My Private Planet

The first part is full of poisonous points, but it can be seen as the transformation of the protagonist's character, from an ordinary person to a creation god. It will be fine starting from Chapter 80. Please hang on, the previous part is really bad...

To be honest, if you watch it for the first time, it is difficult to watch it, but after watching The Dream Master, you can continue watching it. After the beginning, you can continue watching it. I hope the subsequent content will be exciting.

In the beginning of the Yuan Dynasty, the immortals could be used as fresh food reserves.

To be honest, I really can't stand this protagonist. The woman who was the first to be the heroine was not killed after being so provocative. Then where is she? Sure enough, I am still suitable for reading dark novels. Can any book friends recommend some dark + invincible books?

Oh my god, brothers, I can't stand it anymore in chapter 58. Come on, what the hell is this?

There is a huge gap between me and the dream master! The second Dream Master can be used to become a god!

Farewell, you poisoned me to death. The protagonist is like a waste and doesn't understand anything. He stands in the position of the Lord of the Planet and is led by a woman. My IQ is insulted.

This book is very real... It's not that Goldfinger is real, it's the style of dealing with people and the plot. At first glance, the protagonist seems stupid, but it's also the real feedback of our modern youth.

The author's IQ determines the protagonist's IQ. I don't know what grade the author graduated from, so I can't give an evaluation. This work has to be defeated and I can't stand it anymore.

The prayers in "Da Ming Huidian" are surprisingly similar to those in "Genesis"! There are many blessings (i. E. Prayers) recorded in the "Da Ming Huidian". Among them are: "In the beginning of the ancient times, there was chaos, the five elements were not in operation, the two obsidians were not clear, one of them stood upright, there was no voice, the god emperor came out to control the sky, and then he judged the turbid and clear, established the heaven and the earth, and all living things came into being." Vernacular: In the beginning, before the creation of the heaven and earth, there was chaos everywhere. There were no natural planets such as gold, wood, water, fire, earth, etc., And there was no sun or moon. At this time, the whole world was so quiet that there was no sound, and no tangible things could be seen. However, once the God-Emperor (God) came to rule, there was a distinction between darkness and light. He created the heaven, earth, all things and human beings, and made all things continue to exist from generation to generation. Surprisingly, this is so similar to the opening chapter of Genesis in the Bible where God created the heavens, the earth, and all things! The opening chapter of "Genesis" reads: "In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth. The earth was empty and formless. Darkness was over the abyss. The Spirit of God was moving on the waters. God said, Let there be light, and there was light. God saw that the light was good, and separated the light from the darkness. God called the light day, and the darkness he called night. ... God said, Let there be light in the sky to separate day from night. ... So God created two The greater light was to rule the day, and the smaller one was to rule the night. And he made the stars in the sky, to give light on the earth. And God saw that it was good for him to make man in our image, after his kind. It can be said that the creation content of "Da Ming Huidian" is basically consistent with that of the Bible, even the order is the same, but the Chinese version is simplified, and Genesis is like a longer version of it. Immaculate sacrifice "Say to Aaron, "Take a young bull from the herd for a sin offering and a ram for a burnt offering, both without blemish, and offer them before the LORD." "Leviticus 9:2" The original meaning of "" in the Chinese character refers to a pure-colored cow, while "she" refers to an animal with pure coat color and complete body. The traditional Chinese character "" for "" clearly illustrates this point! Cattle + Sheep + Xiu + Ge = Sacrifice, which means to slaughter beautiful and perfect cattle and sheep. "Book of Rites/Sacrifice" records in detail the procedures for selecting sacrifices and the process of holding suburban sacrifices, because the original meaning of the Book of Rites is mainly about the etiquette of sacrificing to God, which is somewhat similar to the status and role of "Leviticus". "Shu Jing" also talks about the importance of a sacrificial mentality, which requires humility and reverence. It also says that one of the reasons why the Xia Dynasty was abolished by God was that it was not in accordance with etiquette in sacrificial rituals and even used impure and defective sacrifices. "Hair and blood are the things that tell Youquan. Those who tell Youquan are the things that value purity." "Book of Rites" Vernacular: The use of sacrificed hair and blood during sacrifices means that the sacrificed animals are flawless both internally and externally. The reason why it is reported that the sacrificial animals are flawless both internally and externally is to reflect the cherishment of the way of being good both internally and externally. There are so many wonderful similarities between two peoples who are completely different from each other. What does it mean? And when the ancestors of the Chinese people sacrificed to heaven, why did they use perfectly flawless sacrifices? They knew that this was a sign of the coming generations who were completely sinless.

