Dao Xuanwei

It's so well written, author, keep it up!

Pig's feet are too early to mature! Three-year-old hunts, seven-year-old thinks like an adult

The writing style and logic are very good, but this may make it difficult to become popular. After all, many people who read online novels sometimes want to read it more exciting and exciting scenes, rather than reading it as a literary book. Moreover, if the writing style is too good, it will be difficult to grasp the key points, and it will be very tiring to read! Personal feelings, don't comment!

Those whose skills are worse than yours are many, many times better than yours! Anyone who is not diligent in updating will be doomed! Remember, you are writing a YY novel, not a literary work! ! ! ! !

It's the New Year. First of all, I would like to give the book owner a boost and work harder not to stop updating. I am optimistic about you. I would also like to remind some book friends that the protagonist's character setting and the way he behaves with people are the author's setting for the development direction of the entire work. The author will change it based on the protagonist's age and experience. Do not give the author blind subjective suggestions. This book is slowly gaining popularity, but I forget that the author did not forget his original intention and persisted in writing 😁

The writing has an ancient style and rhyme, it is very elegant and worth recommending.

Brother, when will your other book be released? 😭

Support the author. I hope the author can stick to his ideals and write a magnificent work for readers.

Finally I can speak. The book is really a good book. Good books, good books

The author has a profound literary background. If you stick to it, this will be a good book in the fairy tale genre.

It's really well written, keep it up!

Judging from the chapters so far, the book is quite engaging, not rigid, not a stallion, not a novice, and the author has good literary skills. I hope more and more people will like this book, and I hope this book can be completed.

There is no success in the early stage of fairy tale novels, which must be at least 800,000 words.

The author must persist! With this kind of writing, there is still one chance left before success. "Dao Zhengfeng" also had bleak results at the beginning, but it took time and effort to get to where it is today!