Dark Age

The most poisonous point: a female European Emperor Lily character is set up, who gets something for nothing and will have more roles in the front. The original intention was to create a mascot, but I overestimated my own level. Correction method: reduce the number of subsequent scenes. Poisonous point: The protagonist loses empathy for the earth, so he seems heartless. Correction method: Arrange the protagonist's actions to regain empathy in advance to reduce the number of realistic scenes. The most poisonous point: the heroine is not likeable. Correction method: It doesn't matter, just pretend that she doesn't exist. There is a reason for her behavior, but it is just foreshadowing. A little bit of trouble: a few rare words. Correction method: Change it to just a name. Thanks to the readers for their corrections. If there is anything else you can tell me.

Running doesn't consume stamina, but fighting consumes it? There shouldn't be a so-called stamina bar in this kind of game world, just consume stamina normally. Otherwise it's a bit poisonous

It's okay, it looks very comfortable. I have no tickets today. I'll give you a reward of 1,000.

NPCs in the game are very important. If you kill them, your account will be banned. In reality, human lives don't matter. You can kill them as you like. Is this the protagonist's worldview? A bit inconsistent

This book has a wrong outlook and makes me feel uncomfortable to read. It creates a murderous maniac and the protagonist has no reaction at all. He didn't care at all that so many people died because of him, and he didn't guide and maintain the order after he developed the super power. Abandoned the book.

To be honest, those things in reality are the biggest flaw of this novel.

I suspect you are from a female channel. The standard Mary Sue image of Xiaodai is something that most male channel authors cannot write.

I can't watch it anymore, I don't know that the main plot has deviated from the protagonist by hundreds of millions of light years. . The character design of the supporting characters is good, but the character of the protagonist is almost gone. . . The same goes for this game setting. .

If Qin Jie is the heroine, I won't watch it. Which Qin Jie I hate?

I really doubt that this protagonist has a brain. He is so smart that you can have an impact in reality. Then the player must have a high chance of being extraordinary in reality, because he absorbs the power of a shadow that almost destroys a reality. Even if it is weak, the cumulative effect will still cause problems. As a result, the game is designed carelessly without considering the actual situation at all. It is really very careless. There is another one, you, Gaia from another world, absorbed nine-tenths of the power. As a result, you are still a mortal. From your previous description, your body has not been strengthened much,? ? ? ? What kind of cattle batch operation is this?

I want to give them all my 15 monthly passes. After swiping two cards, you can't get out.