Teutonic Oath

I felt really sad for the author when I read it. The historical district itself is not a big district at the beginning, let alone foreign history in the middle of the historical district. There are countless Xiaobai articles about the Three Kingdoms, Warring States, Song Dynasty, and the Qing rebellion. Some of them are written seriously, and many are well written. However, I still feel that the writing style of this book is no worse than that of Qin Li. Of course, it is still different from Hanxiang. But even so, the current results are so quiet. The biggest problem is that the selection of materials and the audience are not done well. Foreign history is difficult to mix, and you choose a niche and cold subject, and there are still problems with the positioning of the protagonist. . . . Even if you have the original manuscript, won't it take time to write it out and send it out? Is it really okay to waste it like this? Author, please think about it carefully

A good book is really a good book. There are very few books about foreign history at the starting point. Most of them are superficial, and there are very few that can compare with this book. But history has a small audience, and foreign history is a niche within a niche. It is a pity that no one reads such a good book.

In fact, the writing is quite good, but it's a pity that the author has no perseverance at all. Both books only wrote more than a hundred chapters before they were eunuchs. Let alone historical niche, there are definitely a few historical novels at the top of the monthly popular list. Even if relatively few people read foreign history, it is not unusual to have tens of thousands of fans. The problem is that you have only written more than a hundred chapters. For a new author, it is the beginning. Isn't it normal to have few fans at this time? Isn't it the same for platinum authors when they wrote their first books? Even those very few authors who became popular after writing more than a hundred chapters definitely didn't have many fans when they wrote more than a hundred chapters. They all rely on time and word-of-mouth to gradually accumulate. If they can't continue after writing more than a hundred chapters, then it's better to go to sleep and stop writing books.

I just finished reading Chapter 50 and couldn't help but write a comment 😁. I have read the book review section, and I hope the author will not be hit by some of the comments. And, I can only say that I personally think this book is very good and worth reading. I like it very much and will support the author. I will give you a reward in a few months... My personal finances are a bit tight at the moment, please forgive me... And I will write a specific book review at least after reading the latest chapter. PS: When typing these words, I am wearing a Teutonic knight's robe that I regard as home clothes…………😁

Am I really desperate? Is there no one alive? I was the only one who posted a few book reviews before, but then no one else posted them. Can any readers who are still alive now sign up? Despair

Very well written, I like it very much

I have read the first twenty chapters. To be honest, your writing style is not bad, but when I read it, I felt that there was no main line and it was not interesting. The passion of the characters is too low. Internet readers will decide whether to continue reading once they have read three to five chapters. But your story makes people still not feel the story after reading fifteen chapters. This is the biggest problem. There is also the issue of the subject matter. Teutonic is a very cold subject matter, but your choice of subject has driven away 80% of the people. Not much to say about the rest, the results cannot be supported by just a few people. Let me tell you, why not just post the outline, then cut it off and start again, choose a European medieval period with high hot spots, such as the Spanish colonial era, or the Thirty Years' War, and then choose the characters to be more vivid, at least don't think about it being so low-key. If you start a new book, choose the right subject, stick to it, and you can still rely on writing to bring it back to life. Otherwise, it would be a pity to die of frustration because of poor grades and no one to communicate with you. After all, your writing skills are not bad.

This chapter is a bit confusing. Especially when the viscount was taken to see the situation by the soldiers, that section was a mess and there was a problem in the connection.

Chapter 174 Why is it still anti-piracy content?

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By chance, I opened this book. After reading the first five chapters... Well, I got goosebumps... When I read the introduction, I thought the protagonist was from Britain or France. I really didn't expect that the author's setting went to the Baltic Sea and was captured by the Slavs... This is such a biased writing... And he spent so much space describing the system of the Principality of Novgorod. Uh, I'm convinced, I'm convinced. Originally, there were very few articles about Europe, mostly about Germanic people, with a little bit of Celtic stuff mixed in... Now we have an author. The three major barbarian tribes in Rome are considered complete.

Uh, okay... The protagonist turns out to be of Baltic aboriginal descent... However, the paternal lineage is exciting.

Why can't I understand what I'm doing after reading more than ten chapters... It feels so confusing

Slower, slower, sometimes you don't need to pay too much attention to the detailed description of the war. Some of the extra scenes can only use one paragraph, which can also show your writing power and control. Too long-winded will not retain the flow. How many children can like their mother's nagging. Why must we write history? It is still such a cold period of history. You can completely change to a new way of writing, such as an alien world, so that you can add some low-magic elements and make many things seem to have at least a reasonable explanation. Writing about the Middle Ages is not only about war, political conspiracy, family inheritance, management system, and most importantly You have to be patient, because this is inherently unpopular. I believe that everyone who picks up Western history and the history of other worlds can realize this. Therefore, I am honing my writing style to be brief but not less sharp. I have saved hundreds of thousands of manuscripts to prevent interruptions. The next book will be taken along with the previous one and move forward with a heavy load. After all, the road ahead is long.

That, the author! Did you gain weight later?

Is it because the anti-theft has not been updated? In the previous one, he fought with the prince, but in the next one, he became the Elpin guard from who knows how many chapters ago.

The writing is okay, but it's too slow. It's over a hundred chapters long, and the protagonist has just started as a baron, and he's not a time traveler, but the writing is okay. Update it quickly. It's too slow to warm up. It's hard to watch now. I need to watch more.

I saw the protagonist instigating the free people of Prussia, and vaguely saw the Junkers who appeared in Prussia after the 16th century... The warlike and brave landowners-Junker nobles

Really unpopular, is it the Northern Crusade era? After the Battle of Ice Lake?

Teutonic Knights? Has the protagonist established the Principality of Prussia?