Mage Veigar

I can't understand it at all. It's very poisonous and has a Western fantasy background. As a result, it has a strong oriental flavor. I won't mention the Chinese military salutes. Even the blessings are, I wish you good luck in martial arts. But the extraordinary powers in this world are obviously professionals and magicians. The plot is also super poisonous. It describes how much the imperial army is. The protagonist, as the only professional in the regiment and the key training target named by the regiment leader, disappeared for several days while on a mission to send military workers, and no one found him. After being injured and fainting, he was rescued and ended up in a bakery very close to the military camp in the city. He did not dare to return to the military camp for fear of being intercepted on the way, so he searched for him two times. A soldier who came out to buy breakfast for his commander sent a letter back to ask the army to pick him up. As a result, the two soldiers were stopped five minutes away from the military camp, which was about 500 meters away from the military camp. The reason was that to go to the military camp, they had to pass through an uninhabited alley, and they were stuck at the gate of the military camp. Five hundred meters from the entrance, he was intercepted and killed so close to the military camp. No soldiers saw it. At this time, the protagonist killed the bakery family because a spy in the family spread the news. After the killing, he continued to shrink because the protagonist believed that his leaving would mean that the spy mission had failed.

The conflict in the plot is too far-fetched. You said that Leah is the only light in your other world. The store manager and his family who saved Leah are Leah's lights. You just killed the whole family because the other party's son was a spy? It's okay if you kill the spy. Killing the whole family is too much. You want to kill someone else's son and let people thank the murderer for the killing. I'm really speechless😓He was beaten to death.

This is a novel where the protagonist and supporting characters have low IQs. If you want to describe a large organization, you must first understand the large organization, know their strengths and weaknesses, and what their bottom line is! Without these logic, the logic will not make sense, and the character of the protagonist is not shaped in this way. This is not decisiveness in killing, but stupidity. Decisiveness in killing is a kind of wisdom, not an act.

After reading some, I would like to say that the supporting characters are mentally challenged and the plot is a bit far-fetched. Moreover, dark novels generally do not have a beloved heroine. But in this book, he has one, and she has betrayed the protagonist. A one-sentence divine book, just like the Anti-Japanese Heroes.

Good-looking and true (please read with caution as it involves spoilers and examples) In the first dozens of chapters of the book, there is no doubt that the protagonist has made many mistakes, leading to various betrayals and attacks. There are also stories such as being abandoned by the commander-in-chief after achieving great achievements, which made me feel very real. Quite a few of these crises are glimmers of hope that appear due to good luck. (Of course, I won't say much about the courage, strategy, excitement, etc. When fighting for survival.) This is unlike other novels. In order to avoid making readers think that the protagonist's aura is too strong and has too much luck, the protagonist is forced to "cheat" and deduce the crisis before it comes, so as to carry out counter-calculation and other actions. For example, in the book, the person in the 4th regiment has no strength and likes to use "facts" to prove that he is right, which makes the protagonist feel that he is too nervous and suspicious, which leads to a joke. In the end, the truth is that the first 4 times were all the enemy's tactics to lure the enemy, and the ambush was successful. As a reader who has turned on the "God's Perspective" trick, when everyone and the facts themselves indicate that the protagonist is too careful, the protagonist also begins to doubt himself and decides to try to trust others. This is "forced wisdom" and disappointing. But it makes sense. Isn't it? The protagonist is not an arrogant person, nor does he think that the whole world is stupid. So, isn't it necessary to learn and accept opinions with an open mind? Then there were Shangguan who resisted and surrendered, refused to listen to orders, and even took action in an emergency, etc. There is also the last professional who allows the protagonist to enter the ranks of magicians. First, Peter broke through before the battle. I thought the author would say how he turned the tide, but he didn't. He took advantage of the enemy's contempt to fight, and then died. This accident did not allow the protagonist to gather the last person. The final choice is to sacrifice the seriously injured teammate next to you. Ahem, the protagonist is actually not a bottomless person. This matter is complicated. In short, there is no good person here. This truth brings a lot of regrets and surprises to everyone (including but not limited to the book). A surprise that is different from other books. As for some people pointing out that this book is not a fantasy but a military or something, well, in short, I like this book very much.

