One Piece Navy Ghost

I watched the free part, and I didn't feel it was too bad, so I continued to pay. The middle and later stages were good. The author's writing still has a lot of room for improvement, but he did express the protagonist's concept. It's cool and cool, and the coherence and readability are okay. As a result, I saw so many negative reviews. So I will express my feelings seriously and give some pertinent opinions to those who want to read. I also hope to encourage the author to continue writing good-looking articles. Not all people give negative reviews. This article made me have a good time. I think highly of the author.

The writing of this book is terrible. If you are a foreshadowing writer, you have to write it out. You can write it casually instead of not writing it like this. Then suddenly some props and so on appear without any explanation. Most of them just pop up in the plot and then explain them later. If you do this too much, it will make people feel very annoying.

Well written, I hope the author will stick with it

If you don't have that kind of experience, don't force yourself to write about those conspiracies. It'll be embarrassing.

Although the writing was really not very good, after it was put on the shelves, I have to say that the fairy grass

When I saw this, I was very angry. The author may have his own ideas, but he fell into a kind of self-righteousness and self-pleasure. The protagonist in the author's works seems to be coaxing and strong-willed, but in fact he is at the mercy of others, whether it is the navy, the Tianlong people, or the revolutionary army. For whatever reason, to use the author's words, to evaluate a person is not based on what he said, but on what he did. In fact, the protagonist's character is good, but he was simply played with by the author. Yes, he was played with. The leader of the revolutionary army, a man with global aspirations, personally kidnapped his father's apprentice, a 15-year-old child? ? ? ? Do you want to show some face? ? ? Are you telling me this is Dorag? ? ? Do you feel uncomfortable if you don't abuse the master? ? ? Have you tortured the protagonist for two volumes? The first two volumes are understandable. After all, one is weak and the other is in the darkest holy place, Marie Joa. The atmosphere is depressing and I can understand it. I endured the poison and read it. It's finally the third volume, why are you still here? You can't even take a breath, are you torturing for the sake of torturing? The world's top powerhouse kidnaps the protagonist, a 15-year-old child? Is this reasonable? You can design a plot, but after all, readers will not know what will happen in the future. In other words, readers will not be able to see it if they are happy later. In this way, the early design should consider the readers' feelings. The author knows that it will be happy later, but the readers do not, thus causing a serious dissuasion effect. Your score It's weird to be good at it. I'm immersed all day long in how good my settings are, how cleverly I bury them behind the hole I've dug, and I'm immersed in my self-pleasure. I want to say to the author, maybe you dug the hole very well, but the hole you dug is not very good. It's too deep. I won't jump. So no matter how well you buried the hole, I'm sorry, I don't want to read it.

I haven't read the book yet. I came here to read the book review and saw your argument. My personal opinion is a very classic saying. When there is an avalanche, no snowflake is innocent, and Roger was the one who shot and caused the avalanche. Whether society is inherently dark, or the darkness of the great pirate era, I personally agree with the navy. No matter what, most people of insight who have a bright mind are in the navy.

If I were a Celestial Dragon, I would work hard to protect the interests of the Celestial Dragons. Use the power of the Celestial Dragons to become stronger. How cool it is to be a Celestial Dragon

First of all, define pirates in One Piece as burning, killing and looting. At the same time, fans who like to watch Pirates and Pig's Feet are defined as liking darkness. In the world of One Piece, there's nothing wrong with pirates actually being very evil, but that's certainly not the case with Roger. Roger's opening of the Great Pirate Age can only mean that the pirate world government is even darker. To put it bluntly, the era of great pirates is equivalent to taking strong medicine. Otherwise there is no chance at all. Just like a historical text, even if it is incorrect, what will happen if it is discovered? It's been so long, if it's just a thing in the past, it won't be able to shake the present at all. It is clear that there is a horrific truth and the continuing danger must exceed the destructive power of the great pirate era.

Good guy, at the beginning, Lieutenant General He was startled by the shouts of the new recruits, and the protagonist changed from a civilian to a Draco. Every time the protagonist fought alone, others were watching, so why did he bring so many people with him every time? Collect corpses for the enemy?

