Overwatch Invades American Comics

Wuwuwuwuwu, this beginning is too poisonous. Pure white. Can you use some mature and steady words, and also need some description of the environment and psychology. Actually, I don't know how to write about fighting, so I can write a little bit about it and then get through it. (Come on!) I hope the author can understand the essential characteristics of each character. Coulson, a good old man, smiled proudly. . . What else happened next? . What a drama, maybe it was the author's idea. Okay ignore these. Another thing I really hope is that the character dialogue can be more rigorous and not use some of the current buzzwords! ! And like Tony, where the Ark was taken away from his chest, the author wrote, "Where is Pepper? Is she not in danger?" Woo woo woo It was too uncomfortable for Tony to call Pepper a nickname on this occasion. Pepper, Potts, any one of them seems comfortable. What follows this passage is: Rhodes is a little helpless, I am here to save you, how can you open your mouth and shut up like Little Pepper? It is true that people of the opposite sex are more indifferent than friends. ... I was poisoned, here are my thoughts. Rhodes slowly lifted Tony up and let him lean on the sofa. He looked at Tony's pale and anxious face and said: Pepper is fine, she is safe now, she is protected by SHIELD agents. Tony, how are you doing? Are you okay? What do you need from me? "Damn it, let them send more people, Stark's annual taxes are not in vain." Tony gritted his teeth and said with an ugly expression. Rhodes poured Tony a glass of water and then said, "Tony, what happened here? I received news that SHIELD has dispatched special personnel." 😰This is how I feel. Wow wow wow I'm just a reader, I hope the author can write better and better. The great masters all started from scratch, come on!

Personally, I also like Overwatch and various American comics. When I opened this book, I saw that the author wrote 2 million words in his first book. His spirit is commendable (｡•ᴗ-)_ I just read about 90 chapters, so I continued to read and leave comments on every hundred or so chapters. I mainly feel that there are some points that can be improved. Please listen to the author at his discretion. There are two places in the first 100 chapters that feel quite abrupt. One is that sometimes the main and supporting characters make sudden jokes, such as "heroine, please spare your life" and the like. Forcibly inserting this kind of dialogue is awkward. If it is written too much, it feels like self-pleasure, and it does not have any funny effect; Another point is that the skills and skins drawn from the boxes are too deliberate. Every time you draw a few chapters, there must be an arranged scene that can be used immediately. Moreover, the first 100 chapters basically follow the plot. What can be used is guessed before it is written, which actually lowers the reader's expectations. Personally, I feel that the lottery is an expectation of the unknown. If you can guess in advance what scenes it can be used in, it is better to buy it directly in the mall. In this way, when the plot appears, you can increase the expectation value by buying it directly.

I'm definitely going to play Wandering Earth.

The name of this book should be changed to Overwatch Working in American Comics.

After the bank robbery, Coulson followed the protagonist for a few days. As a result, he said "I come from the future" and began to doubt the information he investigated. He also believed that the protagonist really did not have a younger brother and was a person from the future? The most amazing thing is that after believing that the protagonist came from the future, he really let the protagonist go and left alone? Shouldn't it be immediately brought back to SHIELD to master the information?