The finale felt a bit perfunctory. Now that democracy has been sacrificed, what will happen next? Did the news of the protagonist's strict blockade only spread in the West, or did it also spread in the East and the protagonist announced the abolition of the monarchy? If you cancel, will you live a pastoral life? Shia probably doesn't want to. And what is the final outcome of the supernatural evil force? Is the request for help forcibly neutralizing Carol's protagonist aura? I think a lot of things are not made up without logic, but the author didn't make it clear. At least give me a postscript.

After reading Chapter 15, there are a lot of bugs, let's get rid of them.

1. World culture/knowledge tree framework. 2. Core values. This book perfectly explains how to survive in a world of chaotic views. It can be seen that the author worked very hard, but the characters described are exactly the opposite of what he thought 🤫. It is recommended to read aloud to find out the problem by yourself!

I have read many chapters of this book, and I like reading it anyway. Abide by the laws of the empire and be decisive in killing, which is much better than those whining virgin slapping texts.

Age is a big mistake, even writing 16 years old is better than 11 years old! How can an eleven-year-old without plug-ins complete training that even adults cannot?

The biggest failure is not darkness or humanity. It is indeed what the author said himself. It is a completely self-exciting novel. In the past, I felt high about writing about Goldfinger, so I wrote more about Goldfinger. Later, when I felt high about writing about battles, I wrote about slap-in-the-face wars. The terrible thing is that I basically threw away Goldfinger.

After being convinced, a fake Taoist priest in the comments came to argue. Dark novels insist on distinguishing the good and evil of human nature. Is the evil spirit reincarnated? This is the first time I met someone who was making comments in the comments building. I will first give the author a 10,000-dollar reward for being published. If Taoist priests really want to make excuses, why don't they come and reward them on the forum? The more rewards you give, maybe other authors will write according to your ideas, how about it?

This book has a lot of poisonous points. It was Shia. If a normal person thought about it, he would have been cut into pieces and divided into five pieces. The protagonist not only did not punish him, but also reused him. What is this behavior? For the sake of a person who betrayed him, he imprisoned himself. Made like this? Is the protagonist not Shi Lezhi? I can't understand. Just ask about Lao Shenzi's disgusting love? What the hell?

The military style under the guise of magic style is very low-end. Go study military theory...

This book is a typical novel under the official system. It is obvious that the author's historical level is not low, and the control of the system also shows the various criticisms of an upgraded version of the European medieval empire. But there are actually a lot of things that don't make sense logically. Whether it's the age of the protagonist or the military loopholes, it's all speechless, and the same is true for the extraordinary level. It was said earlier that dark magicians are rare, and elemental magicians can't be beat in single combat. Later, for the purpose of decapitation tactics, a squadron of more than thirty shadow mages with multiple medians immediately appeared. With so many people, it doesn't matter if they can't beat a high-level mage. They can also be stolen by pig's feet, so forget it. Then the author's understatement of guerrilla warfare really showed off my face. Playing guerrilla warfare in the city is as funny as why there was no large-scale resistance in Paris during World War II and why Nogi Nogi-nori wanted pigs to attack during the Russo-Japanese War. Taking a step back, a magically modified version of a superpower is so amazing that you, an eleven or twelve-year-old boy, are bossing you around. You really think you are Han Xin. In the end, the high-achieving leader was sent away again. On the road, he got involved with a scheming bitch on the pretext of making money. A chamber of commerce system actually thought that by controlling the bottom managers, it could indirectly control the entire chamber of commerce. This plot is not only somewhat similar to the first sequence, but the process is exactly the same as that of King of Darkness and Billions of Gods and Demons. The above are the shortcomings of the first two hundred pictures, and it is really uncomfortable to look at them later. This book cannot be called a dark novel at all. Although it kills decisively, it is really uncomfortable to read. It is not enjoyable in many places, and the logical party is even slapped in the face. In fact, the pleasure for readers is very simple. If you are wanted by the Tribunal after about 100 pages, and you escape, whether it is to join the Chamber of Commerce or the Royal Army, it will be more comfortable than staying in the empire all the time. That high-ranking magician Everyone knows that the director of the Law Enforcement Bureau is the hero of the kingdom. Based on this, even if the kingdom is not clean, it will still make people lick a favor or go directly to the academy when they have 200 cards. The talent of the protagonist will definitely win over him. No matter what, it is more practical than investing in a scheming bitch who even wants to be a free hand. A large chamber of commerce will never be controlled by low-level managers. This is a perfect subject, and as the author said, he doesn't care much about the readers' opinions and does not cater to the psychology of ordinary readers. The reason why readers like to kill decisively is precisely because reality is already difficult.

