I'm Really Not an NPC

After reading 300+ chapters, I plan to quit. The early stage was okay (I can't tell if it's because I haven't read this type of article before, it's relatively novel, but at least it's interesting). Then it gets... More and more poisonous. Summarized what I think are the poisonous points. (Note here: I read about 1 or 200 chapters a few months ago. I can't remember clearly, but my impression is okay; I planned to gain weight for a few months but didn't read it; I have read more than 100 chapters in the past few days, so the following paragraphs focus on 200~300+ chapters) 1. Changing the map is too blunt, and there is not much connection between the events and characters before and after. The author probably wrote it based on upgrades, activities, and quest lines, but there was almost no foreshadowing or suspense. When the map is changed, almost all the supporting characters are replaced and they are all from the same template? So what's the difference besides the name? 2. A routine is used to the end, the supporting characters are forced to lose their wits, and strangely they are not interesting. [Author's routine 1]: The protagonist hides his strength (of course there is a reason to not want to reveal his identity), and the supporting role looks down and ridicules when watching → →→ The protagonist laughs and waits for a slap in the face (well, Yue Ling is very cold and will not show it) → → → The opponent looks down on and mocks → → → The protagonist's strength slaps the opponent in the face, and the move reveals the identity: Yue Ling/Mysterious Man → → → The supporting role "collective amnesia" when watching the movie Wow, it turns out to be a goddess! Praise the goddess~→→→The protagonist gets the benefits→→→Change the map and repeat [Author's routine 2]: There are always people trying to trick the protagonist, and each reason is for a certain treasure/system reward╮(￣▽￣)╭There are a lot of complaints in this chapter, so I won't go into detail. [Author's Routine 3]: If the strength gap is too large, it is obviously an impossible task. Forcibly give the supporting character a head/experience/gift package to promote the plot (such as upgrading the protagonist). (So it's three routines? It becomes boring after repeated fatigue. 3. Most of the supporting characters have the same template, and there is no difference in individual personality. [The newbie worships the boss type] [You have to be the BB type if you can't see Taishan] [I don't know the protagonist Protect the protagonist and become a teammate's friend type when he is strong] [Has strong strength and always looks down on the humanoid] [Mediocre strength but so greedy that he plots against the protagonist even though he knows the protagonist's strength] [Mediocre strength makes him jealous when defeated, determined to kill the protagonist] (No, The gap is so big, isn't it good to recognize the reality? And the protagonist always encounters this kind of person? The king of the competition is none other than you) 4. The talent system and combat power system have gradually collapsed since the mid-term, and there are more and more bugs (here is Dou Po as an example. Many people say that Dou Po is too much in the early stage). There are so many heroes in the later stage that the combat power system breaks down, but I don't think that as the protagonist's strength becomes stronger and the level of contact becomes higher and higher, more and more characters that were previously out of reach will come into contact. After all, the big bosses will gather together. Written on it) 5. Whenever the protagonist encounters a situation that cannot be solved temporarily, the system will always send props/equipment/experience and other things in a timely manner (without thinking). Although most of the articles follow this routine, you should polish it up and not make it so blunt [cover your face and cry]. Of course, this is not to say that all of the characters in this book are not good. There are still a few characters that are well created. The cold-hearted and cute character Xingying, and the unpredictable senior sister who looks evil but is actually gentle and kind... They are almost all characters who appear in the early stages. This shows that the author is not good at writing characters. Why? Why did the other supporting characters collapse so much in the middle and later stages, and were all flattened and labeled? Don't blame me for saying this. I admit that I can't handle this kind of story with millions of words, and I also understand that the longer the story, the harder it is to grasp the plot, rhythm, etc., But in the last 100 chapters I have read, I can't. I have seen a slight change in the author, relying entirely on templates to fill in the plot. I was quite surprised when I first saw this book. I thought I could follow this author, but now I can't. I hope I can sigh and find this author's work by chance next time.

I am poor, have no money, and read piracy... I always feel guilty... She is such a noble existence... Now that I have money, I must support it. I am very picky about reading books. I have been reading novels for more than three years, and there are only three books that I am still unfinished about at the end. You are the fourth one. When I was reading, I also listened to the song, "Left Hand Moon". Anyone who has studied music knows how big an impact a song will have when you are shocked... You can try it. Sorry for posting so many... I will only post a book review once...

