Plant Cultivator

I've read 65 chapters. Overall, it's okay, but some parts were difficult to read. First, a Spirit Master and a Core Formation Realm cultivator are fighting—two major realms apart! Second, the protagonist boasts about killing someone of a lower realm without considering the consequences of not being able to kill them.

The flooding of Jinshan Temple and the Rat King plot have been stretched into almost twenty chapters. Does the author never revise their work after writing it? Please read what you've written. Can you simplify it? Deleting many paragraphs wouldn't affect the overall meaning at all; it's just filler. The pacing of leveling up was so bad at the beginning.

The author's overall structure is good, and the cultivation levels they've conceived are quite innovative, but I still have to abandon the book… First, the author's writing style is problematic; the large amount of modern internet slang clashes with the mortal cultivation theme the story aims to create.

The premise is excellent, the writing is superb, but it has too many flaws. It's a pity.

Based on a rough guess, the ancient period was probably similar to other fantasy novels. Later, something happened (most likely because of the immortal mountain), and the lineage was cut off, leaving only the plant cultivation system (and ghost cultivation). The Five Elements Technique is probably a huge pitfall as well. Keep it up, author! Relax and write, you can write very well.

The adventures were alright, but the protagonist had an extremely strong sense of luck and repeatedly brought trouble upon himself.

After reading it, I felt that the description of the Bluebird was very creative and vivid. The bird's beak merged into a cage, and its body became an array. Although the fight scenes felt slightly lacking, the use of magical artifacts felt very detailed. The detail of the bird's beak was particularly striking and visually appealing.

I've read the latest chapter, so here are my thoughts, starting with the good points: First, a rich plant setting As a novel that focuses on plants as a theme for cultivation, the abundant descriptions of plants and the excellent environmental depiction make it very visually appealing, especially for someone like me who enjoys encyclopedic illustrations. 🤭 Second, the diversity of pets.

It's stopped again! It will resume next year, please understand.

Is this real farming? 😄