Jianhe Liuxu

How can you not feel baffled, the plot spans so quickly, there is no foreshadowing at all, and you are often confused when watching it. Now when I see the place 100 years later, the most obvious one is Dongfang. I suddenly fell in love with Dongfang and I haven't forgotten it for a hundred years. Before I died, I asked Nezha to take care of Dongfang. There are also a lot of flaws in the setting. A lot of people in this state are licking their heads, while people outside are talking all kinds of trash. There are only a few normal people, and the military system has long since collapsed. I feel that the author has ideas, but the writing is not enough. Many places can be foreshadowed or filled in with daily life, etc., But if you can't write it out, you can only speed up the plot. The more you speed up, the more you can't fill in things, and you can only continue to speed up the plot, a vicious cycle.

If I could rewrite the previous part, I could become a god.

Ever since I met the young monk and became a disciple, I didn't see how I would come back.

Read the second chapter. With such a good background, he went to work as a small policeman and was immediately defeated.

Messy is just one word, otherwise it would be great, but it's a pity that it's too messy.

I am really happy to find a real book among the vast sea of ​​books.