I'm going to give you a spoiler. Yue Ling felt the spiritual energy pouring into his body, and could also feel the Lieyang Sect disciples holding weapons blocking his door. With a soft breath, Yue Ling opened the door. "Clang, clang, clang, clang" was the sound of a sword falling. Everyone in the Lieyang Sect was shocked by Yue Ling's beauty, and they couldn't figure out why Yue Ling, who was a game NPC, appeared here. Yue Ling paid no attention to the surprised people, and swung his long sword, instantly creating a space crack beside him, and walked in leisurely. In a bedroom, the boy left the game room and scratched his head: "I actually fell asleep while playing the game. It seemed like I had a dream. What was it?"

It's suitable for newcomers. I'm not too old. It's really difficult for me to read this kind of book. The writing is okay, but you're so bad at pretending that it's so embarrassing. The level is completely invalid. A level 100 boss is no different from level one (ー_ー). Is the IQ of a genius who can cultivate immortals not low? As a result, none of the entire race in the entire world of immortality is smart, they are all idiots with negative IQs, and the later period is like a running account, all repeating the previous plot, not making progress, and not innovating. I hope you can come on, the "world situation" does revolve around the protagonist, but the world does not, so treat your book well!

Let me express my personal opinion on this book: I have been following this book until now. I think the writing in the first and middle stages is pretty good, but after chapter 330, the writing style shows a decline, which makes me feel more and more cliche. Even in the recently updated chapters, I feel that the writing style is not like that of the same person. It is clear that the writing in the early and middle stages is good (although there are still a few flaws), but now I have used it a lot The fighting writing method of the routine novel that became popular years ago. When it comes to fighting, the villain's IQ disappears directly, and the protagonist pretends to be all kinds of things: you can't believe it, I can restrain you, I am the real body, I can penetrate your seal (there are also such problems in the early stage, but they are rare). To be honest, it is very embarrassing. I hope the author can pay attention to this issue. If you are not in a good state, take a rest, don't force it, and organize your thoughts.

I finished "Spreading Flowers" and started reading it about 70 chapters ago. This book has been with me for a long time. I didn't expect it to end so quickly. I didn't make up my mind to finish it until today. Maybe the ending of the story is too hasty, but it is also a good story in which the author persists and never gives up (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ In the blink of an eye, a year has passed, and I am preparing for the postgraduate entrance examination in my senior year. I sincerely hope that the author can continue to persevere and write better stories for the sake of dreams and readers like you and the world you create. (I also hope that I can successfully land on my own) Although the development of the story in the later period is indeed not as good as that written in the early stage, it is basically a repeated setting of various templates, but the author can still persevere and not give up after encountering so many difficulties. I personally think this is not a good author. Every novel is a world created by the author, and every reader is a traveler traveling in the world. Although the world may not be perfect, we have indeed experienced it, haven't we? Don't we also understand the settings and emotions the author gave when he created the world? I hope you, the author, can learn from the experience and lessons of this creation and continue to create a more perfect world. We travelers in countless worlds are still looking forward to your new world. (No pigeons) I hope all travelers who love this novel will support the author. Shouldn't the author who is under all kinds of pressure and has no eunuch support him? (This is the second time I write a review for a complete novel. Please forgive me for the inappropriate language. After all, I am just an engineering major. I don't have gorgeous rhetoric. I am just a traveler in various worlds.) ——A world traveler who wishes to remain anonymous

The villain really just needs to be arrogant and domineering without any brains. . . .

Today, I'm sitting on the couch. Ding dong, the book was updated, so I took out my old tea leaves, brewed a pot of tea, and grabbed a few peanuts. I planned to take a good look at it, but found that—— ————————————I finished it!

The plot is too compact, giving me a feeling of one wave after another. Will Yue Ling be exhausted?

