Kurayoshi of Konoha

Oh my god, you have to persevere. Seeing that the immortal has tricked me, I will look for a new book, but it turns out that your new book is also a eunuch 😰

What a chicken, raising immortals. I came back to see the results and said that I need to rewrite it. I took another look at the rewrite, and it turned out to be a eunuch...

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Not as good as the first book. Well:-(

It's not that exciting to watch. Although it doesn't necessarily have to be a short story, reading the book is from the perspective of the protagonist, and some people will feel like they are involved. This book doesn't seem to be attractive, but the previous books made people feel a little...

And he had to tell Ruri about Kakashi's feelings after Obito's fake death? Do you know that the assessments for each team in Naruto's class were different?

Will there be supernatural powers in the new books here?

Brother, you should change the cover of your book. It's too ordinary.

It's a bit dull now, come on

Then I felt that the ideas and methods of Pig's Foot were two people. It looked like they were working hard but they were actually thinking about it on their own. It was really embarrassing to interact with that loli. I think Pig's Foot wrote it like this on purpose. The feeling of the anime was completely different from what Pig's Foot was thinking at the beginning. The preface may not match the postscript, but I believe the author understands the general meaning.

The title of the author's book is not as good as the previous one! !

That Immortal book is better, but I don't like the character of Pig's Knuckle in this book. It feels like a joke, and it doesn't behave like an adult or a time-traveler.

Why do people say that immortals are good-looking, but not this one? Immortals have been banned. Why?

Author, are you still writing the last one?

Can you add more? It's so beautiful. . .

I don't like the part about practicing Rasengan Rasengan is a high-density chakra that rotates at high speed It is the ultimate change of chakra's attributeless form. Let's not talk about the large amount of chakra required for practice. That's high-density chakra rotating at high speed. Hitting the enemy will destroy the enemy's body If you hold it in your own hands, it will also destroy your own hands. The ultimate change in chakra pattern It also takes years to practice The protagonist's current chakra control ability and form changes simply cannot meet the training foundation of the Rasengan. Probably not even able to break a water balloon.