Martial Dao Immortal Farmer

Negative IQ and excellent luck. Even if you often die, someone will always save you.

It doesn't matter if the space can't hold the cheat book. You can destroy it. If it can't be destroyed, you can just throw it away and bury it. Why do you have to keep it next to you?

Isn't this introduction a decree from Heaven to punish evil?

The author's new book is "Eunuch" again. Looking back at this book, I can actually write it down. Let me talk about a few points that I personally feel dissatisfied with. I will give the author a reference when writing a book in the future! 1. Many people have said that the secret book is hidden in the house. This part is indeed too intellectual and is a low-level mistake. 2. The plot of the powerful layout and planning. Others don't know, but I personally hate plots like this. Why? Because of the sense of substitution! I would like to ask which one is more comfortable with the protagonist being manipulated like a puppet? This kind of plot can only be hidden in online articles! 3. A bloody love triangle, sadistic, not many male videos like it, very annoying

I really can't accept these latest chapters. A demon emperor vixen who is thousands of years old is written like a silly and sweet person. What's the matter? If he had this kind of personality, he would have been ripped off by someone long ago. . .

After reading the author's comments, I feel that the biggest problems with this book lie in two points. First, it is too deliberate. For example, the skin-changing plot can only be clicked twice at most. You can tell by reading the chapter reviews. The first time I clicked it, everyone said that the eldest lady in WOC had been skin-changed. Such a deliberate reminder is completely unnecessary, because everyone can see it the second time, and writing it again will only make people feel that the protagonist SB can't even see it. I understand the protagonist, and I even refuted the criticism of the protagonist in the chapter review, but what I want to say is that understanding ≠ acceptance. Because for a work, the performance of the characters themselves is far better than the filling of external logic. Just like the Lu Sheng Beast, he gives most people a good impression when he first comes out. He is decisive in killing and flexible, so although some parts of him may not be very logical, readers are willing to explain it to him. The opposite is true here. Paying too much attention to external logic but ignoring this logic will bring a bad experience to readers. The second point is the atmosphere. This type of novel should focus most on self-improvement at the beginning. The protagonist should have a sense of tension. However, I never felt this tension in the protagonist from beginning to end. Although he always said that he must improve quickly, the whole story still gave me a very leisurely feeling. Whether it is the development of Goldfinger or the collection of resources, there is no urgency like the protagonist in other novels of the same type, and there is just a sense of letting go. This is mainly because the author's narration is too weird. For example, after changing the map, he described various chores and then mentioned that the protagonist has been practicing. The result can be imagined. The comments on that chapter basically criticized the protagonist for saying that he still has the time to do this.

I always feel that this is not writing a novel, but describing the rules of survival. I seem to have a lot to say, but I can't write a word. I saw many people saying that the protagonist is cowardly. Where did you see that? Every step the protagonist takes contains the family's survival rules. If you don't like it, please leave, okay? If you don't understand, please leave, okay? Perhaps, when you step into the perspective of the protagonist, you will find that everything is in line with common sense.

Alas, after looking at it, I am only concerned about the IQ of pig's feet. I feel that after practicing Qigong, I have gained muscle and lowered my IQ.

The writing is very good, I finished reading it in one go, come on Dongcheng

I mean, I felt something was wrong after reading it for a long time. It turns out that the introduction is from another book.