The protagonist is too idiotic. I can only say that the master of World Tree's ability has chosen the wrong master. If it were in the hands of the protagonist of the author's second book Dream Realm Master, it would be amazing. How can there be other gods, marks of gods, Buddhas, demons, and Tao. These people are simply uncontrollable. They are all very ambitious and want to break away from the protagonist all day long. If it weren't for the powerful ability of World Tree, coupled with the As for the enemy, the protagonist will have to finish it in hundreds of years. There is no invincible ability, only invincible people. With the protagonist's idiotic IQ, the World Tree ability will be cracked sooner or later. That Buddha is part of the crack. The World Tree ability is simply a waste in the hands of the protagonist. Only in the hands of a person like the protagonist of the author's second book, who is so wise and almost a monster, can the most powerful ability shine.

I watched the training of the Savages earlier and it was very real and I thought it was good! But when it comes to summoning that liar to come to another world to lead the savages, it feels a little bit poisonous. This person has too many tricks and little ability to be reused! The second abducted veteran is okay, but the third woman is the biggest poison! That woman is too smart, which can be said to be cunning, and knows how to use her body and language to manipulate people's hearts! It would have been fine if the author had given her the setting of an ordinary woman, but the protagonist couldn't handle it at all! The protagonist thinks that if he gets her, he can control him, but no, people like her can easily seduce the hearts of lustful people who don't have much willpower! If it were me, if I didn't have the means to control her, I would kill her no matter how beautiful she was! A weakling must know that she is a weakling. If she cannot control it, either erase her memory or kill her!

Becoming a god in another world, but not having the power of a god in real life, and even exposing his own power in reality, he really thinks others are fools.

Sure enough, good authors will go through a growth process.

Delete this book. It is too embarrassing for the other two books.

Can I just say it's annoying? Everyone is better than the protagonist, with inexplicable women and feelings. It is rare to see such a loving person in the protagonist's twenties. Such a character is like that of a high school student, or perhaps an elementary school student. He is still kind-hearted and can give charity but will not tolerate it. However, it is of no use. If the mentality does not change, it will never become popular. I am afraid that the will of the planet cannot find people. The old man is much better than the protagonist, and the liar is definitely qualified to be a magician. Although the woman is self-righteous, her description is far better than the protagonist. The main contradiction in today's society is that men know very well that they have no money, while women don't know how ugly they are, and they feel self-righteous and inexplicable.

Adding a woman at the beginning is the biggest poison, and the IQ and character are getting lower and lower.

Even if you can return to Earth, you still have your family? I can almost imagine the bloody plot behind it.

I can't believe this is written by the same author

The writing is good, but the thinking is problematic. What's the point? The protagonist's IQ is too much. It makes people anxious to watch. You can be ugly, you can be funny, you can be mentally ill, but you can't be dishonest. How can the reader get a sense of empathy? The protagonist is a god on the planet. How is this setting reflected? What he started to do could be done by an ordinary protagonist without superpowers but with a portal. Beat people with electric batons and take the lights and rice to another world. You can do these things even if you are not a god.

This book is actually quite interesting, and the author himself is also very good at writing. But there are two problems: First, in the beginning, the male protagonist has been ridiculed for his intelligence and treated like a licking dog. Some readers may not be able to stand it. Second, the first and middle stages are exciting, but the middle and later stages are too boring, and you can see repeated plots in many books. To sum up, the biggest problem with this book is that the first part is suitable for old bookworms who have read too many books and it feels quite novel to see the protagonist who is a dog-licker and a bit silly. However, the second part turns into a more routine and ordinary farming novel, which is suitable for new readers.

It's weird, this book is clearly written in lj, but I can still read it over and over again when I'm bored.

