Constructing a Tower

The writing is good, but the protagonist is too cocky. To be honest, this way of using a beautiful woman as a shield to cause conflicts and promote the development of the plot is cliched and bloody. The protagonist clearly knows that the beauty puts his life in danger and does not care. The beauty has a better attitude towards him and is so excited. Reminds me of those diaos who sell their kidneys to buy gifts to get a spare position. In my opinion, such a woman is just not worth the trouble caused by her poor consideration. It would be damned if it was intentional. For the sake of saving her life (she was actually the cause of the trouble). It's just a matter of old age and death. It's not that he was afraid of that high-level apprentice. He would definitely take revenge, but it had nothing to do with that woman. I'm not so mean as to risk my own life to make women laugh!

Well, I don't know how to put it. The book is okay and interesting, but it didn't touch my heart. I initially thought the protagonist developed his own puppet. . .

What is written in this chapter is still true, but if the protagonist does not handle it well, it will be a failure. Even if he is controlled by someone, if he is forgiven unconditionally, this book is poisonous. At least it is a slave contract, otherwise he can be threatened by others today and tomorrow.

The subject matter is good! ! The plot is just boring to watch...? Tutorial novel? ?

Is the routine a bit old? Of course, I also know that it's hard to write online novels now.

Gundam towers over the earth. The golem is going to look like Gundam

What a poor imagination😅😅😅

Not bad, I like this type of fantasy work that starts with the mage's apprentice.

I also want to have that perfect state of mind, I also want to have courage

It couldn't be that Pig's Foot's friend asked Pig's Foot to time travel, and his friend is a high-level executive. If so, I won't watch it. I like to eat alone.

I want to see how Pig's Knuckle upgrades the construct, rather than fighting monsters and upgrading it myself.

Build a structure building. Let's talk about what types of structures there are.

After reading two chapters, I decisively gave up. I didn't like that the protagonist was not in the virtual game world, and it was written like a game. I didn't like it.

Taking advantage of the time difference to get scammed! The protagonist is not angry? And why did he offend Custer for no apparent reason? ? ? Rubbish

How can you dominate the universe without the Neutron Star Golem! Do you feel that something is missing if you don't have a magic armor with a high-frequency concussion weapon in your hand? If you don't open a portal and point a Star Destroyer Cannon at you, can you go out and fight the enemy with confidence?

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you~

I would like to ask, is the setting the main material plane and surrounding planes (abyss devils and the like), or the endless plane with endless rules?

It must be the deep sea tide meditation method~~Although the fire type meditation method has an additional elemental incarnation~~Although the water type meditation method cannot make fire balls in the end, it can make water balls and ice balls! The key is that there are so many spell slots! One step at a time, one step at a time!

Written before: When writing this review, my reading progress is Chapter 30. Some of my thoughts and feelings are based on this progress. I don't know much about the subsequent plot. If there are any errors, please feel free to correct me. To be honest, I was quite happy when I read this novel. After reading the first thirty chapters, I feel that this is a good fantasy novel (and there is no fighting spirit. I feel that fighting spirit is very inconsistent in the setting of traditional Western fantasy, lol). Although the shortcomings are not hidden, I still want to give some personal suggestions on some issues in the book. First of all, although DND is a board game and there is nothing wrong with quantifying attributes with numbers, this article is not a systematic article. To be honest, when Oriana opened her mouth and said that the protagonist's mental power was only 6 points in the second chapter, I still felt that something was wrong. It was not until the author later gave the standards and reasons for quantification of attributes that I suddenly realized. My personal suggestion is that when the character conveys this "numeric quantified attribute" setting through dialogue, the protagonist can extract the standards and reasons for this setting from the memory of the original owner of the body to explain. Second, I personally think that the first three to five chapters are the best time to portray the protagonist and tell the reader about it. Therefore, it is better to think about the character traits of the protagonist in advance, and then construct the dialogue plot accordingly, and integrate it into the plot. However, the first three to five chapters of this article feel like they are popularizing some world settings (the settings can be scattered to the back in a long stream, each time only revealing some key settings that are directly related to the following plot), introducing constructs, and the golden finger black stone. Until Chapter 30, the image of the protagonist Roger gave me a relatively vague impression. When I think of him, I can't recall anything else except those constructs and black stones. Thirdly, when I read about the tower duel, I felt a little bit... Unfinished. I think the tower duel should be the first step for the protagonist to embark on the road of showing off. It should be one of the most important conflicts in the first thirty chapters. More words should be spent on describing it. However, in this conflict, the explanations of off-site personnel accounted for a large part, and there was no immersive feeling. The subtleties of the protagonist's tactics were not well reflected. (This routine feels much worse if the reader is told directly by the narrator. It would be more exciting to slowly bring the reader in with the description of the scene when facing the enemy, and finally let the narrator point out the stroke.) The reaction of the opponent's timing and Lucian's performance when the trapped beast is still fighting are also lacking. Overall, it is not very enjoyable to read, but it feels a bit dull. As far as the first thirty chapters are concerned, that's about all I can think of (oh, and the word at the beginning of the third chapter is called Guangqiao instead of Guangqiu). In addition, in terms of constructs, as a book friend in the comment area said day and night, does the author of Maid of Secrets really not consider it (but I haven't read the later chapters yet, it would be better if there is later), and there is the outer armor of the golem. In addition, there are... Clockwork creatures, scroll golems, Baba Yaga's walking hut, and the incorporeal rainbow golem. Do you want to know about it?