This is the first time I have seen such a magical operation. The author will update it soon 😜

Opinions from a book friend who is not good at Chinese language I am just expressing a few of my personal bad feelings 1. The character creation is not good enough, the enemies are too templated, the supporting characters are not rich enough, and the characters are "dead". I hope the author can enrich the characters of the supporting characters, especially their characteristics. Each supporting character is different and I hope the author can bring them to life 2. The routines are repeated too much. Everywhere they go, they are pretentious and slap-in-the-face routines. Too many repetitions will make it boring. 3 It's not rigorous enough. To be honest, I still don't understand the part where there's a real meeting with one hour left. Why didn't I see the protagonist's real response. Also, in reality, they are ordinary people. Why don't ordinary people have the reincarnation of grains and spend all day in games?

Now it feels worse and worse... I don't know if it's an illusion. The author is a bit perfunctory.

Wow⊙∀⊙! It's been a long time since I've seen such a novel that's full of sleep and food! It's a masterpiece

I have turned off automatic subscription That's it

I read all the subscriptions and found that the IQ of the supporting characters is not online, and then the supporting characters pretend to be cool and the protagonist slaps the face. It is very enjoyable, but if there are too many of these routines, aesthetic fatigue will occur. I hope the author can change the routines. Don't just use this routine. It will easily collapse in the later stages of writing.

I'm in the game world, but who controls my body in the real world? Do you want to experience a different game world? If I think so, the longer you stay in this virtual world, the faster your real memory will dissipate. "You" took a deep breath at this time. The virtual character born in that virtual space thought about it and considered replacing the main personality, and finally succeeded. The "I" staring at the screen is watching the virtual villain on the screen fight and speak by himself. It's great, it's finally out.

Author, you can choose one of the two, either update quickly or have a little black room hehehe 😏

This book is very good. It integrates the fairy-like setting into the elements of transformation very well. Judging from the plot setting and fighting scenes, the author should be writing a fairy-like or fantasy online game? Veteran. The whole book is fast-paced and refreshing. It is very suitable for reading in your leisure time. If you are not averse to transformation stories, please don't miss it.

Evaluate, this book is easy to polarize, there are both bad and good (I have been a bookworm for about eight years and have also written books) Reading suggestions: Readers who are "brainless" about the shortcomings and interested in the advantages or have a strong idea of ​​"interesting books" can still try to read and gain a good reading experience. Disadvantages: The setting in this book is indeed not good enough. Just like the name Ling Yue, real people still have the ability to gossip, even if it is related, they will think about it, not to mention it appears many times. In fact, some characters are not three-dimensional enough, and some supporting characters are too monotonous, but since it is an online game novel and it is funny, it is still acceptable. There are also some plots that seem a bit confusing, which requires certain reading requirements for the Lenovo story line. Secondly, the settings of the background and characters are confusing. For example, the various forces obviously live together, but the real-life conflicts between players are strange. The strangeness here refers to the fact that there are obviously players among different races, and the leaders of the Celestial Tribe and Qinglong Tribe are obviously players. Logically speaking, they should be able to become regional kings in the real world, but there are countless small forces. These backgrounds were not reflected until the end of the book. The book felt that the description was too one-sided and did not say much in detail. I think this is because the author's description of the world view is too big, even if the author is actually a bit confused, and there are some subtle points that I won't go into. These are the reasons why I think readers will keep complaining about this book. Advantages: The experience of the protagonist in this book is indeed quite interesting. The fun of the protagonist and the overall plot are both interesting. If there are readers who like comedy and plot, you can read this book. But as the author said, sometimes you need to be "brainless", but I think the author has not finished speaking, because sometimes you need some "brain" to think about the plot, because the author did not handle some plot jumps and certain parts well, but for me, because the plot and protagonist creation are really interesting, I can still watch it. Secondly, emotionally, the emotions shown by the protagonist and a small number of important supporting characters are still rich. However, the final protagonists, Master (Su Zi) and Junior Sister (Qin Yuyao), were suddenly mentioned again in the ending for some reason, and I didn't even know whether it was the Junior Sister or the Witch Clan that was related to the Way of Heaven. There are also advantages in the setting. The setting and limitations of the protagonist and the description of individual plots are also quite attractive. This is what I think is the most satisfying part of the book, because these are related to the reading experience, so I won't go into details. Generally speaking, this is an acceptable half-step masterpiece. I still tend to like this book, so I publish this long review. In addition, let me talk about my feelings as an author. The author of this book personally feels that I am still new to writing (the same as I used to be). However, I felt bad when I wrote it and there were only a few people who read it, so I did not continue to write and polish it. So I want to say that writing is indeed not easy, so if you encounter shortcomings in poor writing, I still hope that readers will evaluate it objectively. After all, it does not take long to click the