977) Accumulated from reading a lot of books, in order to solve the problem that his power is getting stronger and harder to control and adapt to the world he is in, the protagonist of the magical prop master I have read uses the concept of absolute domination to dominate everything about himself. For example, the author believes that the fundamental reason why a person is injured by a knife attack is that the body is a part of the world and is naturally limited by the world. After the protagonist has complete control over all concepts of self, he can choose or cut off all physical feedback, such as whether he is injured after being attacked, or whether he will age and die. ①Tao and art, choose the road with fewer people, and choose the volume on the road with fewer people. It is recommended that the author should choose the road with fewer people and spend more time and energy. If failure is a high probability, why not be a fleeting meteor that can at least be remembered. It is better than a featureless book that dies in a corner and remains unknown from beginning to end. . ②Know clearly what your selling points are and what race track you choose. It is the only law, being superior, bullying the small by relying on the strong, invincible literature, extraordinary reality, crossing two realms, extraordinary in the novice village, bullying the weak with the weapon of truth, why not the story has always been about being king in the kindergarten, creation is the wilderness, for example, in the normal world of historical literature, you can change history by playing extraordinary. For example, in the world of low martial arts, you can use the extraordinary skill to become an immortal. If you can't write anything, you can write it as mixed, so you don't go to the world of high-end power to find abuse. The starting point is too many junk books that abuse the master and suppress the combat power. . ③ Readers' feedback to the author, most people's feedback to individuals, the pros and cons of trade-offs. ④ If new and small authors want to stand out among many similar authors, they cannot listen to all the editors of Qidian. The interests of small authors like you are not the same as those of the Qidian platform. Understand that what everyone says and does when it comes to matters of vital interest is motivated by their own self-interest. ⑤The current path to "successful online writing" is the product of the daily update volume and the quality of the work, but the focus is different. . Unless you are confident that the quality of the work can stand out among similar works of the same period and become a minority, you will have to publish more updates. Rather than publishing it later, it is better to publish it early. Neither of them can win over others, so just rely on your luck or connections. . I feel that many new book authors are wasting their time and energy, spending their time and energy on things that can be grasped, rather than things that cannot be grasped. ⑥If there is a high probability that the result is a rush, then you must be a shooting star. . ⑦ Often the reader's perspective and standpoint. Why do readers spend money in exchange for your story text? Long-term subscription rewards are not given by charity, but by exchange. Human nature. . 849) If the protagonist of the web novel chooses to change the world after traveling through time, powerful extraordinary plug-ins are a must. Of course, if you invest in a good pregnancy, choose to eat and drink, follow the general trend of history and be a speculator, or be an ordinary person in the so-called peaceful and prosperous times and live in peace, without thinking about changing history, this kind of choice does not require any powerful plug-ins. There are no powerful plug-ins to change the world. Either the author's writing style and ideas are excellent, or he is trying to outwit his opponents and the readers. The extraordinary cheat cheat tells readers clearly that the protagonist is superior for a clear reason, because the protagonist is a superman, and he and others are not competing for the same ecological niche at all. The effect of extraordinary cheat cheats is uncontroversial and certain, while some people give examples of controversial things, such as the bad luck of the enemy and the protagonist. What do you think is the core of what I said above? It is certainty, whether there is any controversy. At least I don't think that there is a high probability that future generations of soldier kings or engineers who travel back to the bottom of the dynasty will be able to change the world and fight for the dragon and become emperor. . Invincible flow solipsistic novel The keywords I gave: God in the world, solipsism, detachment from human nature, fun person, game world, chaotic neutrality, human possibility. I have read two self-centered novels. A certain secular powerful man hides behind the scenes and uses secular rules to embarrass the protagonist. The protagonist directly cheats and turns him into a pug 🐶 and a frog 🐸. . . 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I feel like Yggdrasil's ability to send random hair is disgusting

Good! Since everyone in the book review section said that it will no longer be poisonous after chapter 80, then I will believe you and the author! Originally, I came to the book review area to start criticizing the book. After reading the comments, you should be a little confident in whitewashing the author. Anyway, I am not far from chapter 80 now. I am taking a look! Let me just say one thing about the previous chapters: Look at the suffocation and anger!

There is a big gap between it and Dream Realization Master. This book should be for practicing.

I am really convinced by this kind of SB protagonist.

I came to read it because of the author's last two books. They are so good, but the level is completely different from this one. I really can't stand this one anymore. .

Plagiarism, plagiarism, plagiarism I won't say who copied whom, you can judge for yourself "I am a god in another world" The plot is exactly the same, even the sixth chapter of "I Am" is exactly the same as the eighth chapter of this article

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 26, it's not interesting.