The Immortal in Konoha

After some conversation, the blame was thrown to Danzo 😤. However, after reading the whole article, I found that the protagonist should hate the third generation the most.

It felt like it was superfluous. When I saw this, I almost couldn't help but order a fork. Obviously the previous thirteen chapters looked good.

A new book has been released, titled: Naruto: Kurayoshi. Welcome new and old friends to collect.

The author is really a talented person. After signing a contract for a book that started out as a warm and gentle book, he suddenly became bitter and resentful. If you had always been bitter and vengeful and ignored all sentient beings just for yourself, I would still look down upon you. However, this book seems to want to use warmth to heal the protagonist's wounded heart later on. Unmistakably poisonous. Have you ever eaten sugar-fried salted pork? Or salted watermelon.

Awesome! Don't read it at all, come and read it, it's so good, I believe it.

The rewrite is really good. Before adding the root, it was fine. But after adding the root, the male protagonist is very strange. He is more of a hot-blooded idiot than before. I even regarded him as the Naruto of the root... The training part of Gen is too weird, I don't feel its cruelty, I just feel very stupid. It feels like it was borrowed from Long Aotian's novels about ten years ago where he was first tortured and then invincible. After reading online articles for so many years, we just find it funny... Especially the protagonist's personality has become particularly abrupt at this time. I have no feelings about the death of the little girl. I just feel that the tools cultivated in this way have rebelled after just a few uses—— If you are still going to enter the root after rewriting and rewriting, it is recommended that the author do some normal training. Brainwashing that is hundreds of times crazier than what is shown on the surface is definitely needed (many Naruto fans say that the third generation likes brainwashing, but in fact it is very slight. The root has to keep its subordinates loyal after such cruel training, and the skills of the tongue are definitely not enough), and finally reverse it, but whether the author accepts it depends on his own ideas If you cannot write about the cruel training of human nature and physiology in the true sense, you might as well omit it and not write about it, but it will not appear so dramatic 😥

Doesn't cultivating immortals make you stronger? Won't resilience become stronger?

According to this kind of training, let alone Konoha, the population of the Fire Country is not enough to fill it.

I'm really looking forward to the protagonist embarking on the path of rebellion and joining Akatsuki!

The experience of being in the root is very unpleasant to read. If you make the readers unhappy, the readers will make the author unhappy. The book will be abandoned and disappeared! ! ! ! ! !

It's great to put the detonating talisman in the shuriken. What else is there to develop? Make a hidden hollow space in the handle, and then roll the detonating talisman into it. It's done. There is also the true function of detonating charms: they are versatile and concealed. They can be hidden on a piece of paper. They are small and can be overlapped. Thousands of them can be carried without any problem. When fighting against enemies, they can be placed on the enemy without knowing what they are doing.

Turning stone into gold is the ability to change matter, isn't it? It can turn the enemy's body into stone, and as a support, it can turn ordinary metal into chakra conductive metal. Do you think this is useless? Also, the bravery of changing one's body shape is not an illusion in the art of transformation. People can change their body shape for real. If you are a low-level person, you can become smaller with a knife and become bigger with a fist. However, if you are a more advanced person, you can't learn the rubber fruit.

It is obvious that a normal graduation can give you a few more years of self-improvement, but you have to rely on the so-called training for quick success. I don't want to think about the damage to the body's foundation by participating in cruel training at a young age. It is obviously a kind of training that squeezes the body when it is to lay the foundation for physical growth. What about after being 25 strong at that time? After 45, do you have to wait until you pee blood in middle age to learn Muay Thai?

When Naruto begins, Konoha is in a state of sluggishness. The talent of the protagonist and the training of an excellent Hokage can be seen. The IQ of the key three generations and Danzo can be seen. It is also written in the book that they value the protagonist. Are they ready to be ruined like this? What's funny, the third generation died. If it weren't for Naruto's mouth escape, Konoha wouldn't even have a boss. Even if Danzo or Jiraiya, Tsunade, Kakashi and other veteran jounin took over, what about the next generation of Hokage (the key point is that none of these people are suitable)? Among the characters in the first phase of the protagonist, Naruto was a scumbag and a Jinchuriki at the time. Unless the upper echelons of Konoha traveled through time, no one thought he could be the Hokage. Sasuke's identity was impossible. The Twelve were the best in the new batch, but none of them were better than the protagonist. Are you counting on Konohamaru? Or the unknown unborn child of Konoha Village? The protagonist's identity and talent are an enhanced version of the fourth generation. When the fourth generation was in school, Konoha was in great glory, and there was no need to worry about someone taking over, but how did Konoha train the fourth generation at that time? At this time, a new Hokage has finally appeared, just like this? No one in the whole village is thinking about the heir? If the third generation does not die violently, and if he has to retire after another ten years of work, Konoha will be disbanded on the spot? After working hard all day long on jade, I finally got a jade embryo, which I took to the bricklayer to polish and prepare for use as tiles.

It was originally good, but I had to add roots to write about the psychological process. The poison was so unclear that I could only wait until he got out. It must have been a lot of mental journeys. I jumped to read it.

After reading it, I feel like I want to continue reading, but there is no way to update it. Regarding the abusive protagonist, this is a process of repression and release. The best solution is to update as soon as possible so that readers can read as soon as possible to release this depression, or add other plots to relieve the depression, but it cannot be too long. As for readers who are dissatisfied, that is for sure, and I am dissatisfied myself. I just hope that the author can solve the plot of the abusive protagonist as soon as possible, so as not to lose the popularity of the book.

. . . I wouldn't watch it if it had a heartless protagonist.

You said before that you didn't want cannon fodder, so you didn't want to brainwash him. Then you emphasized to him that he shouldn't have feelings and took drugs with serious side effects. Wasn't it a joke?

In the magical power collection building, the protagonist is about to develop magical powers. If you have any magical powers you want, you can express your opinions in this building. Requirements: It can't be too buggy, and it can't exceed the Hokage's power specifications. Authors of suitable supernatural powers will consider adding them.

The author is a eunuch. The basic training is to completely erase the self. He has a lot of prohibitions on him. He is basically treated as a machine and will be destroyed if it does not perform tasks. The protagonist thinks that he is special.

Come on

Come on

Come on

Come on, I like it very much

Come on, I like it very much

How do you pronounce the protagonist's name? I don't know that word. . .

Two copies of Eunuch, it's time for you to change your vest

The early stage is very important to attract readers, and I skipped this section to read it.

Come on, I like it very much

Author, human immortals, earth immortals, and heavenly immortals are not realms, but immortals cultivated in three different ways of practice. That is to say, these are just three ways of practice. To give a simple example, the three are all immortals. The difference is the difference between being raised by a biological mother, being raised by a stepmother, and whether a father does not love his mother or not.