Now that I have read Chapter 22, I feel very poisonous... 🥵🥵🥵 Let me list it... 1. The plot is so shocking that it explodes. The protagonist stood up like a saint and listed a bunch of reasons... Come on, I was an otaku in the previous life and a delivery boy in the current life. How high can your moral character be? Even if the main character is taken hostage by robbers and confronted by the police, it would be better than this. 2. The fight between the protagonist and the robber. A group of robbers with guns fight the protagonist, fistfight? Isn't the wisdom halo a bit harsh? 3, Desert Eagle and Chicago Typewriter. The Sand Eagle is something out of third-rate novels, because the real Sand Eagle has extremely strong recoil, can break its wrist if the one-hand posture is wrong, and has a small amount of ammunition. As for why Caesar takes the Sand Eagle in "Dragon", it's because as an A-level player, his skeletal muscles can easily support the recoil, and the Sand Eagle is really powerful. And the Chicago typewriter... It's an antique thing. It's best for the author to look up more relevant knowledge when writing a book. 4. The protagonist feels strange how Coulson knew it was him. Please, you became naked in front of everyone, and all the surveillance cameras captured it. Is SHIELD stupid or the protagonist stupid? Still keeping a low profile, has the aura of reducing intelligence affected the protagonist? 5. Colson is too mentally retarded. The protagonist is a person from the future! Just ask a few words and then leave? Don't you ask carefully about future technology? Even if you say you don't understand technology, you said you are an Overwatch "agent", so the intelligence must know it, right? Even the news that "the future leader will be a man with a shield" is the protagonist's "revelation". Is Coulson, a level 7 agent, the same as the neighbor's old lady? Just get a general idea of ​​the situation and leave? Doubtful? What if the protagonist is a human weapon developed by another country? 6. Eyes with piercing gaze... As a Chinese normal college graduate, I just can't bear it. If this were my student's composition, I would be able to criticize it... Isn't the author's faulty sentence too serious? Check it out anyway! That's all for now, let's just watch it first. After all, I like the Marvel theme very much. I also hope that the author's writing style can be improved and there will be less poisonous points 😥

"As a heroine, Emma is so embarrassing!" Comes from the inner monologue of Pigfoot

I have come to the end of a world again, bidding farewell to many familiar people whom I will never see again. At that moment I knew exactly what was reality and what was illusion.

First of all, I don't know whether the author is referring to the world background of OW or the game settings. If it's the latter... The game character has unlimited physical strength (run the entire map in one breath) No injuries when landing from high altitude (except for terrain damage) Unlimited supplies (reloading magazines are always in stock, skill CDs always have ammunition when they arrive, Hanzo Genji's cold weapons 'arrows' and 'shurikens' are never used up) There will be no battle damage (missing arms or legs) if beaten. Ignore terrain obstacles (for example, Genji will not get stuck in the wall when swinging his sword, and there will be no risk of ricochet when shooting... It is very dangerous to shoot in a small space, here refers to live ammunition, because it will kill himself).

The protagonist can actually transform when he draws? What to do if you get DVa? What to do if you draw Widowmaker? Will the protagonist stay the same? Women's clothing can make you stronger! Author, look at your butt, do you want to subscribe? Women's clothing! The protagonist transforms into a cross-dressing boss biubiubiu!

There is a problem with the setting. What is the use of Overwatch? Even if it develops for another 10,000 years, Thanos will be GG with just a few shots of technology.

When I saw Overwatch, I just thought of various books

Originally I was ready to leave, but I read the reviews, then looked at the catalog, and then I found out that the protagonist can change into a girl. . . Then I stayed, but the writing became better later on. As long as I resisted the poison at the beginning, I would be fine and I could continue reading~

Hello, I am an angel. I need 38 to save the world. Don't ask me why I need 38. Who the hell knows that Blizzard's Overwatch price has been reduced to 38?

Has the author quit? My American comics enlightenment novel, the first American comic I read was yours. I was very obsessed with it at the beginning. It's a pity that you stopped writing. Marvel is getting worse and worse, and its popularity is almost lost. After ten years of hard work, I feel sorry for them.

Speechless setting, since sprinting consumes stamina, you can keep running as long as you have enough stamina. Now, let's set a cooling time? Haha, please use your brain to change the settings when writing the game into reality! ! ! When you unlock heroes later, let alone cold weapons, do you still have to worry about where to get all kinds of guns and bullets? Where are the nuclear bombs? Where can I get the mecha? What to do with these surreal technologies such as various force field matrices, invisibility, flashing and teleportation? Do we still need to do our own research, development and creation? !

There are too many loopholes, and I don't like the setting. It would be interesting to change the transformation into redeemable ability equipment. Think about it, what if you transformed and could breathe in seconds? The transformation time is only a few minutes, plus one minute for each level. What's the use even if it's level 100? Once time passes, a bullet can easily kill you. What's more, the probability of exposure after transformation is 100%, so don't treat other people as fools. It's not like Ultraman who flies into the universe as soon as his time is up. I don't know if some settings will be added later.

