Mechanical Latitude

I always feel that there is something wrong with the wizard's education system. It's good to feed the weak to the strong, but if you just use this to train disciples and students, I really can't figure out whether it is to train successors or to train enemies. How can the talents cultivated by this training method ensure their safety? Or should they be able to say with relief even if they themselves are killed, "Ah, well done. As expected, my disciples are better than others. I will die without complaining."

This Qiusha has a good influence on reading.

This is an opinion building, and there is also a supporting building

Is Qiusha's child the protagonist's or someone else's?

You've been talking too much nonsense, and each page has to be a long one. Maybe it's because it's a new author. In fact, many readers don't like to read this. You often write a long article from the third person perspective, which is very uncomfortable.

Author, isn't this pace a bit fast?

It's very well written, I hope I can write more

This Qiu Sha really affects the reading experience.

A huge world view, a very set setting, and no outline can easily break down. Just like a novel I read, in the first hundred and a few chapters, the protagonist was directly positioned as the strongest, and then it was gone. However, if you write according to this idea, it is best to add more in the later stage. Only chapters where the protagonist becomes stronger will easily lead to death. . .

There is no need to explain the text. You only need to describe why the protagonist does what he does. You don't need to write. The description should not be emotional, just be objective. Again, don't explain why. What you write like this is like an expository essay, not like a novel.

One million words seems to be less😃😃

The author is really not good at text dialogues. It was very awkward and very eye-catching. It was so dramatic in an instant that I thought it was in modern times.

I want to ask, is Tifu's apprentice the heroine?

The progress is too fast and the content is a bit too watery

It feels like it's getting more and more difficult to understand later on. . . . . Why not learn from what I wrote earlier and make it simpler?

I think if the main character is Ryan, who was killed at the beginning, maybe it won't be finished in one million words.

There's too much nonsense, it's hard to watch

I feel that the pace is too fast. What I wrote before became a first-level wizard and I started to understand everything.

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Where does the protagonist come from? Why time travel? Wait, wait, wait, you should explain it clearly.

I'm really speechless, just a hundred chapters have made me a god, even the Invincible style dare not write like this

Latitude? Is the author trying to talk about dimensions? The title of the book has typos, but it's okay

I just want to know, is there a female protagonist? If not, I'll watch it