Transforming into a Little Girl Sword Immortal

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The writing is really, really bad. There is a place in the bottom five of the books I have read. (=_=)

The cool thing is that Loli is a genius and good-looking. And if you start with the same lolita as the protagonist, her talent is even higher than that of the protagonist, and her looks are the same. I think this is true.

To read this novel, you must first meditate, then open the skull, take out the brain, put it on the table, and then open the novel and start reading.

I've read dozens of chapters and can't stand it anymore. Let's talk about a few bad points. First, the protagonist's past life is completely inconsistent with his current character. It's better not to write about time travel and transformation. Second, the setting of Lin Ruoshui. The author writes how much Lin Ruoshui loves the protagonist. I'm sorry that I really didn't see it. If I really like him, I believe that I would never agree to drugging and house arrest. In my opinion, this kind of love is just lip service. It is a contradictory character that makes people dislike it. Either it will be bad to the end, or it will not agree from the beginning. Let's talk about love after something has happened. Why are you pretending to be a big-tailed wolf? Third, the protagonist's attitude towards Lin Ruoshui and Aunt Lin. The protagonist is not the original Lin Qingxian, but an adult who has just traveled through time and has mature values. I believe that no one would be able to expose someone so easily when facing someone they are not familiar with and who wants to replace them and has already implemented it. If you think about it carefully, if there is no existence of the sword, the mother and daughter would have succeeded long ago! I just wanted to see the mother and daughter slapped in the face, but the author really took an unusual approach. If you want to write about a sister who is a sister-controller, write well. A real sister-controller is not one who keeps saying love to her sister while doing things that may kill her sister! Love means wanting to touch but then taking back your hand.

After seeing Chapter 34, ten people read it, and 9 of them found it unacceptable. So, can the author do a calculation like this: Suppose 2,000 people read this novel, and one in ten will subscribe. Then inexplicably whitewashing a supporting character who was going to kill the protagonist, half of the 200 people who were going to subscribe, left, and 100 were left. They felt that the protagonist was too fond of women (all kinds of content about women) Forbearance, including the mother of the supporting character, is still popular in the family, her daughter has a higher status than the protagonist, and the character is still a sister-control, well, a sister-control who fails to kill her sister) has 0 tolerance for men, anyway, she shows her sword, immediately pretends to be cute, and then kills decisively without hesitation, but Lin Ruoshui tolerates it and tolerates it, leaving 100 people to subscribe, and finally leaves half of them, 2 000 people finally left 50 paying readers, just because of a bug, [Suggestion: Delete the picture where Lin Ruoshui wants to kill the protagonist, so that the past can be blurred. After all, in the setting, Lin Ruoshui and the protagonist are of the same father. No matter what, as a father, you want to kill relatives in the first article, and immediately wash it out in the second article. You may think that this setting is colorful, but readers will only feel that they are brainless. , The preface does not match the afterword, and the character keeps changing] The author borrowed some settings of Zhetian. Since you have read it, you should know why Zhetian is popular. It is not because Chen Dong is famous, but because of his novels, or the novels of great gods. The character will not collapse. This accessory is used to enliven the atmosphere and make it funny. He is responsible for the active atmosphere and weirdness in the whole text. This role is cold, and she is cold throughout the whole text. Character design, this is the character design, you can be cold at one time, and funny at the other. This is not a colorful life, but a reason for people to act. Look at Heihuang and Cao Yusheng in Zhetianli. They play the role of coldness, and all readers will be puffed up. Look at the ruthless emperor. Throughout the text, she is strong and ignores people. There is nothing that can make her look twice. How many times have she appeared? Not much, but who doesn't know what she is like? If we don't change the previous article and kill the protagonist, it will really collapse.

What can I say about this book... Changing the male protagonist is not inconsistent at all, it is just a routine of killing people and seizing treasures. Those who watch the transformation do not like this tone, and those who watch the sofa scene do not like the male-to-female transformation...

This book is super good, I will definitely not regret reading it, it is worth reading, believe me!

I finally figured out the routine, and it just keeps going: Collect a harem, buy cuteness (pretend to be cute), kill people, recruit people, spend resources to upgrade, pretend to be cute (pretend to be cute), die. The cycle goes on, and then from time to time, you will do something sensational.