Plant Cultivator

I've read Chapter 65, and overall it's OK, except that some parts are uncomfortable to watch. First, there is a big difference between the spiritual master realm and the alchemy realm! Second, the protagonist praised the three minor realms for leaping over the level and killing people, without considering the consequences of not being able to kill. Third, when you meet a random ghost, you chase him and ask him to do ghost cultivation, and you prepare things for him, which is inexplicable. Why don't your acquaintances in the village want to go back early to repay you! You still have room to keep it a secret! Ghost cultivators are still not recognized, I'm speechless😓. Although the author has various reasons to explain it, most people can't stand it. It's good to put these aside. I didn't read the later part, but I was already depressed at the beginning. Fourth, the description of the sword cultivator is too powerful. If I didn't read it later, it would probably be even more exaggerated. Goodbye

Water floods the golden mountain, and the plot of the Rat King has you hooked for twenty chapters Doesn't the author revise it every time he writes it? Read what you wrote, can you do some subtraction? ! The deletion of many paragraphs does not affect the expression at all, it just needs to be improved The previous upgrade rhythm was so poor, the first 4 levels were put on the shelf, and the next chapter was directly upgraded to 4 levels. What is this and what? Can't control the plot? Go and see what other people have written about upgrading during the Qi refining period, and Chapter 300 of foundation building, it will be a waste for you. But I endured it... The character creation was like an idiot, the heroine was like a child, I endured it... As a novice author, here is a piece of advice, if you want to show the cuteness of the character, you should not directly say she is cute, but should show it through the form and dialogue, but as for online novels, I tolerated it. When the author was killing the Holy Son, the heroine's "arrogance and disobedience to advice" completely went against the character. I couldn't bear it... The author's subscription was miserable, "Hope for Comrade", "Xianfeng Daogu" and "Literary Youth Attack", I couldn't bear it... But when I saw the author's summary about a broken sword that can be used in three levels, and also recalled how the sword was damaged, I couldn't bear it! ! You are really good at water.

The author's general structure is very good, and the cultivation levels he conceived are also very innovative, but I still have to abandon the book... First, there is a problem with the author's writing skills. A large number of modern Internet terms conflict with the mortal flow that this article wants to build. Second, the layout is unnatural, especially the five After more than ten chapters, I started cultivating ghost cultivators, which probably drove away half of the readers... I also abandoned the article at this time. By the way, I would like to remind the author that for online articles, a sense of immersion is very important. For example, my main character is named Fei... Haha, this name is a bit wild and a bit modern, but it doesn't have a fairy-like flavor anymore...

Very good setting, very good writing style, but too many poisonous points. Pity

A little speculation, the ancient times should be the same period as other fairy novels. Then something unknown happened (most likely because of the fairy mountain), and then the inheritance was cut off, leaving only the system of cultivation (and ghost cultivation). The Five Elements Exercise should also be a big pitfall. Come on, author, write with peace of mind, you can write well.

Qi Yu is okay, but the protagonist has a very strong sense of luck and keeps asking for trouble again and again.

After reading it, I feel that the description of the blue bird is very creative and very graphic. The bird's beak merges into a cage and the bird's body forms a formation. Although the fighting scene feels a little lacking, the use of the magic weapon feels very detailed. The bird's beak is eye-catching and very graphic.

I have seen the latest chapter, let me share my feelings, and let's talk about the advantages first: First, rich plant settings As a novel that mainly focuses on plants as the theme of cultivating immortals, there are a lot of plant descriptions, a good depiction of the environment, and it is easy to have a sense of the picture, especially for people like me who like encyclopedias and illustrated books. It is very appetizing. 🤭 Second, the diversification of pets In the article, the protagonist has recovered many pets, and they are all very well portrayed and described, which is better than many pet streams, which is a surprise 😁. This may be related to expectations. In the later stage of many pet novels, the protagonist basically shows off. Without the description of pets, it is even more valuable that this kind of immortality can describe pets. 👍 Third, there is no heroine and a harem ✌️ Starting from Lord of the Mysteries, I have been liking novels without heroines. It's not that I don't like them, it's that there are too few good descriptions of girls. Most of them are for the self-orgasm to satisfy the male vanity and have no soul at all. There are too few flesh-and-blood things that can be described. The author's description of girls is also average, and he did not make a wise choice to set up a heroine. Fourth, the description of mortals After the protagonist cultivates immortality, he returns to Mojia Village and goes to the world of mortals to refine his heart. There are many detailed descriptions of the mortal world. In fact, it is quite interesting to watch. The progress of the plot is also comfortable. It also depicts the character and psychological growth of the protagonist from the side, and it feels like there are hidden clues. I wonder if the author will think of it later 🤭🤭. Okay, after talking about the advantages, let's start complaining about the shortcomings: First, the writing expression needs to be improved The author should be a part-time writer, and it is very likely that it is the first time to write a long article. He may have been well prepared in the early stage, the sentences are fluent, there are no typos, and the plot is compact. But in the later stages, there were more typos and the plot started to jump. This is especially evident after the war between good and evil begins. In addition, the author likes to use "but," "and," to make transitions. I don't know if this is the author's personal habit. If used well, it can be regarded as a personal style, but if used incorrectly, it can easily cause drama and be cumbersome. If one or two declarative sentences can express clearly, it will take a long paragraph. For example: Ziyue smiled and said: "Hehe, sir, we (I don't remember it later)", there is no need to add hehe here, it feels like Ziyue is abnormal. Second, the plot setting conflict First let's talk about the spiritual setting. Spiritual plants are a feature of this novel. When the protagonist enters the sect in the early stage, spiritual enlightenment and the cost of spiritual enlightenment are particularly described. Even a second-rate sect can only enlighten a hundred people once every three years. Under such circumstances, those casual cultivators who have no background, how can they get such resources to enlighten spirits, and they also need to know that they have spiritual hearts. This is different from other immortality novels, where they can cultivate immortality if they know they have spiritual roots and techniques. In the early stage, they were all sect missions. There were not many casual cultivators encountered, so it was manageable. However, when the battle began in the later period, the number of casual cultivators was too large, which was completely inconsistent with the early settings. Then there is a plot jump. Many times, at the end of the previous chapter, the protagonist is still confronting people, but in the next chapter, the protagonist has returned to the cave, and just briefly mentions the previous events. This is obviously a lazy method, which will make people wonder if they have missed something and are jumping too much. Then there are too many explanation words. A good plot does not need to explain too much to the readers. There are too many such explanations in the later stage. Rather than spending so much time explaining it, it is better to find ways to express it through the psychological activities of the characters or the progression of the plot, lest readers understand it incorrectly. There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. As long as you write the plot well, you have no control over how others will understand it. Third, the sense of déjà vu is too strong I don't know if it's my imagination, but the plot development is very similar to "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality". It develops obscenely in the early stage, and then enters the sect's secret realm to explore, the protagonist's strength increases to perform tasks, the war between good and evil breaks out, and the protagonist goes overseas. Of course, this is a very routine structure for cultivating immortals. I just hope that the author can develop his own specialties and does not need to follow the ideas of other works. He can develop at his own pace and slowly. There is no need to disrupt the rhythm of the story development for the sake of correspondence. Finally, I hope the author can persist in finishing the article. Of course, he should not be too fluent in writing. Don't rush to post after writing. You will find many problems after you take a rest and read it. Of course, if it is to complete the task, there is nothing you can do. It is rare to see an interesting article, but I still look forward to good development. 👍

It's broken again! Will update again next year, understand

Is this real farming?😄