Common Sense Subverts Another World

Reading the introduction will dissuade most people. Magic is not based on known physics. Does being able to fly with mental power also comply with gravity? How do you compare idealism and materialism?

Abandoned the book! ! ! After reading the introduction, I didn't want to read it.

I strongly mind that Qidian Chinese website divides novels into "adults and minors", which is not discriminatory or insulting. I have paid IQ tax more than once. Some of them are suitable for beginners and are basically fun without brains. But older readers really can't stand it. Like passive skills, I now read novels like reading academic papers. Although I skim through them, what is written in the book can be quickly formed in my mind, and I can quickly understand the characters, story, logic, basic theory, world view, etc. Of a book. I feel that some of them have millions of words written, but there is no depth at all. Of course, this is not a criticism of the author, it is just telling the truth. I just hope that you can practice more and improve your skills.

Seeing that now, the protagonist has subdued his subordinates, it is really too ideal. A person who was originally blamed, a person who saw the protagonist kill someone, became the protagonist's subordinate in two sentences, and the reason is that if this is the goddess who wants me to choose to be his retainer, in a world where there is no special punishment for breaking the oath, even the first nun can work for the person who killed the pope and framed her the next day, and is still a devout believer. This reason is really too ideal.

The prologue is very nice, and the rest. ． ． Kindness. ． ． 😠

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Chapter 1: Let's change the number of embryos to millions. Rebuilding a human society would require at least hundreds of thousands of people.

A giant dragon can live for thousands of years, will it be abused by dinosaurs? And anything that violates the laws of physics is possible in the wizarding world. It feels a bit far-fetched

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1. The book is very good, and it is not too toxic at the moment. What may be strange is that the emotional description of the girl next to the protagonist being included in the team is still a little bit poor. The princess is better written here, and the three captured princesses 😄 and the character traits and beliefs are more vividly written. The description of Jill and the Thunderbolt Sister Assassin is not as good as the princess. Of course, it may be that the princess is the eldest wife? 2. This book has a heavy beginning. For readers who are impatient to read, the dissuasion effect is 99/100. I personally feel that it would be better to break down the beginning and explain it a little bit in the book. It feels like it will also increase the meaning of readers' own exploration😄 3. There really aren't too many exciting points in this book. The only place that made me laugh seemed to be the nun with so many buffs. Maybe it's because the story hasn't fully unfolded yet. 4. The story is not quite like the novels of Qidian. The narrative is complete and the writing style is very stable. However, sometimes the sudden bombardment of foreign names is scary... I can't remember it at all 😄qwq 5. Introduction… Those things about the last earthling and his robot wet nurse in another world... Otherwise, replace it with this one? 🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤

I suggest you change this introduction, it looks very toxic.

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

Fine. . . . . . .

Many plots are too simple and wasted. When other novel authors write, the psychological description of the protagonist's time to take a breath can be one chapter, but you only wrote half a chapter this year.

The issue of ownership of the Ada Territory after the death of the protagonist's father was not mentioned.

Why do I feel so obsessed with the recent plot? . . .

Come back and take a look. This novel is quite interesting. It is not a perfect novel.

So reincarnation has started again?

This comment is just to create a sense of presence. I really want to complain, the author is amazing. I have been reading novels for so many years, and you are the first one to persuade me to quit because of the author's comments. This poisonous point in the book was actually added by the author after consideration. You are amazing.

The first few chapters, such as Arrival, are well written, but the rest are completely watery.

There is a problem with the plot logic of this book. The author should not be too God-like when writing.

Recently, there have been many books that use technology or knowledge to crack magic. I am confused. Magic is magic and common sense is common sense. They are not in the same dimension at all. Why do they have to be mixed together? If common sense can break magic, can it still be called magic? Forget it, call it a trick. (I'm not criticizing, I'm expressing my personal opinion. If you think I'm criticizing, please feel free to do so.) Isn't it great to write about magic? Why do you have to do this kind of gimmick? I don't understand. If you really can't write it, you don't have to write about this type of magic. Nowadays, all the books are about this type of magic. Alas, it's sad.

Since the protagonist has all the memories of an Earthling, he will more or less show the values ​​and thoughts he should have (or be influenced by). If it is completely turned into a noble lord (localization), it will be difficult to read; this will also waste the previous setting (prequel), which is really a pity.