I have lived for so many years and still don't know how to read panic in people's eyes, especially the trace of panic hidden deep in the eyes. . .

Wait, the Ultron crisis can be solved by a black shadow (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)

There is a bit of a contradiction in the scene when Coulson comes to the protagonist. After Coulson comes to the protagonist, the protagonist is so frightened that he seems to believe that SHIELD already knows that he has a system, but they are here to check his abilities. In order to cover up the existence of the system, the protagonist made up a story about himself coming from two hundred years in the future. In fact, the protagonist just said that it was his ability! Is the protagonist afraid of directly saying that he has the ability to be caught by SHIELD? Isn't it possible that the protagonist is not afraid of being caught if he says he comes from two hundred years in the future (even though SHIELD did not arrest the protagonist)? It feels a little strange.

Is there anyone like me who hasn't played Overwatch and read novels?😢

Transform for two minutes? How are you going to fight Infinity War? Upgrade to level 10,000?

I recommend the author to take a look at Marvel's official movie visual dictionary. There are official Marvel movie settings everywhere. For example, the movie version of the Kree has a very powerful self-healing ability and has a lifespan of hundreds of years. Ronan, a Kree, has been bathed in the blood of the gods since he was a child. In Guardians of the Galaxy, Star-Lord and Rocket Raccoon's super quantum cannon can destroy satellites with one shot (this is more terrifying than nuclear bombs), but the impact on Ronan only slightly injured him.

