Pirate's Ape Fruit

Let's talk about this book. I'll read Chapter 20 and tell me about the problem with this book! The first point is the problem of strength estimation, and then I saw that in Chapter 20, they are going to fight a big pirate. (1 Strength estimation problem) It is written in the novel that my grandfather or the Warring States Period may not be able to defeat it. I don't say this about other people. If Garp is in the last era, will his strength be inferior to that of the previous Pirate King? One Piece has never appeared. You can say that 4 yellows are not as good as the other One Piece. Otherwise, why should he be the Pirate King? Whitebeard, who was of the same era as him, was on TV and could defeat Akainu with two punches, but the big pirate he is currently chasing is not even the Yonko. Tell me this, brother, you are a bit evil! (2 Points of personality) Even if your personality is not exactly the same as the one in the One Piece cartoon, you still have to reach 80%, right? This group of pirate fans doesn't seem to have the same taste at all. I've watched so many episodes of One Piece, and I've never seen this Ming brother show fear, okay? Also, he's such a guy in the Smoke Man cartoon, he's afraid of everything!

Emmmm, I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 22, and then I came to the comment area to see readers scolding the author.

There are a lot of poisonous points. First of all, Doflamingo actually wanted to increase his reputation by helping to defeat the Red Earl and become a Shichibukai (the original work was to steal the gold in the sky). Jack also has a Level 2 card, this setting is really disgusting

Looking at this power system, my old blood spurted out.

It's a mess, and I'm convinced. Is there someone who recommends book reviews?

I read a few chapters, what the hell, the abilities are a mess, the plot is a mess, there is no outline, no direction.

It was rare to find a Pirates fanfic with Luffy as the main character, and I read more than 40 photos of the first volume with anticipation. The timeline of the plot obviously doesn't match up. How could Luffy meet Peach Rabbit in the recruit camp when he goes to join the navy? The author thinks that this is not the way to block the harem. A lieutenant general at the candidate level of a general is only one generation behind the three generals. If you must find a way to collect Peach and Rabbit, it is almost like giving him a subordinate after graduating from Luffy's recruit camp. Want to raise a harem in the recruit camp. Luffy could meet Ain, the person with the retrograde fruit ability in the movie version, which is just fine, or he could meet Tashiki, but as for Peach Usagi, he is really inferior. Luffy was actually able to join forces with a group of fish-men heroes to cause trouble in the Draconian Holy Land and save the three empress sisters! I was really disappointed to see this. Author, do you really no longer need a plot timeline for the harem? This plot arrangement is too confusing. Another thing I have to complain about is that the author arranged a Saiyan fruit for the protagonist. If you don't develop your Super One, Super Two, and Super Three, why do you need such fancy things as ninjutsu, sword skills, and spear skills? Is there anything about pirates that Chaoichi can't solve with just one finger? Even if a black knife comes at you, it's enough for you to pretend to be B with just one finger. It is much higher than using ninjutsu such as Shinra Tensei, Sky Explosion and Earth Star! Overall, I am very disappointed, but I admire you, the author, for being able to write so many words. Come on! I hope the author can absorb the experience of this book and write another high-quality Luffy novel in the future.

Just for the fruit setting in Chapter 1, I must give it 5 stars.

This is the worst pirate novel I have ever read. Even the ones written by elementary school students are better than this one. This writing style can break through the most rubbish Nobel Prize in history.

I can tolerate any setting, but when I said Whitebeard II was Whitebeard's son, I really vomited.

What did you write? It's a mess. When you think of it, there's no logic at all.

Damn, with an eight-year-old body, you look like a god. In the first two chapters, you were still saying that you can only use Shinra Tenzheng once a day. But a month later, when you seduced the Red Earl, you Shinra Tenzheng was like a lousy street. Rain is slashing randomly, and what is even more outrageous is the ultimate move of the first Hokage, the wood escape secret technique, the birth of the tree world, and the arrival of the flower and tree world. You are as angry as the cheater. I don't have a problem with your skills, I have a problem with your body. Can't you wait two or three years and write like this? Wow, eight years old. We all know how short eight-year-old Luffy will be. You look like a god. Are you serious?

Except for the name, I can't feel a trace of the soul of One Piece.

