, even floating continents, civilization in the sky. There are four major civilization systems: land (human race, giant race, insect race, dinosaur race, ferocious beasts, giant beasts, auspicious beasts, and some flying races), underground, sky, and ocean (offshore amphibious, island amphibious, and pure sea race). Each civilization system has army and air force races. Every civilization has several intelligent races that fight against each other. First it was within one civilization, then two civilizations, and finally all four major civilizations were involved. There are three main points. The first is that there should be no gods, demons, legends and extraordinary things. The combat power level system is downplayed and a real fantasy world is presented. The second is that the emotional plot must be impactful, especially the love plot, which must be titillating rather than nauseating. Third, the rhythm should not be too fast or too slow. There should be no hints of pretentiousness or foreshadowing that a big game of chess is waiting, or that apocalyptic disaster will come. This is very childish and disgusting. There are also ferocious beasts, huge beasts, strange beasts and auspicious beasts. You can draw inspiration from the Classic of Mountains and Seas as well as various Chinese myths, stories, strange stories and novels. To construct a Chinese-style fantasy world, the world view must be deep and impactful. Break away from the traditional binary moral and ethical framework. Race, civilization, beliefs, and interests transcend the flat binary values ​​of morality, right and evil, and enter an objective and macroscopic three-dimensional worldview. I also don't like those dark novels that pretend to be cruel, bloody, violent and terrifying. I really hope for a grand and sophisticated fantasy novel. Naval battles, air battles. Aircraft carriers of flying races, air and space battleships, air fortresses, air and space carriers carrying flying races.

It feels like a fairy tale!

The author's writing is good, but what do you want to do with a hammer and a stick? As I write one story line, I suddenly jump to other lines. Don't you think it's abrupt?

The book is good, but try not to be systematic. After the protagonist becomes a god, he hopes to develop followers, use technology to farm, make other gods more powerful, and unify the planet. It's pretty good to write about the Battle of the Heavens genre.

There are too many story lines and it's a bit annoying to read. Does this book have a main character?

It feels like it's all about system writing. . .

I don't even dare to kill an annoying 1, I'm too timid to be strong.

The book is okay, but not popular.

Are there any mandatory tasks later?