Well, I read it again and found some things that I was not sure about and some things that I thought were lacking. First of all, when I first entered the game, the character level was cleared and converted into skill experience and compensation every ten levels, but I don't remember seeing the compensation later. Also, there is a character evaluation when you first enter the game, but it seems to disappear later? The author seems to have too little description of the real world, and the real-life situation will affect the game. Besides, will it be a little hasty after the spiritual power is restored in the later stage? There is also something about the health value. The health value of Yue Ling is forced to be 1? I forgot where I got the original skill. I vaguely remember that it seems that the health value is converted into spiritual power, but it won't be forced to 1, right? Moreover, the moon spirits were injured. According to the health value setting, they should be dead, but they are not dead. So is the author writing based on reality or a game? Is it written in terms of life points or no life points? ps: Please point out if there are any mistakes but please do not comment.

Although the rebellion has no IQ and the global dog-licking mode, everyone is eager to output the protagonist crazily all over again, but it is a sand glyph that you can read when you relax.

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I just read this novel and you told me about it.

Saying I crawled first means giving up There is no need to say it, but it's really uncomfortable to hold it in when it's time to go to sleep. I typed a lot of words but deleted them, it's unnecessary. Let me briefly explain the reason for abandoning the book. nThe character of the protagonist has collapsed. Qin Yuyao beats the protagonist, reluctantly accepts it The host beats the protagonist, jump to watch Qin Yuyao beats the protagonist again, okay, Qin Yuyao becomes the protagonist, she pretends to be all Su Zi takes advantage of the danger to "brainwash" the protagonist. I climbed m (The following is nonsense) I want the protagonist to kill Guang Tianyimen. How can you become a chess piece and still be invincible? An invincible tail-wagging dog, right? Really, the protagonist being hanged and beaten is secondary. The person the protagonist trusts will definitely change hands and sell the protagonist for the sake of righteousness. This is the most uncomfortable thing. When I see this, I just want the protagonist to kill all the humans in front of the Tianyi Sect Master. If qnmd doesn't say anything, I will leave. Seeing this, Su Yu is the only one who is lovable. The other znm are pure trash, oh, except Su Yu and the cold protagonist, get lost. +1 Experience, if you see something wrong in the future, just leave. I didn't want to post it after writing this. Hey, I'm going to be the darkened protagonist and kill all the human race. I'm sorry, everyone. Well, thank you to the author for letting me read the Invincible Protagonist all night. It's a pity that the biggest drawback is that Brother Zhu has too many supporting roles. The other shortcomings are the shortcomings of the writing style and the character of the protagonist who is not cold enough. Well, he was beaten and teased directly later. I won't talk about the other things. Let's go and find the book Kangkang

It's so beautiful. It's a masterpiece.

I haven't seen such an interesting novel in a long time, come on! ヾ(●´∇｀●)ﾉWow~

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It's a very relaxing novel. It feels good to read. Come on.

Some suggestions and discussions about the protagonist: Since the protagonist is already considered an NPC, it is better to provide a function that can publish tasks and publish some tasks that ordinary players are basically unable to complete. After all, invisible pretense is the most deadly. Moreover, since little Goudan likes mining so much, it is better to become a sub-professional master of weapon refining and alchemy to provide convenience and logistics for the protagonist. There are so many things on the earth that are worth refining. Think about it, Frostmourne, curry sticks, the Sword of Deviation and the like appear in the world of cultivating immortals. The protagonist can make these weapons have the property of providing power to the host (even if they are useless).

At that time, if I can maintain this level and the ending is not bad, I will set this flag for the cute protagonist, just to let the author see my determination for the eunuch dog. Having said that, this book is really well written. Although it is a student party, but! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! What I said still stands, and I have to make up for the 1,000 even if I try to sell the iron. Of course, if no one sees it, that's a different matter = =😜