Introduction: There are many people in the world who believe in the flat earth theory. They believe that the earth is flat and a disk, not a ball. The sun and moon rotate on both sides of the disk. There is the alternation of the sun and the moon. The difference in the distance between the sun and the moon and the ground produces the four seasons. People who believe in the flat earth theory are not ignorant fools. On the contrary, most people are elites in society. Some are millionaires, and some have Ph. D. S in astrophysics. But no matter what their status is? They never believe something until they see it with their own eyes. Otherwise they won't believe that you are round, so what is her basis? The world should look like this in the eyes of people who believe in the flat earth theory. It is a huge disk. At the center of the disk is the North Pole. The outer edge of the disk is the South Pole. The sun and moon rotate in the sky, but in fact there is no universal gravitation, which is why people do not float up from the ground. It's because this disk is constantly rising. There are legends that four huge elephants are dragging the disk below, and others say that there are clusters of rocks below the disk. He has no more evidence, so people think that the United Nations is a staunch supporter of the flat earth theory. Because the United Nations logo is very similar to the disc world they imagined. They firmly believe that Antarctica is the wall of the world, and there are more worlds like the Earth outside Antarctica. They believe that it is a parallel universe, and that it is other worlds. Because no one has ever been to Antarctica, and even if they have, they are very few. They thought it was arranged in advance, and they didn't believe it unless they were allowed to go to Antarctica in person... Today William was called to his office by Coulson. William didn't know what he was going to do, but he still arrived on time. The time had just arrived, 12:44 noon. Colson: Hey, William, you're here. William: Yes, my chief, you came to me, what's the matter? Although it was Colson who called William here, by now he was obviously in a hurry, as if he was looking for something? Colson: By the way, did you see a white metal box with an American flag printed on it? William: I didn't see it. Is that something important? Colson: Hey, of course it's important, do you know what's in there? That is a complete set of the latest Captain America flashcards that I have collected. There is also a photo of me and Captain America in it. Oh my god, I was so careless, how could I lose such an important thing William... Well, you called me over, wasn't that just because of this? Oh, no, of course not. I called you over because of another thing. I think you will definitely be interested. No, I don't want to be interested. I have already decided that I will go to the beach with Eve this week. Next week I will take her to the West Lake in China. I don't have time. Don't even think about sending me any more tasks. You'd better listen to it! Our scouting team last month. New 084 discovered. In this abandoned warehouse. There is a reaction inside him that cannot be detected by our current technology, and this reaction is constantly releasing energy. We want to know why? Aren't you from the future? What do I want to know from you? William, I dreamed of a plane that could radiate energy. Or found it in an old warehouse? A little strange. But as long as you don't go out on these missions, it's fine. He also wanted to spend a wonderful vacation with his girlfriend William promised him to go back at noon tomorrow. When William walked in front of the plane that day, he was suddenly stunned because Athena suddenly reminded him that his current world change rate suddenly dropped by 0.5 Percentage points, and then continued to decrease at a rate of 0.001% Per second for seven seconds, so he asked Athena William: Athena, what's going on? Why has the world rate of change declined? Athena replied: It has been detected that the dimensional parameters of this plane are different from the real world it is currently in, and the reaction between these differences generates huge energy, which seems to feed back to another world connected to it that has the same latitude parameters as this world, but is in a different location. It has been detected that the reason for the decline in the world's change rate is @"~(blog.. Net ՅՅ±(⑉✪≤ακοιγÈÆÆÃÍÌぉかい↹ William: Athena, what's wrong with you? Program error. Data correction is being attempted. Correction in progress... Correction in progress... Correction successful! Athena will go into hibernation after three seconds, lasting three hours 3 2 1 ... …… 😰[fn= 51]😰 William: So what is going on? Why did you suddenly sleep for three hours? Hebe William, what happened? No, no, no. Nothing. William finally gave up his vacation with Eve. He decided to find out. So with the help of Coulson, he successfully obtained the information about the plane. That's it. In the past, an American general went on a mission to the Antarctic. During the process, he suddenly passed through layers of fog and lost contact with the outside world. After passing through the fog, two aircraft hovered around his plane. Later, he was taken to a plane. There is a very long table there. He sits at one end of the table and a blond European man wearing a green robe and a red crown says to him We will prepare a sumptuous dinner for you. >With good food and wine, I learned from the subsequent conversations that they were not surprised by the arrival of this general. On the contrary, they seemed to have expected it. Later, those people said to him, when you go out, you must tell everyone not to go to Antarctica again From then on, I At the same time, you want to set up a protected area in Antarctica to prevent anyone from reaching the center of Antarctica. However, he didn't listen, but still told the U. S. Government After that, they launched an exploration plan in Antarctica. When preparing to explore the Antarctic, their fleet was affected by an unknown attack and sank to the bottom of the sea. In September of the following year, they prepared to use aircraft to explore the Antarctic. However, a disc aircraft emerged from the bottom of the sea and destroyed it. A plan. The soldiers who had experienced that battle said that it was really terrifying. The disc didn't make any sound. They attacked like a laser, but there