The protagonist doesn't feel like a time traveler at all, more like an aboriginal who wants to live. You said it's normal to kill someone to survive. Then, first kill Carlo's brother who had the grace to save his life, and then kill Carlo and the store manager. This is understandable. Just treat the protagonist as a selfish person, and then watch Carly, who saved him twice, be killed. You say this is something a normal person can do.

This is an alien military hegemony novel that talks about the alliance. Mages are dispensable. Those who come in for the word mage can leave.

The introduction is very misleading. After reading the introduction, I thought it was a cool article about killing people and stacking magic skills, but it turned out to be a cunning military war article, and the war plan is very childish. The protagonist seems to be a smart person, and a powerful country that relies on military strength is supported by the protagonist, a modern man with no military literacy. This is not a very exciting story, because the protagonist is stabbed in the back every day, and there is no crushing pleasure brought by rapid upgrades. As for the darkness, you can't tell, the world is like this.

A parody of Tanya's War

Suddenly I understood the author's writing ideas, and I would like to say a few words for the author in my humble opinion. I personally felt that I had an epiphany after reading the latest chapter. This is not a torture of the master, a trick of wisdom, or forced drama, none of this! But this is simply a game of LOL and not a fantasy hegemony! Reminds me of playing a ranked game: Level 1 team has a dream start of 5/0, stable! Stable? The whole team was swollen with level 2 soldiers and rushed the tower at level 3. In 4 minutes, they were all destroyed by ACE and all 4 lanes. It was too late to stabilize the mentality and develop with peace of mind. But as for the teammates, like Shi Lezhi, they went forward and fought against the opponent. All the players were at level 6, and within 10 minutes, it became a headwind start. Fortunately, the mentality in the early stage was relatively stable. We all felt sorry for giving away so much. We encouraged each other to develop and don't give away. We can win. After reaching level 6, the cooperation suddenly reached tacit understanding and through several waves of beautiful small team fights, the counterattack was completed. After taking down the dragon to harvest resources, the operation suddenly took off and the continuous killing rampage was super awesome. It was stable! Stable? When the time came to 20 minutes, everyone's IQ suddenly dropped. Suddenly, the big dragon appeared without any eyes, and exploded on the spot. There were 5 finishers, 3 outer towers, 2 highlands, and 1 wave returned to before liberation. Is it over? No! We have VN, we have weapons, we have Camille Galio, we have Thresh, and in the late stage, we are united as one to defend the high ground and drag the baron to let the little dragon guard the buff. The command suddenly has an IQ of 3000, and the field of vision suddenly lights up the jungle. The opponent cannot attack for a long time but loses his armor and armor. The crystal revives the baron and regenerates. The team destroys the opponent and takes the baron. VN has a 4-piece set, a 4-piece weapon set, and a 4-piece Camille set. Stable! Everyone, lie down. Is it stable? Is it all over? Will one push the next one? No! My intelligence has suddenly deteriorated. You all should get out of here. I, the weapons master, will go 1v5 today and die. Everyone, please kneel down and watch my VN riding alone today, 7 in and 7 out, and die. Boss Thresh predicts the magic hook and flies into the tower. A R5 pendulum of doom makes the newbie Galio tremble. Okay, the hero is here! Death. It's all over, nothing! Kamil sneaked out of the bottom lane, jumped back and jumped the tower alone, killed the support and removed the front teeth, forcing the opponent to return to defense. He turned back and cut off the line of troops. 1V3 Chun Gejia desperately replaced the ADC, and the building collapsed, but the vote to surrender was not passed. The team started to make noises, started typing on the keyboard to swipe the screen, VN weapons started, Galio was not happy, the old peacemaker Camille persuaded the two sides, okay, you guys play, the internal has been broken, and finally the divine equipment VN stood up, haha, we don't need him anymore, don't waste time, we can win, zoom in the dragon to get the ancient dragon, bathe in the dragon's blood, morale is like a rainbow, and attack the hub like a broken bamboo, stabilize! The battle between the 6 gods was shattered, from crystal to spring water, even 4V5 was not inferior. When the control burst was over, everyone sacrificed in exchange for VN to dominate the battlefield, kill with one kill! ! Double kill! ! Three kills! ! Four kills! ! Win! ! VN's IQ instantly turned negative and rushed to the spring! ! Shutdown! ! ! The air became quiet, just click surrender, smiling on the surface, you don't deserve to win, but MMP in my heart, the team exploded completely, Galio also hung up, the last dragon species of the enemy defended the base, the crystal resurrected 5 people to stand up and press the army, I don't believe it in VN, I can still show off in 3V5, I know what will happen afterwards, please update the next chapter...

