The Transformation of a Stunning Beauty

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I feel that Little Sun King may be a trumpet whose wonderful writing creates dirty things. After all, in Chapter 135, the author wrote a plot about transforming into a comic book artist. Moreover, the book "Wonderful Writing" was not updated 2 months ago, and "Little Sun King" was published 2 months ago. So it is suspected that the two authors may be the same person. 😄

Does anyone know of some good transformation novels that have been blocked by Qidian? I hope they can tell good people a safe life.

First of all, congratulations to Little Sun for being released on June 1st. Another girl has taken the right path of exchanging tickets with circles (wrong)~ Here I write down my insights into each chapter of this book since I started pursuing it, and provide the author with timely feedback when writing the article. I hope it will be helpful. First of all, let me state that this is the opinion of one family and does not represent the views of other readers. If there are any differences, I hope everyone will understand (bow). 1. The beginning. The beginning of this article is amazing. If the author Ji is not a veteran but a newcomer, it shows that he is really talented. The first chapter of this article actually only does one thing, which is to explain the special gender setting of the protagonist being Yiren (this is a cool point). Don't think this is a simple matter. You need to figure out what is it about your novel that attracts readers. What are my selling points and settings? An interesting character? Is it a special worldview? It is very technical to be able to thoroughly refine these ideas and put them at the beginning to attract readers to read on. In short, 90% of the newcomers we have met cannot grasp these things well. (Reader's emotional guidance is +) Chapters 2 and 3 continue to guide the reader's attention and directly start the plot of the copycat pretending to be slapped in the face, and the connection is smooth and smooth. It can be seen that the author wrote the three golden chapters well. He must have put a lot of effort into revising them, right? (Reader's Emotional Guidance Chapter 2—, Chapter 3+) The rest of this chapter until Chapter 8 is the plot of the online article "The Change of Stars", which is the first climax of the book. The climax was very enjoyable to watch. Anyway, I have definitely followed this book since I saw it. (Emotional Guidance+) Here is a brief explanation of the meaning of the (- +) sign, which is my personal habit. Our understanding of the essence of online writing is "guiding readers' emotions." The author's ability to guide readers' emotions determines the height of a cool article (note that this only refers to cool articles). When the author suppresses the reader's emotions, it is marked with a minus sign, and when the author guides the reader's emotions positively, it is marked with a plus sign. One minus and one plus is the process from suppression to explosion. Note that the minus sign here is not a real minus sign, but a false minus sign. If the protagonist is suppressed, loses something, or encounters bad things, it cannot be a real loss or suppression; it is temporary and fake. For example, in this book, the protagonist wrote "The Change of Stars". At first, neither the author nor the editor looked down on the protagonist, thinking that she was overdrafting and wanted to pounce. But we readers know that this is not true, and the great point is that there will be a cultivation plot later. We actually felt secretly happy when we watched the protagonist being ridiculed (you natives are so ignorant, how could you know that my overhaul is really scary)! This secret feeling in the heart makes people look forward to the day when the truth is revealed. Once the truth is revealed, the secret feeling will immediately turn into a real feeling of satisfaction. This is the process of Gao Cao. So the technique we summarized is: Suppression must not be real suppression, it and explosion are two sides of the same coin. Buried within the minus sign is the seed of the plus sign.

The Lily Party believes that the soul should be the main thing, and the male soul should be with the female soul. It does not matter whether the body is male or female. The Marrying Party believes that the body should be the main thing. The male body should be with the female body. The soul does not matter. This is my understanding.

This aunt is too poisonous. I want to persuade her to quit. It makes me sick. She treats her niece as a cash cow and even pushes her into a fire pit. I can't stand it at all.

Is the scene in the maid cafe really disgusting? Sister, are you a copycat? Isn't this kind of image of an aunt really disgusting? She doesn't consider the dangers or her niece's thoughts at all and thinks about pushing her out to satisfy the crowd? The law has relevant protection regulations. I don't think about anything but my turnover. I really don't know what the purpose of writing this paragraph is, to satisfy my inner fantasy of being sought after?

Little Rabbit, be good and open the door. The squid is about to come in. The dirty demon king won't say much

This book is really poisonous. The main character is a lolita, a virgin bitch and a good guy. I really can't stand it anymore and want to shit.

The setting is very interesting, but what I want to say is that this book was really brought down by copywriting. I saw more than one novel with a novel world view and a good plot, but it had to be copied, and then the whole novel was brought down a level.