was still no sound. Later, it flew back into the sea and we couldn't find any of it. There are traces of it. After that, the US government announced that Antarctica did not belong to any country, and an Antarctic research station was established there. Since then, no one has ever walked to the central part of this mysterious land. After receiving this information, William suddenly remembered that he had seen a statement about the flat earth theory in a scientific magazine. He then arrived in Antarctica. He did find the magical fog. When he was about to go in on the Kunshi fighter, suddenly a disk appeared from a distance, with black stripes on its surface. Attacking William. William transformed into Reinhard's form and raised his shield, preparing to fight. During the battle, William still rushed into the fog. He didn't seem to catch up. He didn't know what it was. Figured it out. When he was about to move forward, he suddenly lost his footing and fell down. Fortunately, he grabbed the edge with both hands and was shocked. I saw four huge elephant-like creatures with dark scales all over their bodies, and each of these four elephants had a huge gold-like bracket on its back, and the boy was connecting to the place he was holding. To be precise. Underneath the four elephants was stepping on something like a flying carpet. Judging from the flowing air, they were rising rapidly. He was very scared, but more importantly, he had experienced many things. He had never seen anything like this before. Just when he was about to climb up, he suddenly saw a man wearing blue clothes with gray stripes. With a warm white helmet on his face, he looked at William. William was trembling a little. He watched helplessly as the man put his hand on his, but he didn't seem to have any strength to let him open his hand. . Falling into the bottomless abyss. William was filled with despair, and a trace of tears oozed from the corners of his eyes as he slowly closed his eyes His eyelids were trembling, and his eye circles were slightly red, recalling everything that had happened before. He was an ordinary person. His original life was to find a girlfriend, marry her, and have another child. br> He was destined to be extraordinary. He traveled to the dangerous Marvel world and the game he loved helped him occupy a place in this world Here, it had everything he could not have beforeAcquired what he could not obtain before, he has a career that allows him to obtain a lot of wealth, and he also has a girlfriend who respects and loves each other He has a group of extraordinary friends and an exciting adventure <. Br>At this moment, he recalled everything in the past, but he was unwilling to do so. The tears oozing from the corners of his eyes were tears of pain and unwillingness. He couldn't let it end like this. He even refused. I was thinking, if I had resisted a little, I wouldn't have been pushed down, and all this is just if, there is no if in the real world He could only choose death, choose to accept death. However, at this moment, he suddenly frowned. Wrinkled. He felt like he was still falling. He opened his eyes. The tears trapped in his eyes floated outward. He looked around and found a huge black hole in front of him. Hole. No, it's not a black hole, it's a black eyeball as big as the sun. It's too deep, like the endless darkness of the vacuum of the universe, it seems to be sucking him in. This eye. The eyes belong to that elephant-like thing. He really underestimated the size of those huge elephants, thinking that even if he descended for so long he could only reach the elephant's eyes. He looked down, and with his eyesight, he could no longer see the ground below the elephant's trunk. It's easy, but that's not the most important thing. The most important thing is that he knows that he still has a chance to live. William: Athena is preparing to transform into Pharaoh!!! He shouted these words loudly For a moment, his body was full of energy. There was a light like a rainbow and an aurora, and his body was like a human-shaped ice sculpture in a state of rapid melting. And William, wrapped in the light, stood out from the light like a human-shaped ice sculpture. And came out. His eyes were firm and full of desire for life. He landed on the elephant's trunk closest to the face. He could see the elephant's huge lower eyelids, and above them were the formidable black eyes. . Looking up, the white mist is looming. There is a gap like dawn in the middle. That is where he fell, and he is going to fly upward from there. , transformed into Genji in the middle William: Rush! (Only people from the Shimada family can climb the wall) He seemed to see the dawn of dawn right in front of him. He rushed out, and at this moment, she seemed to be reborn. >His eyes were full of anger. William: Damn, I must find the guy who showed me the lantern of life. Even though he was in the fog, he could still tell the direction. On the right is the direction of home, and on the left is the direction. Heading to another world, he no longer wanted to find out about this matter. He also didn't want to know why there was a flat earth theory in the Marvel Universe. He just wanted to find the guy who almost killed him, so he resolutely set foot in the direction of a foreign land.

The author, I really want to see the protagonist turn into an angel lady |ω･)و ̑̑༉

I don't know if the author has calculated the maximum jump of Thor Hulk in the Marvel Cinematic Universe. My impression is that Hulk in Thor 3 jumps directly from the Rainbow Bridge to the Golden Palace, and when Thor Awakens, he jumps directly from the Golden Palace to the Rainbow Bridge. This jump is several kilometers.

What the hell... Each chapter says the average age is 10 years old? The moves are all in the wrong place, without looking at the whole picture. I just grab a small section and hit it there. I say this is wrong, that is wrong, and I am too arrogant... Capitalize one word - obey.

Marvel+Goldfinger from games/other animations=bad I read the summaries of many Marvel fans (even Shen Nong couldn't save him) Looking forward to this book being different

To be honest, there is nothing good to criticize about this book. What can you criticize about a 19-year-old book? In fact, there is no need to watch it a second time

This is a fine book, but there are so many flaws in the early stage that I can't read it. I'd like to ask how it goes in the later stage.