There are several reasons why this book is not popular! First, the ability is too complex! If you want to get stronger, practice slowly. What kind of miscellaneous ninjutsu are you doing? When there is Qi, there is Wu Kong Technique, and the speed is fast enough to fly faster than supersonic speed! Second, weapons and equipment are redundant! It's a bonus, but it's obviously meaningless. Either you should master the sword or the gun! Now it's better to count the six abilities of ninjutsu, fruit, taijutsu, and ki. Thirdly, age, I don't know that a 7-year-old kid would still be challenged to a duel! Being more than ten years older, winning is disgraceful and losing is even more disgraceful! I'm so young and not in the Young Army Camp, so I don't know why I wrote it so casually! Obviously the military is a serious matter. Fourth, the author's personal issue is that the writing style deviates from the core. It can be said that there is no core at all. I looked at more than a dozen of them, and they looked awkward. A big gift package for beginners. The two weapons were a failure. They looked awkward when given the ninjutsu. They were a lot of miscellaneous things. They were not really useful yet. They were just decorations. Guns can't kill anyone! What's the point of paying for the sword?

It's a book that you don't want to read after reading the introduction. Most fanfics are written with original characters. Even if the characters in the novel are actually written, Luffy will not be chosen. After all, Luffy is the protagonist and has the most plot. Everyone knows what Luffy is like. It really makes people speechless when you write Luffy into such a ghost.

Are all current authors such studs? If you are not good at dating anyone, you must go to Taotu. Momotu is the same generation as the three great generals, and Oda positions her as a candidate for general, second only to the general. He is at least 20 years older than Luffy in age. The author said that Momo Usagi is interested in Luffy. Do you really take a good look at Pirates? Or the congestion has gone to my head -_-||

Just reading the introduction, I feel that the author of Qidian has made a new breakthrough 😰

This is the weakest Saiyan I've ever seen. He was given a cheat and then weakened without any thought, and he slipped away.

This book is the only book I have read in so many years that I want to complain about. It has a good subject matter, but it was ruined by the author. He is definitely not a pirate fan. It ruins the three views.

I didn't read it, I just read the introduction and the author's introduction. I can only say that nowadays cats and dogs can write novels. The author has nine works, and they are only first-level. I can't even imagine how bad they are. It's really just cats and dogs.

The introduction was okay, but when I clicked in and took a look, I found that the protagonist and Ace had only known each other for a few days. Since he was an acquaintance whom he had only known for a few days, why did he later take the risk of betraying the navy to teach an acquaintance who had only known him for a few days? I haven't read many chapters, but most of the women I know like the protagonist like him. What does it mean? Are you telling me this is Luffy?

What the hell is this written? This is the worst book I have ever seen.

You all get paid for the good reviews, right?

YYing Peach Rabbit is nothing, if you dare to YY the crane commander after Luffy went to sea, I will obey you.

Just read novels. Don't you know that if you don't like it, don't criticize it? How about you try writing it yourself? I think you may not be as good at writing as he is. If you don't want to read it, don't read it. Don't act like someone is forcing you to read it. Besides, why must the novel be the same as the anime? If it's really the same, then it's better to watch anime directly. Writing novels requires creativity and imagination. Otherwise, if you change the plot, I can write one to two million words in one day. Is it still the same saying "don't criticize if you don't like it"? A civilized person should behave like a civilized person and don't worry about trivial matters. Although pirates may be your belief, you can also have a private chat with the author, communicate with him, and persuade him to let him read the timeline and plot line. Of course the time traveler is a bug. So it's normal for the plot to be confusing and the time to be confusing. For example, I read a book about Naruto back then: the protagonist beat up Idaidai when he was 1 year old, kicked Madara when he was 5 years old, and punched the old man of Six Paths when he was 10 years old. Civilized people, don't worry about everything. 🙂🙂🙂🙂

This book is quite messy and the writing style is not very good. It should be a new author.

Momonosuke must die. Akainu suffers, suffering from the inability to answer phone bug. As the fifth emperor, why does Kisame Inikisaki often wake up from nightmares? Dragon Mingge became Big Mom's 43rd husband, who will the mysterious Tauren lord end up in? Is it the distortion of human nature or the loss of morality? Let us walk into the dirty land reincarnation from pirates

The timeline is so messed up, it's disgusting. This setting blinds the Saiyans.

The strongest fruit is designed, and the horizontal line contrast becomes the weakest person👎. It doesn't matter if he is weak, he is forced to lose his intelligence. What's the point of using traffic? Killing someone can cause a wave, and they've already been killed before killing. So, where's the logic? It's illogical to use such a powerful fruit to write a book

You don't need to be so miserable, Shen Nong tested the poison, the times are different and the views are different. It is normal for the novels in the past to have bad routines. If you read the first part of Douluo Dalu, you will also feel that it is a bit poisonous. Read the table of contents of the old novels to understand the plot. If you don't like it, don't read it.