After reading more than 130 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I couldn't tell it before, I just felt like it was twisted somewhere. I finally understood after seeing this section of Pier 9. In the world of pirates, dragons are respected. In this environment, you tell me about the underground forces and the dark side? It's not that there isn't one, it's that it's only right under the Celestial Dragons. Please, there can't be anyone more powerful than the Celestial Dragons in Mariejoia. Your emperor's setting is a complete failure. I carefully recalled the previous plot. Many times, I conspired for the sake of conspiracy, and the whole thing was a mess. Assassination, assassination, can't we have some other conspiracy besides assassination? Assassination is the stupidest plot, not to mention that you still assassinate after the assassination failed. Also, I don't understand why I have to buy a boat? Why? Wouldn't it be wiser for the phone bug to notify the family to call in a ship? It's easy to understand! If you want to be disadvantageous to the protagonist, there is no point in buying a boat. If you don't dare to act rashly, the family boat will come in a hurry. What does it mean that since the interception of the ship, the command room was not even taken down? The fighting time was extremely short, which also proved that the distance between the two docks was also very close. Also, a lot of what Luo Liba said is nonsense. Shui also talks about the basic law, okay?

What can I say about this novel? I have read more than a hundred chapters. I feel that the protagonist's identity as a Celestial Dragon is useless. Anyone who comes out can kill the protagonist and it will make the nest angry.

The Roar of the Fire Dragon Next Door is well written, but the author is a newbie, and the plot and layout are a bit rough, but the writing style and three perspectives are great. Oh yes, the biggest pain point is that Im's force value is too high. Hopefully this book won't make this mistake. After all, Luffy is going to become the Pirate King in the comics, and his final enemy must be the one behind freedom and dreams, not a so-called super strong man.

😁 I have read so many posts, some are positive and some are negative, but they are all experiences. I hope the author can take a serious look at it and think about it. After all, not everyone is a great person (🤔). I still quite like this novel. Come on＾0＾~I'll give you a reward👍

The name Long Yi looked more and more awkward. I downloaded the electronic file and replaced the name with Kuro. It looked much more comfortable.

The protagonist is too young and does not fit the setting of the pirate world. A thirteen-year-old third-class soldier? Are you kidding me? Aoji joined the navy at the age of 19, and Luffy went to sea at the age of 17. In fact, many One Piece fans always set the age of the protagonists too young, probably because they watched Naruto! I'm drunk too!

So fucking holy and so middle-aged.

He was so vicious in the early stage and asked others to look at the back

What is written at the top, it really treats the general as a waste. He can't take care of himself after being crippled. This one is dead and that one is not dead. He has no fighting power. The navy is watching them go. Do you really think there are good people in the pirates?

I asked why the plot at the beginning was so outrageous. It turned out to be a book written in 18 years.

What the hell? Return to the Yagami Swordsman?

A time-traveling pirate becomes someone else's grandson?😥

The storyline is too confusing, isn't it? Luffy has just gone overseas to form a group, and your Blackbeard has already eaten the Dark Fruit? ? Could there be a white beard popping out from behind? ? Can't afford to offend, can't afford to offend!

At the beginning, the character of the protagonist is portrayed as silly and easy to deceive. I can't see any opinions of my own, and I don't have any self-thinking. It's completely the template for a hot-blooded protagonist. You'll have to reflect on everything after you've done it and been beaten. Oh my god. I really can't bear to watch this kind of protagonist who wins and dances. Suitable for beginners, old bookworms might as well forget it!

Before reading, let me ask you book friends, has the protagonist killed the Celestial Dragons?

It's too lame. It's okay to spend a hundred chapters writing a branch plot.

After reading a few chapters, I no longer have the desire to continue reading.

He has his own inheritance and also joins Baldy's family. There is a master named Kapu who teaches. He even had sex with a blind man. There was a lot of chatter during the fight. After a few chapters, I started to pretend, at least after I woke up. Guiti's strongest skill is Ghost Shadow Step. Stop showing off your Dnf moves and bring something of your own. The system is useless without it.

The front is too poisonous and the plot is unreasonable. It is not reasonable at all.

When I saw the name of the protagonist, my first reaction was urban harem.