Dark Age of Pirates

I'm not blaming you, you can write a supporting character so decisively and ruthlessly, and kill whenever you want, so why can't you write this on the protagonist? Is it necessary to add a routine where the person the protagonist likes is killed and then his personality changes drastically to fit the process of the protagonist becoming stronger?

Author, do you know what an animal devil fruit is? If you are a person with animal-type unicorn abilities, you will become a unicorn. If you have great strength, you will be a superhuman type. . . Look at those people with animal fruit abilities in CP9 looking at you. I really wonder if you have watched One Piece.

Chapter 50, the protagonist is a person with abilities and cannot swim.

The first 8 chapters are so far-fetched, I don't like it, it's not my taste, and I will be biased after reading it, sorry <(_ _)>.

Personally, I think the fruit's ability can be developed mainly from the devouring aspect. This is a characteristic inherent in the anime. Blackbeard once devoured a city and could evolve to devour all material attack energy. As long as his body is strong enough, he will be invincible. Besides, it can form a black hole, has enough attack power, and can even develop gravity.

In terms of ability, the Dark Fruit can swallow them together, just like a black hole, and even indirectly control gravity.

There are actually two ways to attack the fruit, one is mist-like, which is mainly corrosive devouring, and the other is similar to dark water or even black hole spherical, domineering devouring that distorts space, and can even indirectly control gravity.

I remember Blackbeard said that absorbing damage that the body cannot bear will cause double the pain. So if the body can withstand it or not absorb it, it should be normal pain. In other words, if you have enough physical strength, it is actually quite unsolvable. This is why Blackbeard has recovered from many injuries.

After reading what the author wrote, from the perspective of fruit, it is really quite reasonable.

It is completely possible to do the Earth Explosion Star

Naruto's Earth Explosion Star and meteorites falling from the sky can be achieved through the gravity of the black hole.

Personally, I feel that the timeline is a bit late, and I am a bit young, being the same age as Luffy. If I want to develop in the early stage, there is not enough time. . . . . .

Growth in strength should be slower, don't end it after just a few hundred thousand

Robin's place shouldn't be too toxic.

Remember to let the protagonist do some physical training. . . If you become awesome after eating the fruit, it's basically a novice. ٩(๑òωó๑)۶After all, not every person with fruit abilities is awesome. You still need to be tough in order to strike iron.

The spring fruit is the most beautiful.

If he becomes an admiral in the future, he will be codenamed Black Dragon, and if he becomes the Four Pirate Emperors, he will be codenamed Black Emperor. Does the author think this is a good idea? PS I thought of this because I watched Dragon Clan too much.

Starting from Chapter 107, it feels very different from what I wrote before, as if it was written by two people.

What about Blackbeard? Are you going to kill the captain yet? Should we fight a war on top? Is Ace still dead?

The Dark Fruit can be given to your subordinates by depriving it of the Devil Fruit, especially if you become a pirate, which is conducive to the growth of your power. I have summarized the following fruit suggestions and positions that are worth depriving by reading pirate books. 1. The soul fruit, compared to Kaido's red hair, the eldest sister of the ability user is the first choice for the four emperors to compete for. It is suitable for the chef's choice. Of course, if the author wants to replace Whitebeard, it is okay, but it would be a pity if the war on top is gone. 2. The fruit of thunder, not much to say, the responsibility of the deputy captain of strength 3. The Momo Fruit has huge potential and is suitable for impure swordsmen as a combat power. 4. Fluttering fruits, disabled old people deserve to die, navigators 5. The mirror fruit, if you hit the aunt, you will definitely not let it go, especially if you can learn the mirror space fighting method of the wizard like Marvel, the potential is also huge. 6. The fruit of surgery or healing, the first choice of doctors

The protagonist should preferably be from the D family, and should be at least two meters tall in the future. It looks pretty good initially, let's see how well the fruit develops. For example, flying with the power of darkness, and the biggest drawback of the Dark Fruit is the lack of attack power. You can try to develop a damaging Dark Power, or capture powerful fruits, such as the crushing power of Fairy Tail Gildarts, etc.