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt pretty good. I thought it was dark and had no heroine, but suddenly I was cleared. It was like eating chocolate and suddenly being told that it was chocolate-flavored shit. In the end, the male protagonist shared his life with that princess, and his life was tied to others. You are still dark and wasting my feelings.

I originally thought that Tang San was already on the floor, but I didn't expect that this person was even more of a heavyweight.

，，，？ The general next to me, the second lieutenant commander are all stupid, right? In the Holy Kingdom, the Star Mage is a loyal minister, right? How many people know that the protagonist has established a contract with Thea? Carol didn't even know that he just came back? Are you still arguing everywhere? And also bewitched Thea to imprison the protagonist? Is this what loyal ministers did? Doing such a thing in the face of a powerful enemy is called a loyal minister? Are you still talking about the Holy Kingdom? The character design is broken, this is a pure dark novel, right? Why didn't Siya be killed earlier because she was a variable? Who is disgusting here? You know you shouldn't give away messy feelings, so why should you give? Can't we kill him sooner? Since you want to be pure black, don't do this You don't have the craziness that Xiaofa should have at all. Some book friends must have said it after reading this, it's just inherited skills or something Then listen up. After a soul in his twenties entered a different world to train for a year and was able to kill more than a dozen people for the first time without any change in psychology, why didn't he have the craziness of Xiaofa? Going a step further, why did you betray the empire despite having made so many contributions to the empire? Because the empire is targeting you? You have made so many meritorious deeds, why is the empire still targeting you? What's your last name? What kind of bullshit surname setting is so awesome and I don't even need this setting? Another thing: Since the mid-term has been completely black, you don't know Xiaofa's characteristics? Are you so confused about the fact that the more you kill, the higher your energy level will be? Why don't you just find a place to kill? The kingdom that the protagonist finally conquered was defeated by Siya. Why did she think she could defeat it? Just rely on a star mage? As a knight, Carol failed to fulfill her duty as a knight to protect Thea and deceived her into rebelling against the protagonist I think your book is almost as good as the Chronicles of a Young Girl and not as good as others. Your book Your book is poisonous, forcibly demoralizing, unreasonable, nc white text

This book disappointed me. Originally, it seemed that the setting was already to be powerful through killing and stacking spells, and the last small skill exploded instantly. However, the reality is that this guy relies on killing to level up, and can only level up by killing, regular practice is useless. How is this different from other monster-killing upgrades? It makes no difference if the protagonist changes the name of the cheat, such as the experience system or the Bloodline of the Son of Slaughter.

On the surface, it is a dark story about killing decisively, but in reality, it is a story about nagging Luo Liba and Suo Xiaobai before killing. He is eleven years old, one meter four and taller than a human chest. There was no golden finger in the early days. An ordinary child not only passed military training but also became the best. It's a bit too much.

Being sold like a dog all the time. Why can't we only live in this country? This is also worthy of being called a general. Almost like a dog.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 20. The protagonist is already a Level 2 professional, the shopkeeper Kabin is an adult and has lost his mind, and Leah is a 16-year-old child. After killing the two sons of the main character, the protagonist still remembers it and sighed! ! ! Then Leah died after being slapped by the shopkeeper. It was completely out of control.

After reading more than 20 chapters, there are a lot of poisonous points. Let's talk about two things. There was a problem with the team allocation in the early stage. In the casino mission later, when the protagonist disappeared, the army didn't care. The army's reaction was very poisonous.

Selling dog meat for sale is just a military novel

I'm so happy that I've read Chapter 16👍🏻, please read it slowly.